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Old 2012-09-05, 22:42   Link #36421
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What are you talking about?
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Old 2012-09-05, 22:50   Link #36422
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Question: How would the world react to a rouge Drone (Heavily armed Drone capable of learning and self-upgrading)?
Uh, I know it might not help much, but I'm guessing that you missed this.
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Old 2012-09-05, 22:54   Link #36423
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It's a grimdark but otherwise optimistic anime, Symphogear. It has all the element I like, which overall 100% fitting with the themes I intended for my fics... and then WHAM a certain character's backstory is revealed.

It's not even graphic, just narrated with implications, and yet I didn't survive the impact after freaking three days. Not that I'm traumatized, but I got headache trying to resist the temptation not to overdo the dark elements (which turned out corny because of my deadpan narrative)
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Old 2012-09-05, 22:57   Link #36424
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@ Senpai - What about the Wincest story?
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Old 2012-09-05, 23:00   Link #36425
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Put on hold, turned out to be not easy to handle. In contrast, the bad piece of thrash fic that is crossover is written at lightning speed, might update today.
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Old 2012-09-05, 23:07   Link #36426
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You need to be more confident with your stories You've been an author for a while now. I'm still a relative newbie, so both of us should jsut write and have fun.

Side note - Almsot done with a draft.
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Old 2012-09-05, 23:20   Link #36427
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Another draft. I'm making another one later.

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Old 2012-09-06, 00:38   Link #36428
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Nothing better than anti-hero deliver a subtle yet potent "you suck" speech I guess.

Spoiler for TLR Stratos Chapter 3 Part 3:


Why I have this feeling that as Charles, Charlotte is more of a recurring extra. :|
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Old 2012-09-06, 01:39   Link #36429
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What do you mean?
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Old 2012-09-06, 01:48   Link #36430
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No emphasis put on 'his' character, at all. 'He' is constantly overshadowed. Putting this 'he' was equal to people such as Kiyoka, Nohonhon, Risa or Mio.

The sad thing, if I try to think what to do with 'him' as of now, my finger stop writing altogether and I hit a virtual brickwall.
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Old 2012-09-06, 02:04   Link #36431
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You mean like Len and Lun?
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Old 2012-09-06, 02:11   Link #36432
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No, probably even worse. 'He's literally stood there.

I'll try to fix that even if it means brain overload
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Old 2012-09-06, 02:53   Link #36433
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Why don't you make them creepy twins?
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Old 2012-09-06, 03:14   Link #36434
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That label went to Dunois twin, when they're at the worst condition though (and for the fun of it), just think of Charlotte in novel, but times two.

Len and Lun comes of as weird at first: they're fiercely competitive and sort of pragmatic, and different take on certain elements of sexuality.

This is why at first they come of as creepy jerkass, especially to mostly polite Japanese. After cultural contact things went better either way, they began to respect each other finely.
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Old 2012-09-06, 04:08   Link #36435
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Crap, and here I thought we had progress
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Old 2012-09-06, 04:36   Link #36436
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Old 2012-09-06, 04:38   Link #36437
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Nah, just talking about pages.

Oh yeah... is it creepy if the MOTW's from the IS crossover with kamen rider can't turn back?

EDOT: Would it convey how powerful they are when they are described as walking stars?

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Old 2012-09-06, 05:00   Link #36438
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What is MOTW? If that's the creature or something equivalent, then yes.
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Old 2012-09-06, 05:11   Link #36439
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Yeah, it's the creature. I've just decided to call the IS infused with cosmic energy as IS, though the badguy would refer to it as a nebula or crutch at times. Mostly because the purpose is to infuse the pilot with enough cosmic energy to force a permanent evolution.

The pilots may possibly be referred to as stars... and fully developed stars will probably explode or implode on death/defeat on a scale relatively smaller of blackhole or supernova.
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Old 2012-09-06, 05:22   Link #36440
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Making a last draft for today, then I'm continuing "The Soldier and The Bride"
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