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ZeroXSEED · 2012-08-25, 22:51

To be honest, I never.

Overall, the only horror I like is biological horror, and rather bored one supernatural one. I avoid marble hornets because it's a myth play than anything else.

Eratas123 · 2012-08-25, 22:55

I like it more since the supposed "Supernatural monster" doesn't actually DO anything. He just.....stands there....MENACINGLY! To be honest, the human character's seem to do more damage than he does.

Side note - Another new draft (Man, I've been writing a lot lately). How weird do you find people with cat ears and a tail?

ZeroXSEED · 2012-08-25, 23:04

Funny thing, I myself is a believer of supernatural in real life (and to be honest, not a stranger to it, living in backwater country and all), and except possession, those monster/ghost/phantom/whatever NEVER seems to do anything, any death or injury is caused by the person running away without paying attention because of overt fear. Though, it get worse if those creatures LEAD us to harmful path as we ran from them. Nothing is scarier indeed.

The first thing I thought will be a cosplayer, and depending on the environment, it could be very mundane or very weird. You don't cosplay in school, you did it in a fair or mall.

Eratas123 · 2012-08-25, 23:11

@ Senpai - But of a realist here myself. I tend to be more scared of a guy pointin a gun in my face than a ghost.

Side note - Irish + Cat ears and tail = Draft. Yay or nay?

ZeroXSEED · 2012-08-25, 23:24

For the sake of dignity, at least no female clothes, then I approve.

Eratas123 · 2012-08-25, 23:33

@ Senpai - Alright, going to make a couple of drafts. Make a response after this since I don't want to double post. The first one is on Shadow, and the next one is on Future Imperfect.

ZeroXSEED · 2012-08-25, 23:50

You could always edit it, unless you can't....

Eratas123 · 2012-08-26, 00:46

Draft 1 -

Spoiler:

ZeroXSEED · 2012-08-26, 00:52

Wait, they're functional?

Oh good, must be suck to be Irish. His overrated monologue though, is a comedy gold in itself.

Eratas123 · 2012-08-26, 01:00

I was going to make a second draft, but it's slightly more akin to the dark draft's I've been writing. Can you still read it?

ZeroXSEED · 2012-08-26, 01:04

Yeah, go ahead. As long as it's not mindscrew thriller like before.

Eratas123 · 2012-08-26, 01:21

Draft 2

Spoiler:

ZeroXSEED · 2012-08-26, 01:41

Buh, so it was the prank you talked about long ago....

The mood shift between your writing is incredible, either way. To think that it's about friggin high school antic (okay, more like strange kids in high school), I feel like having a broken neck.

Also, updated the crossover

Eratas123 · 2012-08-26, 02:07

Congrats

Have you been getting a lot of views on it?

Side note - Isn't a teenager being a pretty good vigilante pretty Marty Stuish?

ZeroXSEED · 2012-08-26, 02:45

Not much, though still better than the most obscure one. (Gundam and old Nanoha fics)

Honestly I want to say so but considering I.S. verse...

You can just always introduce a rival of similar age though, to balance it out.

Eratas123 · 2012-08-26, 02:52

Who else can be that good at an age like that?

ZeroXSEED · 2012-08-26, 02:56

"Who else" indeed.

Maybe other kid? There his sister to begin with.

Eratas123 · 2012-08-26, 03:05

Aria doesn't do vigilante work:/ Part of their dynamic is that while Aria is more skilled and supported, she doesn't have the will or moral flexibility that Saito does. They do work together later on, but that's only because he's forbidden from going off by himself lest he get killed.

How about Laura's kid? Seems to have both the skillset and ruthlessness, especially if she takes after her mother. The foe yay aspect will be a huge factor as well.

ZeroXSEED · 2012-08-26, 03:25

I don't know, it's up to you. Rival doesn't always have to use same philosophy or method.

Eratas123 · 2012-08-26, 03:40

I know

Rivals also tend to be opposites in a lot of things, particularly methodology and beliefs.

Side note - Next IKaron idea: Dealing with the repercussions of hanging out with an idol?

