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Old 2012-10-06, 07:32   Link #341
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...No, seriously, I was rooting for him all the way.
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Old 2012-10-06, 09:21   Link #342
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Wow that was fast. Another update, and the ending left me a bit perplexed.
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Old 2012-10-06, 10:06   Link #343
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Yes a update !!! that was really fast
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Old 2012-10-06, 10:15   Link #344
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Its indeed fast. It almost gave me a heart attack when I see the mail on my phone with a title of Shirogane which felt like its the ending............ but NOT!!!!!


WOOOO YOUR EXCELLENCY Shiragane TAKERU!!!! ahh totally loving how the arc ended and time for some harem antics.
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Old 2012-10-06, 11:06   Link #345
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YES,NOW HE TRULY HAVE WHAT HE DESERVED!!!!

Considering he ran out of ass to kick for now,some good harem moments should be sufficient
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Old 2012-10-06, 11:15   Link #346
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Takeru would get his assed kicked or punch a.k.a. milky drill punch by Sumika if she ever finds out that Takeru kisses Yuuhi

I wonder what it means when the honor guard calls him "his excellency"
does it mean he represents Yuuhi? does it mean his engage to Yuuhi? because hell will break loose or harem girls will get wild if that what it means.

Poor Takeru and if it is indeed that next chapter we will be getting harem antics or extra feel in them. I see suffering to come on Shirogane. A lot worse than getting himself charred by cluster bomb or get eaten by beta or got a pipe skewers on his stomach.
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Old 2012-10-07, 09:53   Link #347
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Come on... a little bit of suffering in the hand of his harem won't kill him, don't you think?. He is the man who makes the impossible thing possible. But what tsunade666 said does indeed have something to think about. If it means "engage".... it's gonna be one hell of the story later.

Oh well... the harem arc begins...
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Old 2012-10-07, 22:31   Link #348
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I'm not really keen on harem hijinks. Call me old fashioned, but I have a preference for monogamous relationships.

That said, PaulXion really needs a BETA reader; it's decent enough but a few words here and there make me cringe. Also, decent end to that arc.

And I think I'll stop reading, since I still haven't finished the trilogy, and haven't reached the despair stage yet
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Old 2012-10-10, 13:44   Link #349
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I'm not really keen on harem hijinks. Call me old fashioned, but I have a preference for monogamous relationships.

That said, PaulXion really needs a BETA reader; it's decent enough but a few words here and there make me cringe. Also, decent end to that arc.

And I think I'll stop reading, since I still haven't finished the trilogy, and haven't reached the despair stage yet
I think I can agree with that, especially the the first few chapters of this story When I read it for the very first time, I thought it was made by a very incompetent writer.. but for some reasons, they just stick. I was so absorbed into it that I didn't realize I already got to Sadogashima arc and almost forgot to sleep

I think he's like Takeru in this story in a way... looks incompetent, but still manage to catch the heart of the people (or reader in our cases )
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Old 2012-10-10, 15:11   Link #350
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I think in fairness, Paul Xion is not a native English speaker ( can relate I am the same ) What got me hook was the story telling aspect ..
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Old 2012-10-11, 00:13   Link #351
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Wait,incompetent?

Maybe it's because I didn't read a lot of fanfiction but,the author managed to write a prologue that is quite good based on my standard
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Old 2012-10-11, 01:48   Link #352
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As long as I can understand the story it's fine with me. A little bit of grammar error should not be a problem.
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Old 2012-10-11, 13:44   Link #353
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Maybe it's because I didn't read a lot of fanfiction but,the author managed to write a prologue that is quite good based on my stan
I'm not too fond with how he writes the paragraph, and words like 'Geh', parentheses to write down the reaction and occasional japanese words that is slipped in it made me worried. Not to mention that he once wrote an author note right in the middle of the story and some emoticon like ^_^ or -_- in some chapters...

I'm not saying that I'm an expert in writing either, but those things that he did in his writing made me instantly thought of bad authors that I stumbled when trying to find a good fics in ff.net. You know..err, young author trying to write his/her shipping while doing bad OOC, dialogue heavy with little narrative and many other stuffs like that? Well Paul isn't as bad as that, but he just reminds me of them.

but still, now that I re-read it some earlier part of that fic, those things actually make it easier for me to read. Let's just say that I don't dislike it as much as before

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As long as I can understand the story it's fine with me. A little bit of grammar error should not be a problem.
I agree with this. I think what motivates the most in reading a story is that the content of the story itself and not the outer exterior of it.
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Old 2012-10-12, 00:08   Link #354
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I don't really mind some japanese slipped in; it gives a little flavor and reminds the reader of the translation convention.

But maybe that's also because in real life, I'm fluent in English and Bahasa Malaysia, and swap between both sentences smoothly, sometimes even within the same sentence.
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Old 2012-10-14, 05:58   Link #355
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Well this is interesting.

What if Yuuya was a Marine?

Muv-Luv Alternative: Semper Fi
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Old 2012-10-14, 06:50   Link #356
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Old 2012-10-14, 10:35   Link #357
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It was bound to happen. A Code Geass x Muv Luv fanfic.

Muv-Luv Alternative: Requiem
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Old 2012-10-14, 13:38   Link #358
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It was bound to happen. A Code Geass x Muv Luv fanfic.

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Did he change the timeline? I think everything was moving faster than they should..but then again, I don't remember the canon timeline all that well either

Anyway thanks for bringing that up That's one more story to follow in time where there aren't many good reads like now
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Old 2012-10-14, 14:18   Link #359
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Yeeesss, yeeessss, feed the section more.


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Now that I keep listening to Jormungand's new season op I'm tempted to do a side-story to Comet after I finish current chapter. It would focus on the main human antagonists, and what they would be doing up until they're confronted in Yuukon; kinda like TSFiA volumes.
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Old 2012-10-14, 19:01   Link #360
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well this is interesting.

What if yuuya was a marine?

muv-luv alternative: Semper fi
america fuck yeah ;_;7
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