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Old 2012-08-06, 19:22   Link #36821
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Okay, here we go again...

Magical Lyrical G-Squad

Chapter 5: Enemy Hands


In which the Bureau expedition begins to move, and Lindy has a delightful conversation with a North Korean General...

Previous chapters can be found here.

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Old 2012-08-06, 20:46   Link #36822
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Nanya, Iron, Kaijo: Great writing as usual from the resident authors. Its always a pleasure to come in here and read a good adventure, romance or action story from this board.

Raiser: I am looking forward to you finishing your work. And I agree. Don't spoil it unless you don't intend to finish it. Been waiting for sometime, but I am sure in the end will be worth it.

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Old 2012-08-07, 00:49   Link #36823
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Another drabble that I wrote most of at... 4 or 5 in the morning because I couldn't sleep.

I sorta just... wrote. Not really sure where it came from or why, but here it is.

And yes, the next chapter of Swords and Shields is currently being beta'd. Again.

Spoiler for Waiting:
Nice execution, your way of words are as heavy and weighted as they were in your stories.

But

Agh, too emotional and cuddly at the same time... Must... ....maintain ....sugar levels to fight... diabetes-

@Kaijo: OMG, I think you are one of the very few authors who has made Lindy bomb-shell-crazy-awesome. She's like Belldandy who had her blood injected with a Honey Badger's gland.

And it's very rare to see f91 in this page, I wish you'd update soon with Jikan or Daemon Kaizer.

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Old 2012-08-07, 00:52   Link #36824
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So after getting both Skyrim and Dawnguard, I naturally had to wait a bit for mods and game bugs to be sorted out and the like. I saw this as the perfect opportunity to get some writing done--I am hilariously close to getting the next chapter of MercenarieS out, as well as having some good material to try and get The State of Affairs rolling again so some of you can find out who Fate was cheating with.

Prime time for my computer to get a virus that can't be removed by amateurs or by remote and requiring to take it into the shop, huh?
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Old 2012-08-07, 01:10   Link #36825
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And it's very rare to see f91 in this page, I wish you'd update soon with Jikan or Daemon Kaizer.
Indeed. For the curious, I have this thread bookmarked at page 1706.

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Prime time for my computer to get a virus that can't be removed by amateurs or by remote and requiring to take it into the shop, huh?
Running an anti-virus in safe mode usually does the trick.
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Old 2012-08-07, 01:33   Link #36826
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Running an anti-virus in safe mode usually does the trick.
Yeah, already tried that and it didn't work. Well, it did, getting rid of the most prominent problem (a scareware called LiveSecurity Platinum, that actually deleted one of my AV programs first), but left this particular set of viruses--a trojan called BCMiner and two instances of rootkit.0access--neither of which can't be removed through normal means and I'd need some way of accessing Windows without actually turning it on to remove it without it replicating itself.

So yeah. No writing, no anime, no games, no nothing for me for at least a week.
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Old 2012-08-07, 02:12   Link #36827
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@Old_Iron At first I thought it was a chapter relating SoS but then realized it's just a OneShot and awwww, so cute. Though I'd like to know their age, because 'invincible and adorable Hayate -chan' doesn't sound like what she'd say post-StrikerS, or even before StrikerS.

@Kaijo ... A North Korean General...?
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Old 2012-08-07, 03:18   Link #36828
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@Old_Iron At first I thought it was a chapter relating SoS but then realized it's just a OneShot and awwww, so cute. Though I'd like to know their age, because 'invincible and adorable Hayate -chan' doesn't sound like what she'd say post-StrikerS, or even before StrikerS.
This would be during or after Force. So they're at least mid-20's.

And I put in the 'invincible and adorable Hayate-chan' line because sometimes something a little goofy is needed. A little bit of comforting silliness to help reassure each other.
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Old 2012-08-07, 06:35   Link #36829
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This took WAY too long to write. =/

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Spoiler for Blood That Flows - ViVid 17:
"You should see your grand-daughter, mother. Vivio's so lively. I'm sure you'd love her." ~ Does BtF!Erio doesn't count, little Erio who couldn't bear leave Fate's side and was upset to the thought of not being home when Fate returned to Earth after a mission?

I see what you did now, it isn't Levi's style to leave flowers in Precia's grave. Specially after stealing the body. However, I expected the body being stolen way earlier as I think right now (or any time post-StrikerS must be quite a way discomposed)


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Another drabble that I wrote most of at... 4 or 5 in the morning because I couldn't sleep.

I sorta just... wrote. Not really sure where it came from or why, but here it is.

And yes, the next chapter of Swords and Shields is currently being beta'd. Again.