2012-08-25, 22:51	Link #36021
ZeroXSEED Jackass Cat Lover Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: SPARTAAAAA!!!!!!	To be honest, I never. Overall, the only horror I like is biological horror, and rather bored one supernatural one. I avoid marble hornets because it's a myth play than anything else. __________________ "I.S. Fandom is highly volatile domain filled by jaded readers tired of cliche. They're also especially skeptic to OC, especially male OC" "Why do you ask? Imagine this: look at those, those are a bunch of character you like, bunch of characters you identified well. Then there's that machine, singlehandedly flipped the social order, where females become more dominant, and boost the advancement of technology." "Then suddenly you look at him, he appeared out of nowhere, with no convincing background or relation to other character, cooler than male main character squared despite just as flat in personality, stomp the heroines and stole their heart (and possibly body) with his uberwank machine" "How do you NOT feel angry again? Oh wait, you create him"

2012-08-25, 22:55	Link #36022
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	I like it more since the supposed "Supernatural monster" doesn't actually DO anything. He just.....stands there....MENACINGLY! To be honest, the human character's seem to do more damage than he does. Side note - Another new draft (Man, I've been writing a lot lately). How weird do you find people with cat ears and a tail? __________________

2012-08-25, 23:04	Link #36023
ZeroXSEED Jackass Cat Lover Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: SPARTAAAAA!!!!!!	Funny thing, I myself is a believer of supernatural in real life (and to be honest, not a stranger to it, living in backwater country and all), and except possession, those monster/ghost/phantom/whatever NEVER seems to do anything, any death or injury is caused by the person running away without paying attention because of overt fear. Though, it get worse if those creatures LEAD us to harmful path as we ran from them. Nothing is scarier indeed. The first thing I thought will be a cosplayer, and depending on the environment, it could be very mundane or very weird. You don't cosplay in school, you did it in a fair or mall. __________________ "I.S. Fandom is highly volatile domain filled by jaded readers tired of cliche. They're also especially skeptic to OC, especially male OC" "Why do you ask? Imagine this: look at those, those are a bunch of character you like, bunch of characters you identified well. Then there's that machine, singlehandedly flipped the social order, where females become more dominant, and boost the advancement of technology." "Then suddenly you look at him, he appeared out of nowhere, with no convincing background or relation to other character, cooler than male main character squared despite just as flat in personality, stomp the heroines and stole their heart (and possibly body) with his uberwank machine" "How do you NOT feel angry again? Oh wait, you create him"

2012-08-25, 23:11	Link #36024
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Senpai - But of a realist here myself. I tend to be more scared of a guy pointin a gun in my face than a ghost. Side note - Irish + Cat ears and tail = Draft. Yay or nay? __________________

2012-08-25, 23:24	Link #36025
ZeroXSEED Jackass Cat Lover Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: SPARTAAAAA!!!!!!	For the sake of dignity, at least no female clothes, then I approve. __________________ "I.S. Fandom is highly volatile domain filled by jaded readers tired of cliche. They're also especially skeptic to OC, especially male OC" "Why do you ask? Imagine this: look at those, those are a bunch of character you like, bunch of characters you identified well. Then there's that machine, singlehandedly flipped the social order, where females become more dominant, and boost the advancement of technology." "Then suddenly you look at him, he appeared out of nowhere, with no convincing background or relation to other character, cooler than male main character squared despite just as flat in personality, stomp the heroines and stole their heart (and possibly body) with his uberwank machine" "How do you NOT feel angry again? Oh wait, you create him"

2012-08-25, 23:33	Link #36026
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Senpai - Alright, going to make a couple of drafts. Make a response after this since I don't want to double post. The first one is on Shadow, and the next one is on Future Imperfect. __________________

2012-08-25, 23:50	Link #36027
ZeroXSEED Jackass Cat Lover Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: SPARTAAAAA!!!!!!	You could always edit it, unless you can't.... __________________ "I.S. Fandom is highly volatile domain filled by jaded readers tired of cliche. They're also especially skeptic to OC, especially male OC" "Why do you ask? Imagine this: look at those, those are a bunch of character you like, bunch of characters you identified well. Then there's that machine, singlehandedly flipped the social order, where females become more dominant, and boost the advancement of technology." "Then suddenly you look at him, he appeared out of nowhere, with no convincing background or relation to other character, cooler than male main character squared despite just as flat in personality, stomp the heroines and stole their heart (and possibly body) with his uberwank machine" "How do you NOT feel angry again? Oh wait, you create him"

