AnimeSuki Forums

NorthernFallout · 2012-08-11, 17:26

Good work on the "light lines", those are usually hard to get working. I would suggest you try and blend them in a bit more. Right now they stand out a bit too much, not really being "in" the source image. Experiment with their points of origin, blurring and a little more "fluffy" light. Perhaps even give them a bit more arms that go "beyond" the character, creating more depth. I see you've tried, but it might need a little more.

However, the color balance and general light setting are really nice and they look really high quality. Keep up the good stuff.

ganbaru · 2012-08-11, 18:44

I have to say, Krytonis, that's some very good work here, mixing your use of lighting brushs and Patchy's light dusts.

I have to say tan, like GenjiChan, I thought than the background of the second do look like a graveyard.

ahelo · 2012-08-11, 23:07

First pic is kinda flat and there needs to be a bit more blending.

The second one looks really really really great. It's like combining all your styles and making it WORK.

rikikai · 2012-08-12, 06:33

I really love the first one with all those colours! just the borders of the render are not very nice but it's not very important ^^
The second one is nice too!

Kakuseiga · 2012-08-12, 10:13

Quote:

Originally Posted by Krytonis

Update:
Amazing artworks from Nino (artist)

nice ! i love it ! <3

Silvance · 2012-08-13, 21:38

Quote:

Originally Posted by Krytonis

Holy ****!!! You improved so much in such a short time. These are really good. Great job.

Krytonis · 2012-08-22, 04:11

Quote:

Originally Posted by NorthernFallout

Good work on the "light lines", those are usually hard to get working. I would suggest you try and blend them in a bit more. Right now they stand out a bit too much, not really being "in" the source image. Experiment with their points of origin, blurring and a little more "fluffy" light. Perhaps even give them a bit more arms that go "beyond" the character, creating more depth. I see you've tried, but it might need a little more.

However, the color balance and general light setting are really nice and they look really high quality. Keep up the good stuff.

Thank you for the tips! I will be sure to note them

^^

Quote:

Originally Posted by ganbaru

I have to say, Krytonis, that's some very good work here, mixing your use of lighting brushs and Patchy's light dusts.

I have to say tan, like GenjiChan, I thought than the background of the second do look like a graveyard.

Thank you ganbaru! It was my fault for choosing a background that looks so similar ._.

Quote:

Originally Posted by ahelo

First pic is kinda flat and there needs to be a bit more blending.

The second one looks really really really great. It's like combining all your styles and making it WORK.

Thank you

^^

Quote:

Originally Posted by rikikai

I really love the first one with all those colours! just the borders of the render are not very nice but it's not very important ^^
The second one is nice too!

Of course it is important! D: Haha thank you

I LOVE the gift!

Quote:

Originally Posted by Kakuseiga

nice ! i love it ! <3

Quote:

Originally Posted by Silvance

Holy ****!!! You improved so much in such a short time. These are really good. Great job.

Thank you both! Really means so much to me

^^

Update:
Not really a big update but I just loved the Ending song of K-ON!

Don't say "Lazy":

Godlike1889 · 2012-08-22, 05:43

OH MY GOD...I just leave you here for three weeks and look how much you have improved! I am loving your style here "Koominator". Keep up the AWESOME work

Ahum...

Krytonis · 2012-08-23, 13:38

Quote:

Originally Posted by Godlike1889

OH MY GOD...I just leave you here for three weeks and look how much you have improved! I am loving your style here "Koominator". Keep up the AWESOME work

Ahum...

Haha thank you! That's what you get for leaving me in the first place brother

Later on, I shall make you a gift

^^

ganbaru · 2012-08-23, 19:12

Krytonis, there's 2 thing than kind of bother me on your last work. The render itself ( lightly) but the issue is most likely on my side, and the render's placement, a bit too much to the right, as if everything is cramped on the right.

rikikai · 2012-08-28, 03:04

Your last work is lovely! nice colors!

Krytonis · 2012-08-29, 06:30

Quote:

Originally Posted by ganbaru

Krytonis, there's 2 thing than kind of bother me on your last work. The render itself ( lightly) but the issue is most likely on my side, and the render's placement, a bit too much to the right, as if everything is cramped on the right.

Ah it seems I might have made the image size too wide.

Quote:

Originally Posted by rikikai

Your last work is lovely! nice colors!

Thank you ^^

Update:

Kuroyukihime Time: Free Stuff

.

ganbaru · 2012-08-29, 19:24

Quote:

Originally Posted by Krytonis

Ah it seems I might have made the image size too wide.

Too wide or not enough, the thing is the background/empty space is all on the left side and none on the right, making it kind of umbalanced.

