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Old 2012-08-30, 09:26   Link #36241
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true... I already have morphing metal with the second shift Schwarzer Regen.
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Old 2012-08-30, 11:12   Link #36242
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..... It's a little rush... I took only 3 hours to type out the whole thing without proof reading it yet...

=_=

Not sure is it too fast or too slow....

Re-write verse:
Spoiler for Chapter 3:
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Old 2012-08-30, 18:24   Link #36243
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@ Senpai - Draft This one's more comical than previous one's

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Old 2012-08-30, 23:31   Link #36244
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My only advice for the continuation.
1. No murder
2. No serious crime happening
3. No overt angst
At least until the arc finished

Otherwise, it's detailed, even the character gestures is described naturally without being too forced or awkward. This is a normal situation in every sense of the word.

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Random scene:
During sport festival prior to seaside school, there's a special race called "maiden carry", unsurprisingly a lot of girls wanted to be the maiden... except Ling, because her partner would be Dan. In the end, it's settled that the maiden have to be the smallest/lightest girl in the class.

As follow: Charlotte (1-1) Lingying (1-2) Laura (1-3) Kanzashi (1-4), with Ichika, Dan, Rito, and Len respectively

The funny part is the way they carried. Ichika does princess carry per his classmate forced request, Dan did it piggyback style, Rito carried on his shoulder, and Len... took the most practical approach (Fortunately, Kanzashi didn't protest)



Len won with a slight edge over Rito, Ichika last (there's good reason Firemen and soldier never did princess carry)
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Old 2012-08-31, 03:09   Link #36245
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Got a crossover.

The-UNIONs-0 (Crossover with Naruto)
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Old 2012-08-31, 03:32   Link #36246
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*chug down soda*
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Old 2012-08-31, 05:52   Link #36247
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I feel like dropping dead...
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Old 2012-08-31, 06:34   Link #36248
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@ Demi - What's wrong?

@ Senpai - Here, more on the bittersweet sense.

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Old 2012-08-31, 07:30   Link #36249
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I realize that I like nothing about my initial try at fourze x IS crossover. I think I have to redo EVERYTHING now.
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Old 2012-08-31, 07:33   Link #36250
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Calm down and think. I often get stuck making choices, but I just choose one and let it fly.
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Old 2012-08-31, 08:05   Link #36251
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......

Make be I should make the Rouge Drone human-like....

In style of Alexander (code Geass) and Anime Sliver Gospel: Having human features....

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Pilotable Drones are something like Endlaves.

No pain receptor....though.
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Old 2012-08-31, 11:05   Link #36252
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Would using an IS for law enforcement purposes be a direct violation to the Alaska Treaty?
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Old 2012-08-31, 21:34   Link #36253
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It's so overkill they might just allow it O.o
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Old 2012-08-31, 21:35   Link #36254
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@ Eras
That's surprisingly lighter and better than I though, exactly the kind of Grimdark I love

I recognize this took even further into future where social shift become even more drastic than before.

@ Stratos
Not only that, it's also overkill. No, they won't allow it, unless every criminal has their own I.S.
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Old 2012-08-31, 22:21   Link #36255
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Green as grass from the looks of them.

Blind Fate
Infinite Stratos Angelic Descent
A Computer is Only as Good as Its Coding (Crossover with Bleach)

Care to take a look?
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Old 2012-08-31, 22:27   Link #36256
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what's the legal drinking age in england?
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Old 2012-08-31, 22:29   Link #36257
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20, can be as low as 16 depending on region... WITH parental consent and guide (usually when related to special dishes)

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Green as grass from the looks of them. Care to take a look?
Why not?

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With the presence of Laura, I always thought it's possible to create replacement organ. But then again, necessary weasel.

Actually better than mine in terms of writing (not saying much still), but a new author nonetheless.

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Excuse plot at its finest, not that it's bad or anything. This one feels true to the canon style actually.
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Old 2012-08-31, 22:41   Link #36258
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It really varies from region to region? O.o
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Old 2012-08-31, 22:47   Link #36259
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Children under 5 must not be given alcohol unless under medical supervision or in an emergency (Children and Young Persons Act 1933, Children and Young Persons (Scotland) Act 1937).

Between the ages of 5 and 17, it is legally permissible for children to drink alcohol at home or at a friend's house with the permission of a parent or legal guardian.

The minimum age for the purchase of alcohol is 18. People aged 16 or 17 may consume wine, beer or cider on licensed premises when ordered with a meal. In England and Wales, it must be an adult who orders; however, an adult doesn't have to be present to order alcohol with a meal in Scotland. The legal age for the purchase of alcohol from an off-licence (store/supermarket) is 18. (The legal age to buy liqueur chocolates is 16, but this is rarely enforced.)

Under the BBPA's Challenge 21 scheme, customers attempting to buy alcoholic beverages are asked to prove their age if in the retailer's opinion they look under 21 even though the law states they must be a minimum of 18. Many supermarket and off-licence chains display Challenge 21 notices stating that they will not serve persons who look under 21 without ID.

Supermarkets or off-licence chains that are found to have violated the law and have repeatedly sold alcohol to underage persons are then required to adopt the Challenge 25 scheme. Failing to adhere to this will result in revocation of the licence to sell alcohol. (Challenge 25 is standard procedure in Scotland and the main supermarket chains.)

Purchasing alcohol on behalf of a minor is illegal in all of the United Kingdom. This means acting as the young person's agent.
Yeah, confusing. Legal age to buy one yourself is 18, but many store won't sell to anyone under 21, or as high as 25.
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Old 2012-08-31, 23:01   Link #36260
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so... if say Cecilia were to drink... she'd normally be illegal in age since she's an orphan?
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