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Old 2012-08-13, 07:34   Link #35501
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Hawke - You do know how odd it looks to whine about nothing being original when you're making a fanfic of a cliche anime, right?
....

Granted, everyone who ever bashes my fics always bash me on the basis of throwing something original (to that genre) when using them.
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Old 2012-08-13, 07:48   Link #35502
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Fanfiction by definition is making a story from another story. Original fics go to fictionpress or other original host sites. Even then a lot of original fics follow basic plots with just their own tweaks.

Guy gets a harem......with Genetics!

Guy's the savior of the world cause he's the chosen one!

Yada yada yada.
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Old 2012-08-13, 07:55   Link #35503
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Fanfiction by definition is making a story from another story. Original fics go to fictionpress or other original host sites. Even then a lot of original fics follow basic plots with just their own tweaks.

Guy gets a harem......with Genetics!

Guy's the savior of the world cause he's the chosen one!

Yada yada yada.
- Guy stumbles on a secret: His world is not the modern world but the far flung future, with incredibly intelligent AI constructs monitoring his every move and trying to keep the lie together.

No, The Matrix didn't do it first, MegaZone 23 had that concept before, and so did tons of Sci-Fi novels before it. But everyone seesm to think The Matrix invented the concept (and bullet time--it didn't.)

I just don't know what the hell I'm supposed to be writing because everybody hates everythign I write. i'm at the point that I don't think it's my writing at all--they all just hate me and wish I'd die. Very publicly, too.

Whatever. I'll just write whatever I want or feel like writing. As I mentioned before, the sole purpose of me continuing my fic now is to piss off the guys who hated it.

Why am I here? - 'Cause you are.

Why do I exist? - 'Cause you do.

What is my purpose in this universe? - 'Cause I got a shotgun, and you ain't got one.
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Old 2012-08-13, 08:03   Link #35504
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@Eras
I'm pretty sure Hawkie was just dropping a suggestion during then...

In any case, more ideas for revamp:
- Ichika having an interest in the Minerva due to how different it is from an IS.
- Befriends with Inami along the way.
- Instead of uncertainly progressing with a harem, Inami explicitly confesses his relationship with Tsurugi.
- More foreshadowing.
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Old 2012-08-13, 08:03   Link #35505
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@ Old Man
That's the spirit, show them how painful it is to read a well written fic going the way they don't like.
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Old 2012-08-13, 08:22   Link #35506
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They don't know you, so don't take insults personally. It's not like they're suddenly going to go to your house and stab the he'll out of you if you continue writing.

@ Senpai - When will you update Sacred Twins?
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Old 2012-08-13, 08:24   Link #35507
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At the very earliest? Somewhere in October, maybe November...
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Old 2012-08-13, 08:25   Link #35508
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They don't know you, so don't take insults personally. It's not like they're suddenly going to go to your house and stab the he'll out of you if you continue writing.
- I'm justifiably paranoid. Where I come from, anonymous comments either mean someone who's too scared to tell me to my face---or someone who's deliberately trying to screw me over. It has happened twice to me in the past already. The result of one of those is the (not big, but noticable) scar on my face (Long time back in High School. Don't ask abotu it)
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Old 2012-08-13, 08:29   Link #35509
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@wave: If you want to write it then write it.
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Old 2012-08-13, 08:33   Link #35510
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I won't ask then. We keep personal things out of the forum.

@ Senpai - How many words?
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Old 2012-08-13, 08:37   Link #35511
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We haven't even started, I'm waiting for blitz.

I'm doing random fics just for the hell of it, currently I'm writing Dog Days/Nanoha crossover along with TLR Stratos.
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Old 2012-08-13, 08:39   Link #35512
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One of the many reason why I don't do facebook.....

and have two email accounts:

One for Online use, one for real world.

I use the real world account for real world interaction.

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At the very worst, I just go social hermit...... (both world....interaction with real people is actually very exhausting for me....)
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Old 2012-08-13, 08:42   Link #35513
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I guess I had to fill momod's place again



Now getting on track again.
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Old 2012-08-13, 08:44   Link #35514
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No comments on my re-write propositions?
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Old 2012-08-13, 08:46   Link #35515
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I almost forgot, are you keeping Ichika 100% as canon? because if you did, Ichika would only care about Inami and not Minerva.
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Old 2012-08-13, 08:50   Link #35516
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@wave: If you want to write it then write it.
Spoiler:
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Old 2012-08-13, 08:53   Link #35517
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Box will get a hemorrhage if those two character share more scenes.

On a more serious note, Ren seriously don't like spotlight
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Old 2012-08-13, 08:56   Link #35518
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@ Stratos - Ichika's not that interested in the IS either. In fact, he's not that interested in much of anything.

@ Senpai - Help for Shadow Revamp: I need to give Cecilia a fight scene before she gets captured. Any tips?
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Old 2012-08-13, 09:01   Link #35519
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I think the problem is that Ren is a somewhat... complex and hard to appreciate character?
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Old 2012-08-13, 09:02   Link #35520
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Box will get a hemorrhage if those two character share more scenes.
- One of the things I'm doing is reworking an older version of that conversation and expand on it. I want to make it seem like Tatenashi's a mongoose, playing a game with a snake [Ren]. It's all just dialog, no real combat, but I need ti to feel as tense as a real fight between mongoose and snake.

...because you can easily pet the cute mongoose, but nobody every wants to touch a snake...
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