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Old 2012-11-17, 05:32   Link #481
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Meanwhile At the Extra verse

The special agent Yuuya Bridges was Ordered to protect Subject Takamura"Hime" Yui at the dastardly plot of Sandek Hakuryou's high school Yui , Cryska Inia and Cui was enjoying home economics

Spoiler for Total panic eclipse Fumuffu :
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Old 2012-11-17, 14:41   Link #482
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And it's done!

http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.ph...ic/MuvLuvComet
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Old 2012-11-21, 03:08   Link #483
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Spoiler for Broke thought the 4th wall:
Are those the 1/12 scale Votoms? Suddenly I feel like getting one and painting it yellow, and another purple... if they can fit the figmas into them...
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Old 2012-11-21, 03:17   Link #484
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Are those the 1/12 scale Votoms? Suddenly I feel like getting one and painting it yellow, and another purple... if they can fit the figmas into them...
That Homura looks like a figma.

I can tell that for sure because I have the show's yuri couple here
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Old 2012-11-21, 04:16   Link #485
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Having been on a Big O watching spree, I have to wonder how well would the Big O do against the various BETA classes in combat?
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Old 2012-11-21, 05:37   Link #486
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@ grevierr it barely fit a figma ( depends on what figure ) you need to open the AT hatch its a tight fit .... you can forcefully close it but ... expect to damage both models ....
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Old 2012-11-22, 06:18   Link #487
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http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7112821/...-into-the-Loop

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Old 2012-11-22, 09:20   Link #488
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If the story drops. Bottle won't be enough. I'll throw a G-bomb.
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Old 2012-11-22, 10:15   Link #489
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My face when reading that chapter
>>>

Why would you deny Kashiwagi's advancement you bastard!!!

Also,missing G-bomb,great

BUT TO DENY HER ADVANCEMENT,WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT TAKERU!!!
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Old 2012-11-22, 16:14   Link #490
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because his dense

his body is made of steel, his brain is full Sumika and Beta
he can't understand women yet he made a harem -_-
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Old 2012-11-23, 09:23   Link #491
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If the story drops. Bottle won't be enough. I'll throw a G-bomb.
I guess we know who took that G-bomb.
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Old 2012-11-23, 12:35   Link #492
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The Russians ?
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Old 2012-11-23, 21:08   Link #493
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The Russians ?
Even worse,the BETA!!!
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Old 2012-11-23, 23:17   Link #494
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meanwhile at the assault Sadogahima hive Whiskey company is in trouble instead of Ikaruga his company of Type 00's to save the them

This is Urzu-7 Proceeding to assist Whiskey company ... Whiskey company Fall back and regroup

Spoiler for And He brought of his buddies too:


This what i get for re watching full metal panic Votoms 08th ms play re play MLA while thinking of fanfiction
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Old 2012-11-25, 11:49   Link #495
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Well this is.....interesting.

From Muv Luv Alternative Chronicles


While i'm still upset over the fanfic for including the Gundam SEED cast, i'm impressed of the author for his work. Especially this large group he's bringing together for the next chapter.
Guh.... I know I ... had.... a ... high.... resistance.. in reading fanfic but.... man this hits critical level in a way.

I don't like oc characters that stands too much in the way that the original characters are being ignored.

I tried to read it up to chapter 5 terminal and still trying to read it but my verdict to it comes when.... gundam from seed and gn drive comes into play........... the f*:0 when I realize that the guy collins guy has the same name as the author.... man.... it felt like the author insert himself on the story to save the world. I would love it if not for the overly perfect guy.

I hate kirito for this reason.

DON'T LIKE PERFECT MC!!!!!

This one felt the same when I read the armored core crossover with muv luv but at least adler is a character I would love to bash and hate that I ended up managing to read the story but this one...... ugh........ I .... will..... try........ to persevere in reading it........ but darn to many plot holes and mystery or just darn plot holes that I can't understand and I would like an explanation.
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Old 2012-11-25, 12:10   Link #496
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If and when the TE cast gets involved in Paul's fic how would they treat Takeru after they hear the news about him ?
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Old 2012-11-25, 12:37   Link #497
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Putting too much oc character tend to be a disaster. Much worse if it was author self insert. IMHO neglecting the main character in the fanfic means the story lose its originality. Some are ok,but most tend to have a godlike oc that pretty much destroying the story.

tsunade666 was right, that fanfic tend to make the reader banging their head at the monitor screen.It was too much... a so call perfect mc it's ridiculous.I do understand the rule of the fanfic writer: my story my rules but this is too much. Read until chapter 4,but discard it afterwards. My opinion, self insert author fic

Correct me if i was wrong ok.....
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Old 2012-11-25, 13:00   Link #498
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I hail from Spacebattles. There's a different style of Self Insert fic there: SBer ends up in the universe, is fully aware they're where they are, and generally suffering ensues

That said, I wouldn't entirely say self insert is totally wrong. It depends on the story you're trying to tell; My Unnamed Alternative Fanfic is set a few years prior to Total Eclipse, and involves a cast based on people I know; it's partially an exploration of how we woulda turned out had we existed in that verse.

Knowing the pains and evils of SI, I made sure to kill my alternate self first

There's a story-ish kinda alternate timeline fic out there called Red Dawn 20 that's essentially entirely SI fanfic of Red Dawn, though it's run more or less like a roleplay of sorts, with posters saying what "they" (or rather, their roleplay Red Dawn selves) got up to. It's actually pretty interesting...

But generally the reason SI gets a bad rep is because most new authors do SI and can't really control themselves and get carried away.
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Old 2012-11-25, 21:29   Link #499
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http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8606613/...tive-Semper-Fi

No wonder Yuuya decided to become a Marine.
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Old 2012-11-25, 22:04   Link #500
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If and when the TE cast gets involved in Paul's fic how would they treat Takeru after they hear the news about him ?
get wary of him and specially if they saw the video when Takeru was trashing the takemi and susanoo. Though I'm not sure for Hime because she is a honor guard. Maybe angry? though maybe not.
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