2012-10-06, 10:15 | Link #344 |
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Its indeed fast. It almost gave me a heart attack when I see the mail on my phone with a title of Shirogane which felt like its the ending............ but NOT!!!!!
WOOOO YOUR EXCELLENCY Shiragane TAKERU!!!! ahh totally loving how the arc ended and time for some harem antics.
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2012-10-06, 11:15 | Link #346 |
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Takeru would get his assed kicked or punch a.k.a. milky drill punch by Sumika if she ever finds out that Takeru kisses Yuuhi
I wonder what it means when the honor guard calls him "his excellency" does it mean he represents Yuuhi? does it mean his engage to Yuuhi? because hell will break loose or harem girls will get wild if that what it means. Poor Takeru and if it is indeed that next chapter we will be getting harem antics or extra feel in them. I see suffering to come on Shirogane. A lot worse than getting himself charred by cluster bomb or get eaten by beta or got a pipe skewers on his stomach.
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2012-10-07, 09:53 | Link #347 |
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Come on... a little bit of suffering in the hand of his harem won't kill him, don't you think?. He is the man who makes the impossible thing possible. But what tsunade666 said does indeed have something to think about. If it means "engage".... it's gonna be one hell of the story later.
Oh well... the harem arc begins...
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2012-10-07, 22:31 | Link #348 |
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I'm not really keen on harem hijinks. Call me old fashioned, but I have a preference for monogamous relationships.
That said, PaulXion really needs a BETA reader; it's decent enough but a few words here and there make me cringe. Also, decent end to that arc. And I think I'll stop reading, since I still haven't finished the trilogy, and haven't reached the despair stage yet
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2012-10-10, 13:44 | Link #349 | |
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I think he's like Takeru in this story in a way... looks incompetent, but still manage to catch the heart of the people (or reader in our cases )
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I'm not saying that I'm an expert in writing either, but those things that he did in his writing made me instantly thought of bad authors that I stumbled when trying to find a good fics in ff.net. You know..err, young author trying to write his/her shipping while doing bad OOC, dialogue heavy with little narrative and many other stuffs like that? Well Paul isn't as bad as that, but he just reminds me of them. but still, now that I re-read it some earlier part of that fic, those things actually make it easier for me to read. Let's just say that I don't dislike it as much as before Quote:
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2012-10-12, 00:08 | Link #354 |
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I don't really mind some japanese slipped in; it gives a little flavor and reminds the reader of the translation convention.
But maybe that's also because in real life, I'm fluent in English and Bahasa Malaysia, and swap between both sentences smoothly, sometimes even within the same sentence.
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2012-10-14, 13:38 | Link #358 | |
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Anyway thanks for bringing that up That's one more story to follow in time where there aren't many good reads like now
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2012-10-14, 14:18 | Link #359 |
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Yeeesss, yeeessss, feed the section more.
*Ekhm* Now that I keep listening to Jormungand's new season op I'm tempted to do a side-story to Comet after I finish current chapter. It would focus on the main human antagonists, and what they would be doing up until they're confronted in Yuukon; kinda like TSFiA volumes.
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