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Old 2012-08-20, 13:31   Link #61
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It looks a lot like a TSF.
well that the idea
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Old 2012-08-20, 13:36   Link #62
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Got a name for it ? White Glit doesn't sound very cool.
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Old 2012-08-21, 02:06   Link #63
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^How about White Guardian?

Also the newest chapter of MuvLuv Comet is out.
Spoiler for latest chapter:
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Old 2012-08-21, 03:47   Link #64
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白守護者 or 武装守護者

Shiroy Shugosha or Buso Shugosha (White Guardian or Armament Guardian ) still thinking what should i call it in the fanfic ( All the i can said this Mech has EOT Extra over technology)

With Vanguard Over boost

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Old 2012-08-21, 11:22   Link #65
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That back thruster looks too bulky.

White Guardian sounds cooler.
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Old 2012-08-21, 11:50   Link #66
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That back thruster looks too bulky.

White Guardian sounds cooler.
There's actually a reason for that. It's equipment for ACs for long distance travel or if they need the speed to dodge incoming fire to get to the target.
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Old 2012-08-21, 12:19   Link #67
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But this isn't an AC we're making. It's a TSF. ^_^
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Old 2012-08-21, 12:21   Link #68
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That back thruster looks too bulky.

White Guardian sounds cooler.
Well considering this well is a last minute add on to give the unit high speed, and planing adding Full armor module Dubbed " Storm Fortress" heavy armor and heavy weapon payload that melee, various weapons system. can with stand beta physical attacks , PN ( Particle neutralizer )coating to bonce of Lasers attacks. Basically its a high velocity wreaking ball, which plows through beta hordes. can purge the armor module , use it to self destruct, give the the Beta the Middle finger
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Old 2012-08-21, 12:48   Link #69
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Is the armor add on something like the one on the Stark Jegan ?
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Old 2012-08-21, 13:08   Link #70
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Is the armor add on something like the one on the Stark Jegan ?
Nope much much more armaments and armor ( Melee Heat chain saw , an a pair of over size Pile Bunker, Large Heat blades on it fore head and torso , plasma flame thrower, Large morning star, crusher claws )

Range ( 3 120mm chain link auto cannon, 10 missile container( per set 24) 15 Rocket container ( 40 per set) 20 40 MM gun pods 2 Larger Shoulder mounted Container " Metal Storm" That fire hyper velocity titanium ball bearing. 10 mount pylon .

Note that just the " Storm Fortress"
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Old 2012-08-21, 13:26   Link #71
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Won't all that weight slow down the White Guardian ?
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Old 2012-08-21, 14:10   Link #72
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Got a question kaizerknight01. How does the MC get the Armored Core White Guardian in your fanfic? Was it created from a secret division/agency/unit/etc?
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Old 2012-08-21, 14:18   Link #73
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Won't all that weight slow down the White Guardian ?
Have have couple anti grav units called "Tesla drive" As I said this Unit has EOT , planing the the future to "tech share" UN TSF and equipment (hover Tanks/MLRS power suit infantry with miniaturize railgun tech etc) Especially the Task force A1 Type 94, it will truly a different machine ( Plan to give them Macross super/strike/ armor packs reflex armor system, that use the power unit to strengthen armor.. )

Still a long way to go to write that part .... still setting up the scenario

Ps call of this therms is a shout out to all Mecha series that I've watch/ and played
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Old 2012-08-21, 14:21   Link #74
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Um....some of those tech...I don't think Muv luv has the capability to make them yet....
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Old 2012-08-21, 14:27   Link #75
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Got a question kaizerknight01. How does the MC get the Armored Core White Guardian in your fanfic? Was it created from a secret division/agency/unit/etc?
Via quantum entanglement data transfer via, the Paralleled future self of Takeru, which being in the loop 12000 times which has found a way to save Sumika, give post Alternative Takeru quantum inter dimensional Tablet PC ( It's a Zumzung I universe) which through it was able to produced a Mobile Construction Unit ( MCU) that can convert Raw materials (Such as wrecked TSF, junk part, alloy's etc) which construct Takeru's very own TSF

still writing the part of the fanfic

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Old 2012-08-21, 21:45   Link #76
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Honestly, I'm not really keen on all that, particularly as I've felt that the more you have to macgruffin things, the less believable your story becomes. For an example, the Dark Knight Saga is pretty much a standard superhero movie, but it takes pains to reduce the wackiness and MacGruffins, and instead try to be as grounded as it can, which makes for a more believable experience compared to earlier Batman movies.
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Old 2012-08-22, 08:34   Link #77
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Honestly, I'm not really keen on all that, particularly as I've felt that the more you have to macgruffin things, the less believable your story becomes. For an example, the Dark Knight Saga is pretty much a standard superhero movie, but it takes pains to reduce the wackiness and MacGruffins, and instead try to be as grounded as it can, which makes for a more believable experience compared to earlier Batman movies.
I understand your point/ constructive insight but as for me as I stated earlier I'm writing as a what if scenario, and importantly want to be true to myself when i am writing/making a fanfic ( know my weakness is grammar trying to improve on this) I am writing this out fun that all ( or its my small way to deal the sort PTSD after playing alternative )

Well IMHO Muv Luv alternative heck have ,Aliens , Esper, time travel/sliders, Quantum casualty conductor and giant mecha I tried to pull the strings abit (Super String theory ). I seen so many Mecha animes that tons of" super plot device."

But thanks for your insight

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Old 2012-08-22, 10:40   Link #78
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Why don't you get a beta reader to help you out ?

I like the design of the Shiranui Second though.
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Old 2012-08-22, 11:42   Link #79
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Why don't you get a beta reader to help you out ?

I like the design of the Shiranui Second though.
Yup it has this Mobile suit/Variable fighter feel to it

I am planing on that, by i have pending priorities Business> Real life issue >>> Anime/game/manga >>>>> write fanfic ( but kudos to Paul Xion 56 chapters with over 557 k words has he captures spirit of fanfiction well just my opinion though )
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Old 2012-08-22, 11:45   Link #80
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Agreed.

Yeah. Question about that fic. Why was Marimo so embarrassed ? You know, the chapter where she locked herself up in Shirogane's bathroom ?
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