Spoiler for Waiting:

Great oneshots. "Treehouse"... funny, great interaction between three charcters, bacon, and a sweet ending. What's not to love?...[rambling]the aftertaste made me remember of a Tales of Symphonia series of oneshots between the males of the party, just for making a point of making Male X Male bonding fic which doesn't mean yaoi, great job.[/rambling]

On "Waiting", the curveball on discovering Hayate was Yuuno's wife (I thought it was Nanoha) made me not enjoy as much the last scene, as I hadn't recovered yet. Still, good job showing Yuuno worrying on his wife.


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Okay, here we go again...

Magical Lyrical G-Squad

Chapter 5: Enemy Hands
I've been enjoying rhis story a lot. Mainly how you're challenging your characters here, as they can't force their way in (... and I hope Suzuka can do something with your last cliffhanger.)

Lindy successfully using Troll tactics, how fitting of her.
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Old 2012-08-07, 18:23   Link #36830
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@Craxuan: Yes. :P

YF19EX, Mr. Coin, Filraen: Thanks for the comments! Yes, it seems like a lot of people are enjoying my portrayal of Lindy. To be honest, she's been a hoot to write for, and I have a lot more in store. Part of why I split up my continuation into two fics, is precisely because of this. I wanted to give the secondary characters more room to shine and have fun with. And I'm just getting started. :P

Anyway, posted G-Squad, Chapter 5: Enemy Hands to ff.net.
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Old 2012-08-09, 13:59   Link #36831
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The idea for this one-shot came when I had insomnia and thought of too many things for my OCs. Feeling the urge to write this particular idea, I used CCs which fit the bill

Alternate universe for straying too far from Vivid and Vivio's powers.
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Fate and Vivio (I'll title it tomorrow)
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Old 2012-08-10, 15:25   Link #36832
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FSN is WAY too addicting. =/

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Old 2012-08-10, 15:55   Link #36833
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FSN is WAY too addicting. =/
Spoiler for Blood That Flows - ViVid 18:
Heh, and there's so much more than just the VN/eroge now. Be careful to not drown. XD

Hm...why do I get the feeling Tre and Sein's date will get interrupted.
And why did I think of Einhart getting a Device like Thoth? XD
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Old 2012-08-10, 16:21   Link #36834
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lol the irony XD (she did change after... I think... in GoD but that's the game...)
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Old 2012-08-10, 17:37   Link #36835
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FSN is WAY too addicting. =/

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ViVid 16

ViVid 17

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Me: Man... of all the times I got disconnected to the net last night...

Elane: Hayate Yagami? As a strict commander? Like hell she is...

Reia: Just don't let her see you in your female adult form, Einhart.

Amy: *Brought out a Suzuka-Hime costume, big enough for Einhart's female adult form* Please? Wear this! Wear THIS!!!!

*Everyone sweatdrops*

Me: *Sighs* The trials of a love triangle... The YURI way.

Yuri: Huh?

Me: *Sweatdrops* Not Yuri Eberwein... Jeez!

Val: We'll be seeing Teo soon?

Amy: I really hope so... He's soo cute!

Me: And when Ixy be learning adult form so we got 3 sexy "Kings" in the fanfic?
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Old 2012-08-10, 17:44   Link #36836
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And when Ixy be learning adult form so we got 3 sexy "Kings" in the fanfic?
...my idea of Einhart having a device like Thoth is growing.
Dang it, mega!
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Old 2012-08-10, 19:27   Link #36837
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lol three sexy kings XD I approve. Old_Iron, are you out there?
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Old 2012-08-10, 21:26   Link #36838
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FSN is WAY too addicting. =/
Rejoice, Nanya! Your first step into the Moonlit World shall be remembered!

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Hey, how's the beta going?
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Old 2012-08-10, 22:09   Link #36839
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Rejoice, Nanya! Your first step into the Moonlit World shall be remembered!
Just stay away from grail-kun and you'll be just fine... most of the time... XD
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Old 2012-08-10, 23:29   Link #36840
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Hey there! A good friend of mine on Beast's Lair started writing snippets for a universe where Shirou was not picked up by Emiya Kiritsugu. But rather Wizard Marshal Kischur Zelretch Schewinorg. Instead of swords, Shirou Schweinorg is capable of Tracing alternative selves. Shirous from other dimensions with other abilities. Extreme detail can be found in the 'Lives and Times of Kaleido Shirou Schweinorg thread on Beast's Lair.

The original idea was conceived by ILurkNoMoar and Santo began writing stuff for it. Since Santo's Shirou wound up going to the MGLN-verse in one of his trips, he wanted me to do him the favor of posting it here for your comments, criticisms, and general enjoyment.

Now enough of my blabbing and enjoy Santo's stuff. =3


Spoiler for Never Let your Sword do the Talking.:


Spoiler for Santo's Notes:
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