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Eratas123 · 2012-09-07, 07:37

@ Senpai - Are any of them actually mature enough to be in a relationship with him.

ZeroXSEED · 2012-09-07, 07:43

@ Eras
It's not like HE is mature either, so anyone patient enough will do (no one is patient enough by this point, even Char).

@ Demi
Since you're talking about BITs, as long as it's symmetric it's fine. In fact, BT BITs irked me due to shaped like one-edged sword.

Eratas123 · 2012-09-07, 07:48

What about Chifuyu?

Side note - How bad does it look when a guy's bag spills and drugs come out?

demino_hellsin · 2012-09-07, 07:50

Honne is patient... not mature though

ZeroXSEED · 2012-09-07, 07:52

Once again, anyone patient enough to cope with his idiocy will do. Chifuyu is not, Honne is.

.....

Fund it

@ Eras
"I will call some cops without you knowing" bad?

Eratas123 · 2012-09-07, 07:54

Already funded in Daydreams and FI

Side note - Sorry, I meant parents seeing their kid.

ZeroXSEED · 2012-09-07, 07:56

First thing first: where and how he obtain it and why

demino_hellsin · 2012-09-07, 07:57

I can imagine the cliche, childhood friend wakes up the protagonist start of any story. Except Honne is the protagonist and Ichika is the unwilling childhood friend.

O.o

Eratas123 · 2012-09-07, 08:01

And he's always late for school

@ Senpai - Found it in a classmates locker and kept it for investigation.

ZeroXSEED · 2012-09-07, 08:28

Don't answer me, that's the parents reaction - assuming they didn't go for the worst conclusion

Eratas123 · 2012-09-07, 08:32

Happens to Saito about a quarter through the story. His parent's refusing to listen to him is one of the factors leading to his resentment and anti-heroism later on.

Side note - Going to give a valentines draft tom. In the meantime, is there anything else you want to talk about?

demino_hellsin · 2012-09-07, 09:00

Can it be considered a great loss if the bits can't shoot? But only act as reusable guided missiles?

ZeroXSEED · 2012-09-07, 09:11

Nope, since BITs are inherently faster than I.S.

In fact, this is Cecilia's main shtick after upgraded with Silent Zephyr's tech, [Sword BITs] as they're called.

demino_hellsin · 2012-09-07, 09:17

Now I want to see a death match between Sword BITs and dagger BITs...

Hot dang!

If sword bits are the only weapons available, I'm wondering if people would consider that a disadvantage.

ZeroXSEED · 2012-09-07, 09:37

It is disadvantage, Sword Bits are more fragile than any melee weapon due to propulsion system. Since there's no anchoring mass, parrying using them is impossible either.

It's nature is similar to ninja or assassin, you miss once against a pro, you fail.

Eratas123 · 2012-09-07, 09:56

Finished the next chapter of the Soldier and the Bride. I tend to average 5000-6000 words nowadays:/

ZeroXSEED · 2012-09-07, 14:22

Next draft is continuation of Len and Ling get smashed, this one is one of the latter part.

Quote:

The faux-male dorm is rarely unused, right. Now Len realized the implication of that statement, hearing the faint moan and giggle heard across the corridor.

It sickened him that there's something like this amongst school facility, but at least there's nothing like schoolwide orgy happening.

Yet.

He doesn't like the idea of dragging a drunk Chinese girl to a shady place, but it might even worse to carry her to her dorm... or his. At the very least, the risk of being spotted is lower.

"Ichika... no baka..." she murmured while pulling his cheek "You are the stupid one" he retorted whilst gently shook his head out of annoyance.

Quietly unlocking his 'assigned' room, he find his place is well kept. It's very minimal, with no personal belonging exist. It was, after all, intended to fool any unsuspecting trespasser.

There's only one bed, he think the situation is so stupid, like coming out straight of porn movie. Nonetheless

"Well, well, well what's happening here?"

Len twitched, but managed to keep his shock to minimum and simply turned ninety degrees. It was Motemitsu, accompanied by a girl... or two, he's uncertain, and don't care.

"You know, this is more or less crossing the line" he sighed "Drunk chick couldn't say no"

Len has no fear even after accusation, which is justifiable. But he just calmly close the door and walk to the nearby chair, Motemitsu follow and sat across. Is this Freudian therapy or what?

