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Old 2012-08-06, 18:45   Link #801
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Two pages to finish the new appendix.
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Old 2012-08-13, 06:29   Link #802
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1 page and the comic everyone wait will be complete.
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Old 2012-08-13, 14:30   Link #803
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GOOD! Should be interesting!
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Old 2012-08-17, 11:16   Link #804
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Comic complete, now the text.
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Old 2012-08-21, 08:12   Link #805
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Tomorrow the new comic will be online.
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Old 2012-08-22, 14:43   Link #806
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Here the appendix, a comic I did years ago, but now totally fixed, the first time Lelouch and Kallen made love during their new life.
Beware, total nudities and a sex act:

http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...n25.53aeng.jpg
http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...n25.53beng.jpg
http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...n25.53ceng.jpg
http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...n25.53deng.jpg
http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...n25.53eeng.jpg
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Old 2012-08-22, 19:08   Link #807
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EXCELLENT! Just the right amount of "show and tell" without going over the top!
Anybody that has a problem with this has been living in a convent!
Keep up the great work!
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Old 2012-08-22, 21:53   Link #808
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The only things that looked... debatable were from panel D, and even then, not so much unless one was a gigantic prude.

The closeup of Kallen's hymen looked more like something from a plantlife nature documentary. The panel actually showing Lelouch and Kallen in coitus looked likea panel out of a dirty manga, but the word ballons cover most everything. In addition, the sweatiness of them adds a dimension of realism one doesnt see in ink-and-paint pornography. So while not safe for work or to be seen by youngsters, it's all right by me.
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Old 2012-08-23, 09:34   Link #809
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NSFW imagery aside, tt's how I sort of imagined Lelouch would approach sex (in the beginning, at least) if he wasn't being his evil, calculating self. It's like he's doing it out of obligation and his duty as a husband-figure to Kallen. It'll take a while more before he'll grow out of his clumsy, awkward way of loving, and I mean this in the romantic way.
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Old 2012-08-26, 18:00   Link #810
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Seems my store liked.

Now I started a new one, the plan is finish it for 9th september, when I'll go to a comic convention with my stand.

However the story is Kallen go with Scarlet to a comic convention in Columbus to find stuff she need for the commissions, at last it will become a sort of realistic opinion about what is good and what bad about comic conventions.

The first page is complete already, with the presence of: gurren lagann, asterix, johnny bravo, lupin the third, The Grim Adventures of Billy & Mandy and astroboy.
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Old 2012-08-27, 06:29   Link #811
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honestly i kinda hated this story purely because lelouch losing to schneizel is kinda WTF moment and schneizel saying lelouch needs help to kill him lol. lastly him being alive purely due to the mercy of others is worse than being dead. kallen and lelouch bit is just about the only thing worthwhile in this story.
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Old 2012-08-27, 06:59   Link #812
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But in fact, that's the idea, Lelouch couldn't do more without help of other people, and considering what he did, a punishment worst of the death was obvious.

In japan culture, to make suicide after a error is a honorable way to ask sorry, instead for our ideology is a stupid and coward act, like a escape from responsabilities.
Instead still continue to live after what he did seems a mercy act, instead they know live with that weight was the right punishment.
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Old 2012-08-27, 13:22   Link #813
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theres just one thing ur forgetting that is lelouchs pride. and the amount of pride hes got goes a long way. i mean for him getting the mercy of people who he looked down on and thought of as pawns is just sad. Dont ever forget "Pride" man, thats why i said even he would think its better of being dead.

but i do agree with him and kallen. if he wasn't dead <or alive for some people>your story with them both would be completely true
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Old 2012-08-27, 18:22   Link #814
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I not really forgot about Lelouch's pride, but I just "suppressed" it with all the surprise-events happened in a single day, so, with c.c death and kallen injured he lost coolness and for the hurry he fought schneizel without think a real plan.

Cause the coma, he couldn't know how events and people changed and at last he was involved in the situation c.c created to save his life.
At last Lelouch was framed, try to make something was equal to hurt Kallen and he will never do it again, never....resigned, he accepted the new life.
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Old 2012-08-27, 19:07   Link #815
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your story is all good but it dosent show lelouch characteristics at all, pride is his main factor he would never suppress it.

maybe someday there will be a season 3 with lelouch ending up with kallen like in your story that that seems next to impossible, but one can hope
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Old 2012-08-27, 19:25   Link #816
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And yet if he had shown his pride they would have executed him in the spot!
By suppressing it, it allowed him to live and be with one who truly loved him and sacrificed her own life for him.
As for this coming to pass in a possible 3 installment, we can only wish it shall be.
And for me Bonzo's story kind of bring to life the saying from the animated Transformers movie:"Till All Are One!" and in this case things have come full circle and all is one again in their world!
@Bonzo; Looking forward to the next installment. This one WILL be interesting since I've never been to a comic con.
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Old 2012-08-28, 05:48   Link #817
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About the comic-con story, I'm drawing page 2, where Kallen is witness of a cheats in a model-kit contest, event very common in Italian contests.
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Old 2012-08-28, 21:11   Link #818
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all im saying is that he probably would have chosen to be executed that ditch his pride.
anyways there was a news on that a movie for lelouch was confirmed, so if its showing a sequel to the events from R2 then we will see whether lelouch will end up with kallen <which i really want> but if it happens that he is immortal then he will be with CC forever no doubt about it

but then again this new movie in production can be just a retelling of the events that happened in CG to piss everyone off and get money
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Old 2012-08-29, 05:25   Link #819
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Page 2 done, now page three, about cosplay.
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Old 2012-08-29, 18:13   Link #820
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Page 2 done, now page three, about cosplay.
Cosplay and models! COOL! This is going to be a fun read!
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