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Old 2012-05-18, 06:53   Link #31041
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Ofcourse it's a skill, but it's still the main feature of the Rafael Revive.

Just because it's gimmick is the number of bus slots.
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Old 2012-05-18, 07:02   Link #31042
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More like "a skill required to make Rafael a game changer" otherwise you're right, the skill and that unit is an excellent combination
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Old 2012-05-18, 08:16   Link #31043
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It gets worse... the anti-matter engine is only attatched to Byakushiki. Since the bus slots are already full, they could only squeeze in enough data for a reactor regulating program. So in effect, it's physically equipped but not really part of the Byakushiki so it can't be quantized. This is all good because the whole point was only for a demonstration that the engine could provide energy on level of an IS core and more.

Problem is... Byakushiki got really comfy with it. It undergoes a half-shift where it assimilates the engine...
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Old 2012-05-18, 09:30   Link #31044
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Hmm... Should I or should I not...?
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Old 2012-05-18, 10:10   Link #31045
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@stratos: do wut?
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Old 2012-05-18, 10:17   Link #31046
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Thinking of opening the previous Athena stories to anon reviews...

Maybe not for now.

Speaking of which, no comment on the mech sketches or my take on a next Dunois Corp unit?
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Old 2012-05-18, 10:21   Link #31047
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@ Demi
So long as you portray it 'right'. Meaning Plot power + Common sense > Actual Science

@ Stratos
Hmm, I don't see any problem with anon review, other than you can't contact them back (as Box said)
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Old 2012-05-19, 02:58   Link #31048
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Slow day.......
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Old 2012-05-19, 03:02   Link #31049
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Currently thinking of some scene but unable to put it in the sheet
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Old 2012-05-19, 03:07   Link #31050
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Same here. Need to refine the whole confrontation scene where Kanzashi tries to apologize for ditching Saito. Unlike the draft, he doesn't say "I forgive you" immediately. More like:

"I'm tired. Tired of....pretending we're a happy family. I do that enough back in our own time. Let's just.....forget this ever happened, okay mo-" He took a deep breath head and shook his head quickly. "....Kanzashi?"
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Old 2012-05-19, 03:23   Link #31051
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Speaking of which, what's your problem?
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Old 2012-05-19, 03:31   Link #31052
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The wording

I really, really want to use TP POV this time, but the more I think about what to write, the more I realize my stile making the characters emotionless, talking & living properties.

OTOH if I use "Lemon" style narrative, it's a bit better, especially due to the comedic nature of the story. So I rewrite it again....
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Old 2012-05-19, 03:33   Link #31053
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Depends on the scene itself. By the way, I've found first person past tense works pretty well.
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Old 2012-05-19, 21:56   Link #31054
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Fanfics spoted!

Blue Wings Red Angel

Infinite Stratos Into The Eternal Climate
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Old 2012-05-20, 02:30   Link #31055
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The Sky is no Limit got an update, I have to say his Substitute Stratos concept works really well.

Though I'm having a hard time imagining the Uchigane Hana-B's appearance based on his description.
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Old 2012-05-20, 03:36   Link #31056
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Almost done with Tabane's daydream. 2681 words and counting.
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Old 2012-05-20, 05:11   Link #31057
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Are Crepes date food?
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Old 2012-05-20, 05:15   Link #31058
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^ Anything can be date food.

But the crepe thing is a good idea, it's what Charlotte and Laura had on their date...I think.
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Old 2012-05-20, 05:17   Link #31059
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That wasn't a date, that was normal girl on girl quality time. Anyway, I made Tabane hyper and Ichika more snarky Kuu's the Only sane man.
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Old 2012-05-20, 05:25   Link #31060
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Can a Shift occur mid-battle? Like when the IS is still active and in use?
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