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Old 2012-06-08, 22:06   Link #32061
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@ Demi - How is "You can make the location vague or randomize it since it doesn't matter" vague? It's not like I said "Well, you can do this or that and maybe it'll turn up good". Look, just put a location in. Think of it this way: Does putting a deserted island on the southern part of the map somehow drastically change things if you had placed it on the southern part of the map? No? Then place the damn thing wherever. Yes? Then make a choice and stick with it. If you still don't think that helps, then fine. I'd rather not go back to sugarcoating again.

@ Destiny - The entire thing kinda genre shifts from Gundam to Alien, kinda like the Assassins Creed series shifting from Templars VS Assassins to Aliens and 2012. Just be sure to make it subtle, not have some random glowy thing say "I'm an alien!"

The OC is okay and I don't see too many glaring flaws, though I'll warn you right now that male OC's are already disliked since there was a Crapload of over the top Male pilots and that this is a harem show, so people get testy on more males showing up. Just a fair warning. All of us have to deal with it and find loopholes to get out of the prejudice.

The weapon, on the other hand, kinda renders Akatsubaki useless since it's main role is to give Ichika energy, which he won't need if he uses the Fuyutsuki effectively.
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Old 2012-06-08, 22:18   Link #32062
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Thing is... canonball fast happens at the town where ISA is. So if it was mentioned where ISA is then damn. If not, then I can just go trigger happy over where it happens.
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Old 2012-06-08, 22:23   Link #32063
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There you go, now you're being specific: ISA takes place in Odaiba, I think. Senpai posted an image before about a shopping mall found there that looks eerily like the one Ichika goes to.
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Old 2012-06-08, 22:45   Link #32064
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Finally. Hallelujah! Thanks era-era XD
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Old 2012-06-08, 23:00   Link #32065
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Why didn't you just say "Where's Cannonball fast"? That would've made things ten times more simple.
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Old 2012-06-08, 23:05   Link #32066
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Hey, been busy yesterday.

@ Eras
Yes, it's plain abuse. Then again, that practice is rooted as far as Harem genre go.

@ Demi
Yes, you can, make it like this
I.S.A. Airspace, Odaiba, 1200 Hour (or something)

I always use this kind of stamp in my TLRS Draft, but it was never used in ST.

@ Kakeru
Already summed up by eras, when you make a male OC, he is labeled Stu unless proven otherwise, your concept so far stated that no, he isn't. The idea about alien is risky, indeed, similar to what happen in Gundam 00 movie. For 30+ years of it, alien simply absent. It could be good or bad decision, with there's nothing in between.

As for male I.S. pilot, it traced more than a year, ever since this very subforum is created. Can't change anything much.

Fuyutsuki is interesting idea, and I don't agree with Eras with this one. Fuyutsuki is ideal for a duel battle where Houki didn't participate at all. There's enough limitation there that Military advisor will consider the weapon not worth the effort.
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Old 2012-06-08, 23:05   Link #32067
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D:... I didn't say something to the effect of "where is canonballfast held?"
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Old 2012-06-08, 23:16   Link #32068
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Nope, you mentioned cannonball fast in a closed parenthesis. After that you just kept asking "Should I write location" or other questions.

I didn't see "Can you tell me where cannonball fast is being held?"

@ Senpai - I just thought of something for FI: Wouldn't it be a bad influence for the kids if they see their parents acting like.....that?
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Old 2012-06-08, 23:21   Link #32069
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@ Eras & Demi
And thus the personal debate continues

Pick one, ambiguous (Cannonball Fast Location) or not (Odaiba/I.S.A. airspace/whatever)

@ Eras
Yes, bad influence.
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Old 2012-06-08, 23:32   Link #32070
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@ Senpai - You alright? You seem stressed.
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Old 2012-06-08, 23:39   Link #32071
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Nah, not that bad, just annoyed about slow Internet, itself caused by bad weather (being based on CDMA and all). That's the reason I didn't came yesterday, aside from being busy.
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Old 2012-06-08, 23:52   Link #32072
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Quote:
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About canonball fast. I don't know where it is and I sort of use the

(time)(place)

(story)

format when I cut to other scenes. Should I just write Tokyo?
this was the original form of the question O.O

Either way, I'll try to be more straightforward too.

How much of a bastard is a guy if he says that the only redeeming quality of the girl that makes him save said girl time and again is because she's his?
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Old 2012-06-08, 23:57   Link #32073
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Either he's a dick, or he's a tsundere. Take your pick:/

@ Senpai - Is Kanzashi ever violent?
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Old 2012-06-09, 00:01   Link #32074
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^ Typical Shoujo boyfriend?

This kind of man is either super popular or ostensibly hated depending on the portrayal, but still, more often than not the heroine fall for him :|

It can be compensated that he's putting the jerk mask so that everyone don't want to be close to him, and he really has a line of morality not to be crossed. Still a flaw, but considerably justified than being pure asshole.
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Old 2012-06-09, 00:28   Link #32075
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FF.net has a search bar now, too good to be true.
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Old 2012-06-09, 00:29   Link #32076
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@ Eras
Didn't she slap Ichika once? That's actually still within reasonable too, unlike... well, everyone else?
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Old 2012-06-09, 00:30   Link #32077
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Didn't she slap Ichika once? That's actually still within reasonable too, unlike... well, everyone else?
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Old 2012-06-09, 00:42   Link #32078
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Double post sir D:

would it be surprising if Gentarou is the one asking Chifuyu to give him directions in a fight?
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Old 2012-06-09, 00:48   Link #32079
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@ Senpai - That's it? No over the top minigun bursts?
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Old 2012-06-09, 01:34   Link #32080
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@ Demi
No

As for DP, I already said bad Internet => things went awry

@ Eras
Yes
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