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Old 2012-09-06, 07:43   Link #36461
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@ Stratos - Absence makes the heart go yonder Also, how about a rescue event? Falling into a river tends to be common.
That's the line

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And as Eras said, full body contact during extreme but realistic situation, such as falling into a river or tripped on a stairs.
Thanks for the idea you two! I'll work on it


Currently into the third chapter of the re-write. Though as I mentioned a long way before, made some changes to Praxidike boss' personality and have him actually interacting with Inami pre-revelation:

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Next scene, where he explicitly mentions "Tsurugi" the first time.(From the reader's perspective that is) Past scenes up to this point only has him referring to Tsurugi as "her":

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Old 2012-09-06, 07:44   Link #36462
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@ Senpai - Last draft for today. This is a bit of a more cheerful tone.

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Old 2012-09-06, 07:55   Link #36463
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Yay, I sense a shoutout there Poor Aya being hopeless suitor.

And just as always, even at lighthearted stuff you're fic is 3 times better than mine.
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Old 2012-09-06, 08:06   Link #36464
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You're better at me in slice of life fluff I tend to be better in Dark fics.

Side note - Does he act similar to his personality later on?
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Old 2012-09-06, 09:47   Link #36465
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It's similar to the kissing draft, but in this one he's more relaxed.
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Old 2012-09-06, 09:50   Link #36466
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Does it look odd? It feels like I'm writing about two different characters.
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Old 2012-09-06, 09:50   Link #36467
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I suddenly feel like I should write something utterly sad and blandly disheartening.

Do we have any candidates for such a thing?
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Old 2012-09-06, 09:53   Link #36468
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Ichika getting married to a specific girl, and how the rejected ones take it.
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Old 2012-09-06, 10:02   Link #36469
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Ichika getting married to a specific girl, and how the rejected ones take it.
I heard School Day ed playing in my ear.
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Old 2012-09-06, 10:10   Link #36470
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Meh, I hear that whenever Rin gets called flat.

@ Senpai - Does this look bishonen to you: http://30.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lt...xqfpo1_400.png

Going to sleep now.
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Old 2012-09-06, 10:25   Link #36471
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^ Yes, for 13 years old that is. If he's older, more like a pretty shota, not less attractive though.
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Old 2012-09-06, 10:56   Link #36472
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Old 2012-09-06, 11:03   Link #36473
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10/10

post that under tragedy and you're all set.
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Old 2012-09-06, 18:01   Link #36474
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@ Senpai = This is 13 years old?

http://94.100.19.194/8849/7/img_3_66931.jpg
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Old 2012-09-06, 22:42   Link #36475
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If compared to guys in IS-verse... yeah, sorta
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Old 2012-09-06, 23:04   Link #36476
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So....Saito looks 13.

....Son of a bitch
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Old 2012-09-06, 23:08   Link #36477
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He has correct body size tho (think my drawing of Rito), unlike Laura, so he won't get mistaken for actual shota.

Len actually look like that didn't he? The same law applies.
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Old 2012-09-06, 23:16   Link #36478
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Didn't Len get a ridiculously muscled body in his debut?

Side note - Face wise, can the guy in the picture pass for a nerd or loner?
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Old 2012-09-06, 23:21   Link #36479
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Nope, he did that in the anime only, and only after hellish training. Rito is actually bulkier than him in the manga, neither of them are ripped though.

He could pass as loner, at that.
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Old 2012-09-06, 23:24   Link #36480
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Does Len still have a complex about manliness?

Side note - But not a nerd or someone who's considered unattractive?
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