2012-08-26, 00:46	Link #36028
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Draft 1 - Spoiler: Just what what in the hell were these infernal things? He grimaced as he stared at the small handheld mirror, his reflection staring back at him. He already hated his appearance, what with the problems it caused, but this was going over the line. It was an mistake, something which was against the nature of humanity. By all accounts, his reflection still looked normal. His face hadn't been altered, nor had his appearance been changed dramatically. His skin still retained his signature paleness and even his eyes remained piss yellow in color. So why was he so worried? What could possibly make him, who stared at death in the face without flinching, shriek in terror? Cat ears. At the top of his head, nestled between the snow white tufts, were two triangle shaped ears of the feline variety. It wasn't just that, either. When he opened his mouth, he could see two slight fangs in place of his normally straight teeth. Whoever had done this to him, and he had a good idea on who that was, had apparently thought that it would be funny to make him go completely feral. Nervously, he reached a hand up slightly and touched the ears. He immediately felt a chill pass through his body, followed by the feeling of something warm spreading across his cheeks. It appears that the ears were sensitive to contact, something in which he wasn't really surprised about. He had shook his frantically earlier and they weren't dislodged, which meant that they were most likely organic in nature. "Shinonono....." He growled to him self, and then instantly felt like an idiot. His voice sounded higher pitched, more like a feline. He also felt the insatiable urge to lick himself and add "nya~" at the end of this sentence. Truly, she had done this this in order to break his psyche. Well, it wasn't going to work! Maybe he would need to spend some time thinking this through, but he was confident that as long as he could remain alone and focused he could- "Yahoo~ Irish~" ....Damn it, he had forgotten about her. Sighing slightly to himself, he turned around and met the gaze of his energetic friend, Karon. Well, at least he tried to. She'd recently gotten a growth spurt and had gotten about half a head taller than him. It was a slightly sore point for him that their heights were different now, especially since they were practically the same not a few weeks ago. Nevertheless, her attitude and mannerisms hadn't changed at all, so he never really let it get to him. "Karon...." He tried to keep his voice at a low level, "I'm kinda busy here, so maybe we can talk-" He was interrupted before he could finish. While he had taken his precious time turning around, Karon had gotten rooted to the spot and stared at him. And stared. And stared. The fact that her boyfriend (though he'd deny that if asked) was cosplaying was weird enough - not to mention that it looked really realistic - but the lengths he went to surprised even her. It wasn't only the ears, or the fangs, or the voice. It was something else. The tail. Irish himself hadn't seen it, being too pre-occupied by the ears and fangs he had received, but it was there. Its length wasn't that long, barely reaching the floor if he straightened it out, and didn't look to unique. It was a simple tail covered in white fur and nothing else. Unfortunately, in his stressed state, he didn't seem to be in control of it. As he was talking, it moved back on forth, left and right, up and down, behind him. At times she could even see it do a few waves and curls, as if it was playing. She only had one thing on her mind. She wanted to touch it. She lunged forward, ignoring the surprised "Nya!" Irish gave. Before she could reach it, however, he jumped back and the back of his knees collided with the bed. Instantly, he felt his knees give way and his back fall onto the soft mattress. A part of her wanted to ask if he was alright, but an even bigger part of her told her that his tail was exposed now, which it was, and that she should examine it before he had a chance to get up again. Three guesses on what she chose to do. Irish wanted to get up and leave, but he was prevented from doing so. The feeling of something of his being....touched suddenly appeared and he found his face reddening rapidly. He wanted to tell Karon to stop, to cease and desist whatever she was doing and to help him. Unfortunately, he felt his mind going blank and some slight drool go down the side of his lips. He couldn't form coherent words, let alone sentences, to try and stop her. He couldn't understand it. The feeling was foreign to him; like being tickled all over the body, only less irritating. Half of him wanted her to stop, but half was telling her to keep going. Meanwhile, Karon ignored his conflicting feelings and focused solely on the accessory he held between her palms. The feeling of it was soft, like a real cat's tail. She even felt a bit of warmth radiating from the fur. Wow, she'd never thought he'd go this far for cosplaying. He seemed like such a serious. It's a good thing it wasn't real. She'd heard once before that cat tails were erogenous zones for females, particularly when they were rubbed up and down, like she was so casually doing. Then again, looking at his blushing face and deep breath's, was it possible that- Nah, couldn't be. __________________

