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Old 2012-12-18, 06:27   Link #37401
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I'm planning to write a Kamen Rider x Nanoha fic using Yuuno as the protagonist.
The problem is I can't decide which KR series should I pick...
My three main picks are OOO, Fourze and Wizard.
I'd go with either OOO or Wizard.

The former have the whole "creatures from ancient times being awakened". Perfect for an archeologist like Yuuno.

The latter have the mysterious ritual that created the Phantoms. Yuuno could be someone who was investigating the situation but unfortunately got involved in it.

Fourze and its theme of friendship suit Nanoha more.
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Old 2012-12-18, 06:49   Link #37402
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....(Imagine Nanoha as Faiz and Fate as Kaixa)

That would be cool but....
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Old 2012-12-23, 08:06   Link #37403
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Just something that I'm working on.

Spoiler for "Starlight Carnival':


-> Blue hair
-> Wields a spear

Yup, Chrono's going to be the Lancer of this.
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Old 2012-12-23, 11:14   Link #37404
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That was funny. I laugh a lot reading it, please keep it I will love to see what else will they do to get Vivio back. But if Chrono is really the Lancer... when is he going to die?
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Old 2012-12-23, 12:19   Link #37405
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I'm going to admit, I laughed. XD

A good bit of humor to bring back some life. =3
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Old 2012-12-23, 20:16   Link #37406
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That was funny. I laugh a lot reading it, please keep it I will love to see what else will they do to get Vivio back. But if Chrono is really the Lancer... when is he going to die?
Chapter 11: Final Destination Time!
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Old 2012-12-23, 21:01   Link #37407
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To be more like Lancer he shoudl die in chapter 2 but, hey, is your fic
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Old 2012-12-23, 21:09   Link #37408
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To be more like Lancer he shoudl die in chapter 2 but, hey, is your fic
Lancer died in episode 1. Chrono will be stab with laser swords in chapter 1.
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Old 2012-12-23, 21:10   Link #37409
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Is not often when Yuuno gets his revenge on Chrono.
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Old 2012-12-23, 21:56   Link #37410
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Lancer died in episode 1. Chrono will be stab with laser swords in chapter 1.
Point taken. But I will not mind regular swords
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Old 2012-12-23, 22:04   Link #37411
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Is not often when Yuuno gets his revenge on Chrono.
Not just Chrono. He's trolling EVERYONE.

How often does Yuuno get to be the fiendish mastermind?
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Old 2012-12-23, 22:41   Link #37412
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Point taken. But I will not mind regular swords
That's for the throwing swords game. With blindfold.

@Sunder

He's there to rein in Jail actually. Getting revenge is just a bonus.

Also, one of the game is beach volleyball.
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Old 2012-12-23, 23:17   Link #37413
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Oh lord, my guts hurt from laughing (I got stitches from my operation a few days ago. Oh the agony). It's hard to picture Jail and Yuuno getting along pretty well. I wonder if they were best friends before Strikers even started.

I feel bad for laughing at Chrono's predicament though. Revenge is such a bitch.
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Old 2012-12-24, 09:36   Link #37414
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*rises from the graves*

Just finished Part 2 of Chapter 12!... *wobble* you know, The Two Goddesses!

*collapses*

*crawls to laptop for final chappie*
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Old 2012-12-24, 11:11   Link #37415
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....(Imagine Nanoha as Faiz and Fate as Kaixa)

That would be cool but....
>Nanoha
>not Kuuga
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Old 2012-12-24, 11:52   Link #37416
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Spoiler for Miracles:


Eh, it appears I failed.

Oh, and kudos to those who can recognize all the fanfics in it.
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Old 2012-12-24, 15:36   Link #37417
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Uh, hi. You may remember me posting a fanfic here back in April, called Nanoha AtonerS. Well, that was part one, now I have part two up (all at once this time, even though it's quite a bit longer):

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7966224/...Nanoha-AtonerS

Would be interested in opinions and thoughts and stuff.

PS: Thanks a bunch to Nanya for beta-reading it again. ^^
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Old 2012-12-24, 15:58   Link #37418
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*rises from the graves*

Just finished Part 2 of Chapter 12!... *wobble* you know, The Two Goddesses!

*collapses*

*crawls to laptop for final chappie*
Just read it. Very nice. There are a few errors here and there, but it's still a very good read. Not to mention very creepy.

Well worth the wait I say and I'm looking forward to the conclusion. Because its looking to be one hell of one. =3

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Spoiler for Miracles:


Eh, it appears I failed.

Oh, and kudos to those who can recognize all the fanfics in it.
I don't think you failed. In fact I think the only thing truly lacking here is more meat on the interactions. Its a very good premise and I'd like to see more if possible. The Nanocrew visiting alternate timelines has a lot of potential and its good to see how you've tapped it.

I can definitely see how your writing's improved as well.

As for the fics... The Lives and Times of Kaleido Shirou, Leave of Absence, and I'm drawing a blank on the last one.

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Uh, hi. You may remember me posting a fanfic here back in April, called Nanoha AtonerS. Well, that was part one, now I have part two up (all at once this time, even though it's quite a bit longer):

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7966224/...Nanoha-AtonerS

Would be interested in opinions and thoughts and stuff.

PS: Thanks a bunch to Nanya for beta-reading it again. ^^
A bit short, so I can't really comment on it. But it looks like things are starting to heat up quite a bit. I would highly suggest longer, or at least meatier chapters. It may help draw readers in more to the setting you're creating.
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Old 2012-12-24, 19:45   Link #37419
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I too, have a new chapter of my work.

For those who read that spoiler I posted earlier, I'm gonna try to foreshadow it subtly in this arc. How'm I doing so far?
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Old 2012-12-24, 21:06   Link #37420
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@Iron

Thank you for your kind words. I used Cafe Ahnenerbe as a hub of sort, where the multiverse meet. It is especially prevalent during the Carnival Moment. And I admit that I sort of ran out of juice when the second Yuuno appeared.

As for the last one, well, it's I Stand Alone. Yuuno lost both arms and his right eye, remember? And in Aftermath chapter 2, Yuuno was being outfitted with cybernetics. Thus why his eyes look different to one another and he can't control his strength that well.
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