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Old 2012-08-11, 17:26   Link #241
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Good work on the "light lines", those are usually hard to get working. I would suggest you try and blend them in a bit more. Right now they stand out a bit too much, not really being "in" the source image. Experiment with their points of origin, blurring and a little more "fluffy" light. Perhaps even give them a bit more arms that go "beyond" the character, creating more depth. I see you've tried, but it might need a little more.

However, the color balance and general light setting are really nice and they look really high quality. Keep up the good stuff.
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Old 2012-08-11, 18:44   Link #242
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I have to say, Krytonis, that's some very good work here, mixing your use of lighting brushs and Patchy's light dusts.

I have to say tan, like GenjiChan, I thought than the background of the second do look like a graveyard.
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Old 2012-08-11, 23:07   Link #243
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First pic is kinda flat and there needs to be a bit more blending.

The second one looks really really really great. It's like combining all your styles and making it WORK.
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Old 2012-08-12, 06:33   Link #244
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I really love the first one with all those colours! just the borders of the render are not very nice but it's not very important ^^
The second one is nice too!
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Old 2012-08-12, 10:13   Link #245
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nice ! i love it ! <3
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Old 2012-08-13, 21:38   Link #246
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Holy ****!!! You improved so much in such a short time. These are really good. Great job.
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Old 2012-08-22, 04:11   Link #247
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Good work on the "light lines", those are usually hard to get working. I would suggest you try and blend them in a bit more. Right now they stand out a bit too much, not really being "in" the source image. Experiment with their points of origin, blurring and a little more "fluffy" light. Perhaps even give them a bit more arms that go "beyond" the character, creating more depth. I see you've tried, but it might need a little more.

However, the color balance and general light setting are really nice and they look really high quality. Keep up the good stuff.
Thank you for the tips! I will be sure to note them ^^

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I have to say, Krytonis, that's some very good work here, mixing your use of lighting brushs and Patchy's light dusts.

I have to say tan, like GenjiChan, I thought than the background of the second do look like a graveyard.
Thank you ganbaru! It was my fault for choosing a background that looks so similar ._.

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First pic is kinda flat and there needs to be a bit more blending.

The second one looks really really really great. It's like combining all your styles and making it WORK.
Thank you ^^

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I really love the first one with all those colours! just the borders of the render are not very nice but it's not very important ^^
The second one is nice too!
Of course it is important! D: Haha thank you I LOVE the gift!

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nice ! i love it ! <3
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Holy ****!!! You improved so much in such a short time. These are really good. Great job.
Thank you both! Really means so much to me ^^

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Not really a big update but I just loved the Ending song of K-ON!

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Old 2012-08-22, 05:43   Link #248
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OH MY GOD...I just leave you here for three weeks and look how much you have improved! I am loving your style here "Koominator". Keep up the AWESOME work

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Old 2012-08-23, 13:38   Link #249
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OH MY GOD...I just leave you here for three weeks and look how much you have improved! I am loving your style here "Koominator". Keep up the AWESOME work

Ahum...

Haha thank you! That's what you get for leaving me in the first place brother

Later on, I shall make you a gift ^^
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Old 2012-08-23, 19:12   Link #250
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Krytonis, there's 2 thing than kind of bother me on your last work. The render itself ( lightly) but the issue is most likely on my side, and the render's placement, a bit too much to the right, as if everything is cramped on the right.
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Old 2012-08-28, 03:04   Link #251
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Your last work is lovely! nice colors!
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Old 2012-08-29, 06:30   Link #252
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Krytonis, there's 2 thing than kind of bother me on your last work. The render itself ( lightly) but the issue is most likely on my side, and the render's placement, a bit too much to the right, as if everything is cramped on the right.
Ah it seems I might have made the image size too wide.

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Your last work is lovely! nice colors!
Thank you ^^

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Old 2012-08-29, 19:24   Link #253
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Ah it seems I might have made the image size too wide.
Too wide or not enough, the thing is the background/empty space is all on the left side and none on the right, making it kind of umbalanced.
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Old 2012-08-29, 19:42   Link #254
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Now, now... these is so lovely...!!!
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Old 2012-08-30, 01:29   Link #255
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Haha thank you! That's what you get for leaving me in the first place brother

Later on, I shall make you a gift ^^
Sorry bro, I won't leave you again...at least I will try

Ohhhhh a gift!? That would be awesomeeee (add boobs please )
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Old 2012-08-30, 06:16   Link #256
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Great KYH batch.
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Old 2012-08-30, 07:46   Link #257
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Wow. That KYH sig your using right now is really pretty. It's like everything's lighting up! I'd even go as far as say that your current sig is the best one you've made so far.
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Old 2012-08-31, 16:39   Link #258
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Great KYH batch.
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Wow. That KYH sig your using right now is really pretty. It's like everything's lighting up! I'd even go as far as say that your current sig is the best one you've made so far.
Why Thank you! ^^

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Ohhhhh a gift!? That would be awesomeeee (add boobs please )
Here you are! You got your "melons" in it. Sorry if you didn't like it. I couldn't find any good images OR renders!



Gift for Godlike1889!
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Old 2012-09-03, 01:43   Link #259
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Here you are! You got your "melons" in it. Sorry if you didn't like it. I couldn't find any good images OR renders!



Gift for Godlike1889!
ARE YOU KIDDING ME!? I fucking love it !!!
How did you know I had a hidden crush on her too
You did your research very good bro, haha. I will try make you a good gift too then, when I find the time to pick up photoshopping. ;D
Thanks again bro, it's much appreciated
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Old 2012-09-04, 19:26   Link #260
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Ah it seems I might have made the image size too wide.



Thank you ^^

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Mother of god... Love it. The purple lighting and the dust effects looks spectacular. Keep up the great work.
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