2012-08-26, 00:52	Link #36029
ZeroXSEED Jackass Cat Lover Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: SPARTAAAAA!!!!!!	Wait, they're functional? Oh good, must be suck to be Irish. His overrated monologue though, is a comedy gold in itself. __________________ "I.S. Fandom is highly volatile domain filled by jaded readers tired of cliche. They're also especially skeptic to OC, especially male OC" "Why do you ask? Imagine this: look at those, those are a bunch of character you like, bunch of characters you identified well. Then there's that machine, singlehandedly flipped the social order, where females become more dominant, and boost the advancement of technology." "Then suddenly you look at him, he appeared out of nowhere, with no convincing background or relation to other character, cooler than male main character squared despite just as flat in personality, stomp the heroines and stole their heart (and possibly body) with his uberwank machine" "How do you NOT feel angry again? Oh wait, you create him"

2012-08-26, 01:00	Link #36030
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	I was going to make a second draft, but it's slightly more akin to the dark draft's I've been writing. Can you still read it? __________________

2012-08-26, 01:04	Link #36031
ZeroXSEED Jackass Cat Lover Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: SPARTAAAAA!!!!!!	Yeah, go ahead. As long as it's not mindscrew thriller like before. __________________ "I.S. Fandom is highly volatile domain filled by jaded readers tired of cliche. They're also especially skeptic to OC, especially male OC" "Why do you ask? Imagine this: look at those, those are a bunch of character you like, bunch of characters you identified well. Then there's that machine, singlehandedly flipped the social order, where females become more dominant, and boost the advancement of technology." "Then suddenly you look at him, he appeared out of nowhere, with no convincing background or relation to other character, cooler than male main character squared despite just as flat in personality, stomp the heroines and stole their heart (and possibly body) with his uberwank machine" "How do you NOT feel angry again? Oh wait, you create him"

2012-08-26, 01:21	Link #36032
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Draft 2 Spoiler: He felt sick, like he had been fed some kind of drug. Of course, he knew that wasn't the case; he saw the gas in the vents some time ago. That was more likely the reason for him turning into....this. He knew whose fault it was. Usagi (Or Tabane's spawn, as he liked to call her) liked playing pranks, and even better on her new siblings. This gas, which added feline features to anyone who inhaled it, was probably meant for blackmail material. From what he'd seen so far, the gas not only added the features, but the mannerisms as well. Ichika had turned not too long ago and started speaking solely in mewing and purring. He didn't know if there was a cure, or if it affected anything more than that, he just wanted for it to stop. Being that he was "lucky" enough to be a clone, he wasn't affected to much. The gas most likely applied to humans, and he could hardly be called one all things considered. It was a blessing at times like these. By the sounds of the outside, the gas had spread to the entire school. Kazuma had no doubt that her prank had gotten out of hand, and that she had gotten infected as well. It was only his biological make up that protected him, and it wouldn't last long. He could already feel the nubs of something growing on his ears, and the feeling of something growing on the small of his back. From what he saw, the transformation was complete once the ears and tail fully grew. He knew what he had to do. Taking a deep breath, he made his way over to the kitchen cupboard and took out the stainless steel kitchen knife. Ichika had told him to be careful with it, lest he cut off a finger or anything else vital with it. He grabbed the knife and stared at his reflection gleaming on the side. The ears were half grown and the tail was already lengthening. Taking another deep breath, he raised the knife slowly to the top of his head. __________________