GenjiChan · 2012-08-29, 19:42

Quote:

Originally Posted by Krytonis

Now, now... these is so lovely...!!!

Godlike1889 · 2012-08-30, 01:29

Quote:

Originally Posted by Krytonis

Haha thank you! That's what you get for leaving me in the first place brother

Later on, I shall make you a gift

^^

Sorry bro, I won't leave you again...at least I will try

Ohhhhh a gift!? That would be awesomeeee

(add boobs please

)

Hasumi · 2012-08-30, 06:16

Great KYH batch.

ahelo · 2012-08-30, 07:46

Wow. That KYH sig your using right now is really pretty. It's like everything's lighting up! I'd even go as far as say that your current sig is the best one you've made so far.

Krytonis · 2012-08-31, 16:39

Quote:

Originally Posted by Hasumi

Great KYH batch.

Thanks! Detective-san

Quote:

Originally Posted by ahelo

Wow. That KYH sig your using right now is really pretty. It's like everything's lighting up! I'd even go as far as say that your current sig is the best one you've made so far.

Why Thank you! ^^

Quote:

Originally Posted by Godlike1889

Sorry bro, I won't leave you again...at least I will try

Ohhhhh a gift!? That would be awesomeeee

(add boobs please

)

Here you are! You got your "melons" in it.

Sorry if you didn't like it. I couldn't find any good images OR renders!

Gift for Godlike1889!

Godlike1889 · 2012-09-03, 01:43

Quote:

Originally Posted by Krytonis

Here you are! You got your "melons" in it.

Sorry if you didn't like it. I couldn't find any good images OR renders!

Gift for Godlike1889!

ARE YOU KIDDING ME!? I fucking love it

!!!
How did you know I had a hidden crush on her too

You did your research very good bro, haha. I will try make you a good gift too then, when I find the time to pick up photoshopping. ;D
Thanks again bro, it's much appreciated

Silvance · 2012-09-04, 19:26

Quote:

Originally Posted by Krytonis

Ah it seems I might have made the image size too wide.

Thank you ^^

Update:

Kuroyukihime Time: Free Stuff

.

Mother of god... Love it. The purple lighting and the dust effects looks spectacular. Keep up the great work.

2012-08-11, 17:26	Link #241
NorthernFallout FOR MEATBALLS Author Join Date: May 2008 Location: Frosty Scandinavia Age: 23	Good work on the "light lines", those are usually hard to get working. I would suggest you try and blend them in a bit more. Right now they stand out a bit too much, not really being "in" the source image. Experiment with their points of origin, blurring and a little more "fluffy" light. Perhaps even give them a bit more arms that go "beyond" the character, creating more depth. I see you've tried, but it might need a little more. However, the color balance and general light setting are really nice and they look really high quality. Keep up the good stuff. __________________ Let's Rock \| SHAZBOT \| Unforgiving \| BACK TO ROOTS

2012-08-11, 18:44	Link #242
ganbaru books-eater youkai Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Betweem wisdom and insanity	I have to say, Krytonis, that's some very good work here, mixing your use of lighting brushs and Patchy's light dusts. I have to say tan, like GenjiChan, I thought than the background of the second do look like a graveyard. __________________

2012-08-11, 23:07	Link #243
ahelo Criminal Unrequitor Graphic Designer Join Date: Jul 2010	First pic is kinda flat and there needs to be a bit more blending. The second one looks really really really great. It's like combining all your styles and making it WORK. __________________ Traveler on Revenge / Ahelo Sigs / Saimoe Report! Signature by ganbaru

2012-08-12, 06:33	Link #244
rikikai fighting in my nightmare Graphic Designer Join Date: Mar 2009	I really love the first one with all those colours! just the borders of the render are not very nice but it's not very important ^^ The second one is nice too! __________________

2012-08-23, 19:12	Link #250
ganbaru books-eater youkai Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Betweem wisdom and insanity	Krytonis, there's 2 thing than kind of bother me on your last work. The render itself ( lightly) but the issue is most likely on my side, and the render's placement, a bit too much to the right, as if everything is cramped on the right. __________________

2012-08-28, 03:04	Link #251
rikikai fighting in my nightmare Graphic Designer Join Date: Mar 2009	Your last work is lovely! nice colors! __________________

2012-08-30, 06:16	Link #256
Hasumi 野球は最高！！ Author Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: ホウエン地方	Great KYH batch.

2012-08-30, 07:46	Link #257
ahelo Criminal Unrequitor Graphic Designer Join Date: Jul 2010	Wow. That KYH sig your using right now is really pretty. It's like everything's lighting up! I'd even go as far as say that your current sig is the best one you've made so far. __________________ Traveler on Revenge / Ahelo Sigs / Saimoe Report! Signature by ganbaru