2012-04-26, 20:08 | Link #30047 |
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Join Date: Sep 2011
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I'm about nearly done with Laura's next daydream chapter, and I'd like advice on it. It's more of an introspective part where Laura and Ichika narrates their thougths of one another after their first week as training partners. Very little dialogue actually happens.
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2012-04-27, 00:00 | Link #30051 |
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Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Inside your head
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^ That was awesome
First it's opened with non-sequitur gag, while seemingly unrelated, it highlight how all-female unit full of horny teen would be very dangerous if you insert enough rule of funny. Laura's confusion about her feelings, and how she's trying to justify it logically (don't work at all, which makes it funnier) Ichika was a little more attentive and positive than canon, I think I like this change. And the Stinger with Chifuyu is priceless.
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2012-04-27, 04:59 | Link #30057 |
That one guy
Join Date: Nov 2011
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No... I don't mean a fanfic that is driven by OCs. I just mean introducing OCs...
The title would be something like IS: First Impressions. The premise would be "Ichika meeting other people in ISA for the first time." So the plot, or lack of it, is all about episodic encounters with random people AKA the OCs. |
2012-04-27, 05:19 | Link #30060 |
I am no one
Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Inside your head
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I say outrageous because I talked with one of the most stuck up critic in this fandom.
"This franchise's selling point is the girls. When people insist inserting overpowered male character as projection of their so-called manly ego, I was like... . On the other hand, changed the canon characters is relative fine, even if it's out of character. Inserting female character are fine and dandy so long as they don't get more than they deserve" If they got more development than the canon characters, that's just sad. Of course MYSELF is none to talk considering the list of my OC, who tend to stole spotlight when they appear, the only factor limiting that is that they appear rarely.
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