"I'm not some horny loser with rape fantasies and I know sleeping with drunk chick is neither intimate or romantic" Len retorted harshly but with very serene tone, indicating his honesty "The fact that I spiked her, is true however"

"Then why?" Motemitsu cheerfully asked again

"I just felt like got a hangover so I can distract myself, she's tagging along. But then I forgot I have very high tolerance, she's just ordinary girl" Taking out the last can he had, he drunk it in a moment, taking out half the content "You didn't expect me to bring her to her dorm right?"

"Most definitely, then what will you do?"

"Leaving this place, what else?" Len said "Not like there's anything major besides free wild show... which I'm not interested with"

"Or chances to get laid, but probably not" Motemitsu rubbed his own chin "Well, will you return to real dorm or...?"

"I don't know, I just want a silent place to sleep" Len crushed the can very easily.

"You're lucky, here's the key to fourth room, I'll have some... friends keeping her company, if you still want-"

"You think I'm retarded enough to second you??"

Len's earnest reply get a laughter from across the corridor, much to his chagrin

DarkJak2050 · 2012-09-07, 15:50

We've got a fanfic.

Hearts Beating

demino_hellsin · 2012-09-07, 19:08

Odd... I was expecting heavy flames but all I got was constructive criticism O.o

Eratas123 · 2012-09-07, 20:01

@ Senpai - Does Len like her?

2012-09-07, 07:37	Link #36541
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Senpai - Are any of them actually mature enough to be in a relationship with him. __________________

2012-09-07, 07:43	Link #36542
ZeroXSEED Jackass Cat Lover Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: SPARTAAAAA!!!!!!	@ Eras It's not like HE is mature either, so anyone patient enough will do (no one is patient enough by this point, even Char). @ Demi Since you're talking about BITs, as long as it's symmetric it's fine. In fact, BT BITs irked me due to shaped like one-edged sword. __________________ "I.S. Fandom is highly volatile domain filled by jaded readers tired of cliche. They're also especially skeptic to OC, especially male OC" "Why do you ask? Imagine this: look at those, those are a bunch of character you like, bunch of characters you identified well. Then there's that machine, singlehandedly flipped the social order, where females become more dominant, and boost the advancement of technology." "Then suddenly you look at him, he appeared out of nowhere, with no convincing background or relation to other character, cooler than male main character squared despite just as flat in personality, stomp the heroines and stole their heart (and possibly body) with his uberwank machine" "How do you NOT feel angry again? Oh wait, you create him"

2012-09-07, 07:48	Link #36543
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	What about Chifuyu? Side note - How bad does it look when a guy's bag spills and drugs come out? __________________

2012-09-07, 07:52	Link #36545
ZeroXSEED Jackass Cat Lover Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: SPARTAAAAA!!!!!!	Once again, anyone patient enough to cope with his idiocy will do. Chifuyu is not, Honne is. ..... Fund it @ Eras "I will call some cops without you knowing" bad? __________________ "I.S. Fandom is highly volatile domain filled by jaded readers tired of cliche. They're also especially skeptic to OC, especially male OC" "Why do you ask? Imagine this: look at those, those are a bunch of character you like, bunch of characters you identified well. Then there's that machine, singlehandedly flipped the social order, where females become more dominant, and boost the advancement of technology." "Then suddenly you look at him, he appeared out of nowhere, with no convincing background or relation to other character, cooler than male main character squared despite just as flat in personality, stomp the heroines and stole their heart (and possibly body) with his uberwank machine" "How do you NOT feel angry again? Oh wait, you create him"

2012-09-07, 07:54	Link #36546
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Already funded in Daydreams and FI Side note - Sorry, I meant parents seeing their kid. __________________

2012-09-07, 07:50	Link #36544
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	Honne is patient... not mature though

2012-09-07, 07:56	Link #36547
ZeroXSEED Jackass Cat Lover Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: SPARTAAAAA!!!!!!	First thing first: where and how he obtain it and why __________________ "I.S. Fandom is highly volatile domain filled by jaded readers tired of cliche. They're also especially skeptic to OC, especially male OC" "Why do you ask? Imagine this: look at those, those are a bunch of character you like, bunch of characters you identified well. Then there's that machine, singlehandedly flipped the social order, where females become more dominant, and boost the advancement of technology." "Then suddenly you look at him, he appeared out of nowhere, with no convincing background or relation to other character, cooler than male main character squared despite just as flat in personality, stomp the heroines and stole their heart (and possibly body) with his uberwank machine" "How do you NOT feel angry again? Oh wait, you create him"

