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Old 2012-09-04, 05:01   Link #36381
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Saruyama DOES like sexy ladies very much, but his actual type of girlfriend is either tomboy or hyperactive moe kind. And he's extremely weak to 'pure' girl, which is why he couldn't even perv on Charlotte post reveal.

Next one will have Ichika and Dan like...

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“So it goes like, Yamada-sensei being clumsy again”

Dan laughed in response “You mean that petite teacher with big-“ he leered aside, finding Kotegawa cracked her fingers with a scary grin “Eyes?”

“Yeah, that one” Ichika said, almost cluelessly. To be fair, Yamada did have rather large, rounded eyes, that’s one of the reason she look cute, like a young school girl.

Yui just sip out of her drink quietly as she found another table.
There will be scenes where only girls appear, so we can see POV of both gender (I use Tri as frame of reference)
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Old 2012-09-04, 05:13   Link #36382
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@ Senpai - Where's Kotegawa's brother and Len?

Side note - About to make the draft. It's extremely short.
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Old 2012-09-04, 05:19   Link #36383
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Kotegawa's brother already graduated (canon age being 3 years older), Len have yet to appear even though in universe he's the first one to be announced.

Lala and Len both have problem about entering because their countries (Earth countries in this case) aren't affiliated with United Nations (UN have control over I.S.A. almost exclusively in this verse) and thus require necessary arrangement.

S/N: I can't guarantee that I can read that today, I'm in Internet cafe because the lack of connection in home. Hope you can finish it soon so I can read.
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Old 2012-09-04, 05:36   Link #36384
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Short draft -

Spoiler:
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Old 2012-09-04, 05:44   Link #36385
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The chilling atmosphere, how awesome.

Even though it's a short scene in terms of timeframe, the description is not boring, in fact it's what made the draft feel so intense.

In fact, this is the kind of writing style I always wished, I'll take some notes
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Old 2012-09-04, 05:49   Link #36386
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@ Senpai - DARK Future is essentially crapsack/crapsacchrine world. While some places look like they're out of Utopia, other places look decrepit and destroyed (Like the Metro in the previous draft). Both of them have one thing in common: Life sucks either way. Not to mention the fact that the IS aren't the main threats every time.

Is a unisex onsen rare?

Side note - Since you probably don't have much time left, I'll leave the next draft's for tom.
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Old 2012-09-04, 05:53   Link #36387
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Yes, rare. Usually reserved for a whole family.
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Old 2012-09-04, 05:54   Link #36388
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How about for friends?
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Old 2012-09-04, 06:01   Link #36389
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I don't think most inn will allow that.

Oh well, we could always go with doujin rules.

I did that too, though with some limitation of course.
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Old 2012-09-04, 06:05   Link #36390
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As long as you shell out enough cash, I don't think they'd mind.
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Old 2012-09-04, 06:06   Link #36391
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Would pouring hot spring water on healing wounds agitate them?
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Old 2012-09-04, 06:12   Link #36392
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Quick question, does the shopping mall where Ichika and Charlotte go to in Ep. 9 have a name?

If it does, then what is it?
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Old 2012-09-04, 06:16   Link #36393
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@ Demi
Indeed

@ Eras
Already answered, yes they are, VERY much. But long term careful treatment (assuming there's no bleeding wounds) actually helped it recover.

@ Jak
Venus Fort, Odaiba
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Old 2012-09-04, 06:20   Link #36394
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@ Senpai - How agitated? Just cause pain or Hayate the combat butler level of blowout.
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Old 2012-09-04, 06:23   Link #36395
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Ever had burns from hot cooking oil? That much, and then some.

It really depends on the wound itself though, because it was the mineral that caused the pain.
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Old 2012-09-04, 06:30   Link #36396
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Can bandages be moistened with water?
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Old 2012-09-04, 06:32   Link #36397
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All bandages are, even modern 'waterproof' bandage can't held too long.
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Old 2012-09-04, 06:37   Link #36398
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Thanks man, and here's a little something...

Spoiler for Ch. 7 Ishiyama High Scene.:


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Old 2012-09-04, 06:43   Link #36399
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Hold on, I have to go home. I'll read it tom. Sorry
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Old 2012-09-04, 06:46   Link #36400
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An IS blatantly attacking a public area.......hope Japan has an explanation.
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