2012-08-26, 01:41	Link #36033
ZeroXSEED Jackass Cat Lover Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: SPARTAAAAA!!!!!!	Buh, so it was the prank you talked about long ago.... The mood shift between your writing is incredible, either way. To think that it's about friggin high school antic (okay, more like strange kids in high school), I feel like having a broken neck. Also, updated the crossover __________________ "I.S. Fandom is highly volatile domain filled by jaded readers tired of cliche. They're also especially skeptic to OC, especially male OC" "Why do you ask? Imagine this: look at those, those are a bunch of character you like, bunch of characters you identified well. Then there's that machine, singlehandedly flipped the social order, where females become more dominant, and boost the advancement of technology." "Then suddenly you look at him, he appeared out of nowhere, with no convincing background or relation to other character, cooler than male main character squared despite just as flat in personality, stomp the heroines and stole their heart (and possibly body) with his uberwank machine" "How do you NOT feel angry again? Oh wait, you create him"

2012-08-26, 02:07	Link #36034
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Congrats Have you been getting a lot of views on it? Side note - Isn't a teenager being a pretty good vigilante pretty Marty Stuish? __________________

2012-08-26, 02:45	Link #36035
ZeroXSEED Jackass Cat Lover Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: SPARTAAAAA!!!!!!	Not much, though still better than the most obscure one. (Gundam and old Nanoha fics) Honestly I want to say so but considering I.S. verse... You can just always introduce a rival of similar age though, to balance it out. __________________ "I.S. Fandom is highly volatile domain filled by jaded readers tired of cliche. They're also especially skeptic to OC, especially male OC" "Why do you ask? Imagine this: look at those, those are a bunch of character you like, bunch of characters you identified well. Then there's that machine, singlehandedly flipped the social order, where females become more dominant, and boost the advancement of technology." "Then suddenly you look at him, he appeared out of nowhere, with no convincing background or relation to other character, cooler than male main character squared despite just as flat in personality, stomp the heroines and stole their heart (and possibly body) with his uberwank machine" "How do you NOT feel angry again? Oh wait, you create him"

2012-08-26, 02:52	Link #36036
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Who else can be that good at an age like that? __________________

2012-08-26, 02:56	Link #36037
ZeroXSEED Jackass Cat Lover Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: SPARTAAAAA!!!!!!	"Who else" indeed. Maybe other kid? There his sister to begin with. __________________ "I.S. Fandom is highly volatile domain filled by jaded readers tired of cliche. They're also especially skeptic to OC, especially male OC" "Why do you ask? Imagine this: look at those, those are a bunch of character you like, bunch of characters you identified well. Then there's that machine, singlehandedly flipped the social order, where females become more dominant, and boost the advancement of technology." "Then suddenly you look at him, he appeared out of nowhere, with no convincing background or relation to other character, cooler than male main character squared despite just as flat in personality, stomp the heroines and stole their heart (and possibly body) with his uberwank machine" "How do you NOT feel angry again? Oh wait, you create him"

2012-08-26, 03:05	Link #36038
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Aria doesn't do vigilante work:/ Part of their dynamic is that while Aria is more skilled and supported, she doesn't have the will or moral flexibility that Saito does. They do work together later on, but that's only because he's forbidden from going off by himself lest he get killed. How about Laura's kid? Seems to have both the skillset and ruthlessness, especially if she takes after her mother. The foe yay aspect will be a huge factor as well. __________________

2012-08-26, 03:25	Link #36039
ZeroXSEED Jackass Cat Lover Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: SPARTAAAAA!!!!!!	I don't know, it's up to you. Rival doesn't always have to use same philosophy or method. __________________ "I.S. Fandom is highly volatile domain filled by jaded readers tired of cliche. They're also especially skeptic to OC, especially male OC" "Why do you ask? Imagine this: look at those, those are a bunch of character you like, bunch of characters you identified well. Then there's that machine, singlehandedly flipped the social order, where females become more dominant, and boost the advancement of technology." "Then suddenly you look at him, he appeared out of nowhere, with no convincing background or relation to other character, cooler than male main character squared despite just as flat in personality, stomp the heroines and stole their heart (and possibly body) with his uberwank machine" "How do you NOT feel angry again? Oh wait, you create him"

2012-08-26, 03:40	Link #36040
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	I know Rivals also tend to be opposites in a lot of things, particularly methodology and beliefs. Side note - Next IKaron idea: Dealing with the repercussions of hanging out with an idol? __________________