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Old 2012-07-23, 08:03   Link #34601
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@ Demi
Sounds like a good plan for April mop

@ Eras
Depends, are you concerned with word count or speed of plot?
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Old 2012-07-23, 08:23   Link #34602
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Word count mostly. I'm reaching 4000 and I'm only in one part.
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Old 2012-07-23, 08:29   Link #34603
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My advice: You'll need to split it if it's more than 1.5 times your usual chapter for that fic.

For example, if your usual standard is 3000, then you better split if it's 5000 words. It works for me most of the time
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Old 2012-07-23, 08:35   Link #34604
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Yeah, my standard is 3000. Lately my fics have been reaching 5k in limits. Must be all that pointless description I love putting in.

Speaking of which, can I post a draft for you to read?
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Old 2012-07-23, 08:39   Link #34605
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Don't say it pointless Actually, I envy you since my fic somehow shrunk to 4000 compared to 8000 as usual, because the LACK of exposition.

Yeah sure why not?
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Old 2012-07-23, 09:10   Link #34606
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Here:

Spoiler:
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Old 2012-07-23, 09:18   Link #34607
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Extremely rich, 10/10

See? This is why I said it's not pointless. Those description make the scene more comprehensible and easier for reader to imagine. As usual, the character's emotion are drawn clearly. Now I understand why you said Ichika is flat
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Old 2012-07-23, 09:20   Link #34608
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Yeah, too bad my description when it came to places and locations is extremely lacking.
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Old 2012-07-23, 09:55   Link #34609
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Is it confusing when one keeps switching between POVs?
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Old 2012-07-23, 09:59   Link #34610
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I dunno, I do that myself in Sacred Twins.
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Old 2012-07-23, 10:01   Link #34611
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Another Ichika question. Is it really the whole kidnapping thing that made him a spineless wimp?
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Old 2012-07-23, 10:08   Link #34612
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Yeah, it destroy his confidence and stuff related to that.
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Old 2012-07-23, 10:12   Link #34613
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It doesn't seem to be referenced too heavily so I keep forgetting about that. That means I'm going to have to rethink that Ichika arc. *huff*
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Old 2012-07-23, 20:05   Link #34614
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PT is semi confirmed to be the one to kidnap him. Autumn calls it their "grand reunion" when they see each other.

Side note - How weird is it to be freaked put by big boobs?
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Old 2012-07-23, 20:23   Link #34615
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I myself probably freaked out :|

Though, by anime logic, other guy will looks weird at it.
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Old 2012-07-24, 01:30   Link #34616
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Hmm well.. PT mook in an Infinite Cosmos who suddenly shoots up the ranks due to his high affinity with cosmic energy. Just so happens to remember Ichika from that time. seems like good material.

How big are we talking about here? I can understand if they get about the size of real melons but if it's watermelons then I'm just gonna stare and go catatonic.
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Old 2012-07-24, 01:36   Link #34617
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*Fridge logic kick*
If [Panzer Igel] is so heavy it couldn't float, how the hell it can fought above ocean?

*Checkov's gun time*
It has a hueg physical shield, he could always surf
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Old 2012-07-24, 01:37   Link #34618
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that has to be one huge shield or else you'll still sink.

Archimedes says hi XD
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Old 2012-07-24, 02:03   Link #34619
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Well, with PIC, it's light enough to float on water like a giant balloon, moving on the other hand, you need a stable platform and thus a surfboard. Just that it couldn't be air-light like most I.S. do thus no infinite hover
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Old 2012-07-24, 02:05   Link #34620
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random babbling:

Korea IS and military technology is probably more advance than the rest of the world.

Reason being: North and South are in Cold War.....IS aggregated and accelerated their issues....

North Korea wanted South Korea's IS core.....which in return make South Korea start preparing for war....

North Korea has no qualm about researching on more "illegal" stuff such as Valkyrie Trance...etc.

South Korea is researching on equally destructive IS technology..... because there is a information that the North Korea is researching into something dangerous......
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