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Old 2012-09-07, 12:21   Link #37181
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I take back my words....

This could be rather interesting....

As the result of contract with a lost Logia, the Intelligence operative gain multiple personality, work for multiple agency and is now on the run after being found out (with his original personality wondering what in the hell is happening).

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Still not going to do it.
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Old 2012-09-07, 12:24   Link #37182
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What if the Band of boys end up being villains (or heroes) in disguise using their fame and songs to take an effect on the population xD?
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Old 2012-09-07, 12:30   Link #37183
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They are rather supportive of TSAB (willing to provide assist(making a super rare Photo-book) for the 1st Case...)

Hero path: (Original Plan)

Three words: Propaganda for TSAB.

They promote TSAB to attract young girls to join which in turn attract young boys to join because of the girls

Because TSAB actually sponsor their concert...

Edit: Can also justify why Yuuno is in the band.....


Evil Path:

However, that doesn't mean it is totally impossible...(being supportive is a way to throw TSAB from their track...)

They are actually working for a Queen serving as her knights? They are trying to scout potential host for the Queen's revival.

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Expansion of their role?

Colina is their fan...which explain why she is taking part in the trial competition. (In spite the fact that she is pretty useless when it come to strike art)
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Old 2012-09-07, 18:09   Link #37184
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Here is the last available chapter of Santo's work. I'll be updating it when he gets more written.

He would greatly appreciate some feedback.

Never Let Your Sword do the Talking
The Stages of Grief ...and Cheesecake
From Grief to Fury
Plight
The Witch
The Horseman
Escape Into Fire


Spoiler for The First Flame:
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Old 2012-09-07, 19:19   Link #37185
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Shirou Alter shalt kick your ass Zodd.
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Old 2012-09-07, 21:43   Link #37186
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Shirou Alter shalt kick your ass Zodd.
Not exactly "Shirou Alter", bhl88.
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Old 2012-09-07, 21:57   Link #37187
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Then pissed off Emiya Shirou
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Old 2012-09-07, 22:16   Link #37188
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Nope. That's Dark Souls Shirou, Iron's creation.
And Zodd just commited one of the two forbidden sins. Ouch.
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Old 2012-09-08, 00:16   Link #37189
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Hey everyone! I have a chapter of Swords and Shields for you all. Sorry about the wait. Kuroi Hadou says you can blame him for the delay. =P

Enjoy~

Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3a
Chapter 3b
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6

Spoiler for Swords and Shields: Chapter 7:
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Old 2012-09-08, 00:21   Link #37190
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Sorry about the wait. Kuroi Hadou says you can blame him for the delay.
Yes, yes, blame me. Not my fault the original draft had to be dismembered and smelted.
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Old 2012-09-08, 00:28   Link #37191
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Yes, yes, blame me. Not my fault the original draft had to be dismembered and smelted.
But... But...

*looks at the bucket of extracted impurities and the noxious fumes wafting from its contents*

...Yeah, I got nothing.
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Old 2012-09-08, 01:30   Link #37192
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But... But...

*looks at the bucket of extracted impurities and the noxious fumes wafting from its contents*

...Yeah, I got nothing.
So, it's the Grail? xD
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Old 2012-09-08, 02:03   Link #37193
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Hey everyone! I have a chapter of Swords and Shields for you all. Sorry about the wait. Kuroi Hadou says you can blame him for the delay. =P

Enjoy~

Spoiler for Swords and Shields: Chapter 7:


No words can truly explain my happiness after such wonderful update. I can only say: WORTH THE WAIT. You two did a wonderful job in the workshop. I'll patiently wait for the future update.
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Old 2012-09-08, 05:32   Link #37194
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Hey everyone! I have a chapter of Swords and Shields for you all. Sorry about the wait. Kuroi Hadou says you can blame him for the delay. =P

Enjoy~

Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3a
Chapter 3b
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6

Spoiler for Swords and Shields: Chapter 7:
This chapter is definitely worth the wait. Hot sex! Sex! SEXXXXXX!
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Old 2012-09-08, 07:59   Link #37195
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Hey everyone! I have a chapter of Swords and Shields for you all. Sorry about the wait. Kuroi Hadou says you can blame him for the delay. =P

Enjoy~

Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3a
Chapter 3b
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6

Spoiler for Swords and Shields: Chapter 7:
Glorious metallurgy, Old Iron. ^^
*really can't comment more; in too much awe*
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Old 2012-09-08, 09:42   Link #37196
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It's good to see you update your work rather then advertising and uploading the work of others. And yes, the picture worked like a charm, I think.

I love the dynamic relationship between Yuuno and Signum, and you've nailed humor in this chapter really well - with Yuunno's devotion in his work and Signum's strict demeanor, it's like a girlfriend trying to stop her boyfriend's addiction with video games. There is also mention of Hayate's trip to boot-camp that made me chuckle like a Hyena. Don't forget Nanoha, she's good at exploiting other people in their embarrassing moments - she's the white devil after all.

I also have the feeling that Yuuno has a great potential to be an main-character in an harem based game or something. Thanks to Nanoha for quoting Signum's words in the last scene break about Yuuno being a "conqueror".

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I really hate my inner grammar-nazi-radar for spotting this small mistake. It ruins my fun for reading.
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Old 2012-09-08, 09:48   Link #37197
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Hoo boy. The morning after is gonna be fun.
Still, magnificent job my lord.
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I distinctly recall a image of Yuuno in a PS2 video game called "Lyrical Days"
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Old 2012-09-08, 10:38   Link #37198
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@Craxuan: is pregnant?!
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Old 2012-09-08, 12:21   Link #37199
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So, it's the Grail? xD
Eh, close enough. =P

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No words can truly explain my happiness after such wonderful update. I can only say: WORTH THE WAIT. You two did a wonderful job in the workshop. I'll patiently wait for the future update.
I'm glad you and everyone else enjoyed it. And that pic is hilarious.

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This chapter is definitely worth the wait. Hot sex! Sex! SEXXXXXX!
I'll admit, this reaction made me laugh something terrible. XD

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It's good to see you update your work rather then advertising and uploading the work of others. And yes, the picture worked like a charm, I think.

I love the dynamic relationship between Yuuno and Signum, and you've nailed humor in this chapter really well - with Yuunno's devotion in his work and Signum's strict demeanor, it's like a girlfriend trying to stop her boyfriend's addiction with video games. There is also mention of Hayate's trip to boot-camp that made me chuckle like a Hyena. Don't forget Nanoha, she's good at exploiting other people in their embarrassing moments - she's the white devil after all.
I hadn't thought about that angle before, but it does seem to fit. And Yuuno is a special kind of stubborn. Well, both he and Signum are. But right now its Yuuno being the mule. XD

And I have a few ideas for Nanoha's exploitation of the situation. >=3

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I also have the feeling that Yuuno has a great potential to be an main-character in an harem based game or something. Thanks to Nanoha for quoting Signum's words in the last scene break about Yuuno being a "conqueror".
This made me think of To Love-Ru Darkness with Hayate as Momo, trying to create a harem for Yuuno so he can spread the love and she can have all the women to grope.

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Spoiler for A minor mistake:


I really hate my inner grammar-nazi-radar for spotting this small mistake. It ruins my fun for reading.
Still, thank you for pointing that out.
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Old 2012-09-08, 14:51   Link #37200
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This made me think of To Love-Ru Darkness with Hayate as Momo, trying to create a harem for Yuuno so he can spread the love and she can have all the women to grope.
>.>
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Iron, have you been looking through other peoples' fanfic notes? D:
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