2012-09-07, 07:57	Link #36548
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	I can imagine the cliche, childhood friend wakes up the protagonist start of any story. Except Honne is the protagonist and Ichika is the unwilling childhood friend. O.o

2012-09-07, 08:01	Link #36549
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	And he's always late for school @ Senpai - Found it in a classmates locker and kept it for investigation. __________________

2012-09-07, 08:28	Link #36550
ZeroXSEED Jackass Cat Lover Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: SPARTAAAAA!!!!!!	Don't answer me, that's the parents reaction - assuming they didn't go for the worst conclusion __________________ "I.S. Fandom is highly volatile domain filled by jaded readers tired of cliche. They're also especially skeptic to OC, especially male OC" "Why do you ask? Imagine this: look at those, those are a bunch of character you like, bunch of characters you identified well. Then there's that machine, singlehandedly flipped the social order, where females become more dominant, and boost the advancement of technology." "Then suddenly you look at him, he appeared out of nowhere, with no convincing background or relation to other character, cooler than male main character squared despite just as flat in personality, stomp the heroines and stole their heart (and possibly body) with his uberwank machine" "How do you NOT feel angry again? Oh wait, you create him"

2012-09-07, 08:32	Link #36551
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Happens to Saito about a quarter through the story. His parent's refusing to listen to him is one of the factors leading to his resentment and anti-heroism later on. Side note - Going to give a valentines draft tom. In the meantime, is there anything else you want to talk about? __________________

2012-09-07, 09:00	Link #36552
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	Can it be considered a great loss if the bits can't shoot? But only act as reusable guided missiles?

2012-09-07, 09:11	Link #36553
ZeroXSEED Jackass Cat Lover Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: SPARTAAAAA!!!!!!	Nope, since BITs are inherently faster than I.S. In fact, this is Cecilia's main shtick after upgraded with Silent Zephyr's tech, [Sword BITs] as they're called. __________________ "I.S. Fandom is highly volatile domain filled by jaded readers tired of cliche. They're also especially skeptic to OC, especially male OC" "Why do you ask? Imagine this: look at those, those are a bunch of character you like, bunch of characters you identified well. Then there's that machine, singlehandedly flipped the social order, where females become more dominant, and boost the advancement of technology." "Then suddenly you look at him, he appeared out of nowhere, with no convincing background or relation to other character, cooler than male main character squared despite just as flat in personality, stomp the heroines and stole their heart (and possibly body) with his uberwank machine" "How do you NOT feel angry again? Oh wait, you create him"

2012-09-07, 09:17	Link #36554
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	Now I want to see a death match between Sword BITs and dagger BITs... Hot dang! If sword bits are the only weapons available, I'm wondering if people would consider that a disadvantage.

2012-09-07, 09:37	Link #36555
ZeroXSEED Jackass Cat Lover Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: SPARTAAAAA!!!!!!	It is disadvantage, Sword Bits are more fragile than any melee weapon due to propulsion system. Since there's no anchoring mass, parrying using them is impossible either. It's nature is similar to ninja or assassin, you miss once against a pro, you fail. __________________ "I.S. Fandom is highly volatile domain filled by jaded readers tired of cliche. They're also especially skeptic to OC, especially male OC" "Why do you ask? Imagine this: look at those, those are a bunch of character you like, bunch of characters you identified well. Then there's that machine, singlehandedly flipped the social order, where females become more dominant, and boost the advancement of technology." "Then suddenly you look at him, he appeared out of nowhere, with no convincing background or relation to other character, cooler than male main character squared despite just as flat in personality, stomp the heroines and stole their heart (and possibly body) with his uberwank machine" "How do you NOT feel angry again? Oh wait, you create him"

2012-09-07, 09:56	Link #36556
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Finished the next chapter of the Soldier and the Bride. I tend to average 5000-6000 words nowadays:/ __________________

2012-09-07, 15:50	Link #36558
DarkJak2050 Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2011	We've got a fanfic. Hearts Beating

2012-09-07, 19:08	Link #36559
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	Odd... I was expecting heavy flames but all I got was constructive criticism O.o

2012-09-07, 20:01	Link #36560
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Senpai - Does Len like her? __________________