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Old 2005-12-22, 18:47   Link #1
Sakura-chan
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[Parachutes]

GAH. I've been bad, I was slacking from this site for forever
But I have some new stuff~
Spoiler for Uno:

Spoiler for Ni:

Spoiler for Tres:
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Old 2005-12-23, 09:58   Link #2
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Ni i think is the coolest...wow.....*eyes stuck on the art"
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Old 2005-12-23, 10:02   Link #3
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oo i like uno-ness looks great!

ni is scary *hides the pic* eep

tres is pointy but true
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Old 2005-12-23, 10:41   Link #4
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I like tres~~ Accept her elbow is a bit funny looking @_@;
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Old 2005-12-23, 17:31   Link #5
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Uno: Very nice for a pencil drawing. The shading's great! Hmm, I think his neck's a bit long, though. Something seems amiss where his head connects to the neck.

Ni: That's dark. Eeks, his eyes creep me out; but hey, that's good. ^_^ I like the intensity.

Tres: She needs more hip. Maybe it's because of the side view, but the shoulder-to-hip proportions looks off to me... Otherwise, her upper-body is fluidly drawn. What is she wearing in her hair?
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Old 2005-12-23, 23:33   Link #6
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Sarrah - Thanks, I think it looks cool too xD
Uchiha rave - I think that's the best way to describe my anime style, "pointy"
Muuko - I think it is too... I should be flatter or something x_x
Li Jianliang - Thank you <3
I agree, there's something definitaly wrong with his neck, but I only realised that when I started shading it - the only way to fix it was to start over /too lazy/
Funny, 2 wasn't supposed to be "scary" at all. I guess I just can't draw nice people, they always end up being creepy stalker xD
and for 3, it was supposed to be a weird perspective/pose thingie, that I guess didn't work out (and the thing in her head is supposed to be melted dimes and crumpled dollar bills, but I guess I'm not good enough to draw macabre stuff yet xD)
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Old 2005-12-24, 00:34   Link #7
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The funny thing about a face is, small changes here and there can make a person look completely different and the margin of acceptance for beauty is slim to none.

I am going to just nitpick, and say that her upperlip shouldn't be bigger then her lower lip, and that the neck should be bending foward and never completely straight.
The human head shape is hard to explain so just refer to my correction.

I took the liberty to go over your drawing and drew over it to show some corrections. If you have questions feel free to ask.

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Old 2005-12-24, 18:17   Link #8
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Pic 2 is definitely my fav, looks freakin' sinister man. With the first one (pencils), if really like the face (the expression is great) and the shading, but from the upper chest and shoulders down the anatomy is screwed up, but otherwise it’s a really nice piece. The third is cool also, as some said the hip needs to be a bit more pouty.

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Old 2005-12-25, 07:46   Link #9
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asuka i agreeeeeeee
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Old 2005-12-25, 16:54   Link #10
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AsukiAnio > thank you~ Maybe now I'll be able to draw necks normally
Dokuganryu > From the shoulders down there's not really supposed to be any anatomy, it was supposed to be just fading out. Or something. o.o
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Old 2005-12-25, 17:38   Link #11
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AsukiAnio > thank you~ Maybe now I'll be able to draw necks normally
Dokuganryu > From the shoulders down there's not really supposed to be any anatomy, it was supposed to be just fading out. Or something. o.o
yeah it wouldn't be a problem if the pic just faded out like that, but you've put the hand in there, which throws the anatomy off.
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Old 2005-12-25, 21:22   Link #12
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yeah it wouldn't be a problem if the pic just faded out like that, but you've put the hand in there, which throws the anatomy off.
._. all of the body, including the arm/sleeve is fading. Except for the hand. I thought that was okay to do, but I guess it's not ._.
But really there's a lot of stuff that's wrong with that drawing - and all of my stuff. Perfect anatomy is not what I'm going for ._.
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Old 2005-12-26, 19:03   Link #13
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i love the second one ~~~9/10 for western style....
and the top one 7/10

female...~~i donno....not my style...can't rate~
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