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Old 2012-12-27, 20:33   Link #37441
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What bothered me the most was the I Stand Alone version of Yuuno: as far as I understand he should be dead in the events of Jail attack or in the immediate aftermath (wasn't the other ending not being taken seriously by the author himself?). Second, he shouldn't be so... defeated as he feels: in the hypotetical case he survived he should be better taken cared of, but he feels the same if not worse. I don't think he should be the happiest man in any world but I think he should have felt not so bad about himself. After all, stopping that attack saving Hayate, Vivio and all those other people should have counted for something, right?


And while I'm not sure what eactly, I'm sure it has to mean something not even Old Iron could recognize him.
Thank you for your input. My thought when I wrote that was, even if they're worried about him after that, how many would stick around afterwards? Hayate and Chrono I can see, but not many others. Sure they'll chat with him and spend some time with him more, but that didn't change the fact that for a long time, they neglected Yuuno. I'd like to believe that somewhere inside of him, he resents some of them, but he didn't show it in public. Hayate is the only one who can see this, since she spends the most time with him compared to the otehrs.
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Old 2012-12-27, 21:12   Link #37442
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in Nanoha reality, Eisen wouldn't be able to rapidly shift between forms so easily.
Are you sure? Has anyone ever had a problem with their weapon changing too slowly?

If they did, they could also be attacked while doing their magical girl transformations.

I think the lengthy transformation (into barrier jackets or between device forms) is just eye-candy for the viewers.

At most, mages and knights sometimes take things slow and easy when they have the time to spare.
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Old 2012-12-29, 06:18   Link #37443
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And it all comes to an end.

... I can't believe I finished it. 108,090 words (well that includes Author's Notes, but whatever) in total. Just posted it up and would take 30 minutes to show.

I'm never doing it again.

... Probably.
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Old 2012-12-29, 10:37   Link #37444
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And it all comes to an end.

... I can't believe I finished it. 108,090 words (well that includes Author's Notes, but whatever) in total. Just posted it up and would take 30 minutes to show.

I'm never doing it again.

... Probably.
*pats on the back* Congrats.
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Old 2012-12-29, 12:29   Link #37445
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And it all comes to an end.

... I can't believe I finished it. 108,090 words (well that includes Author's Notes, but whatever) in total. Just posted it up and would take 30 minutes to show.

I'm never doing it again.

... Probably.
Wow, such a story you write.

I really liked how you fleshed our favorite cast and, of course, Hayate. The ups and downs of her life really grt under my skin, especially her relationship with Nanoha, Yuuno and Reunion.

Spoiler for last chapters:


A very good work, Crauxian, congratulation!!
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Old 2012-12-29, 16:18   Link #37446
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Thanks, your replies meant a lot to me.

I actually do have a sequel in mind, but unlike the The Two Goddesses the storyline was a little too vague in my head, so until I could have a clear idea on what to write (and fix the various logic errors first), I'm going to put this on hold.
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Old 2012-12-29, 17:14   Link #37447
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Well done Craxuan. I have to say its been one hell of a ride. All the flesh you gave to the cast really worked out in a superb manner. Not to mention the overall creepy tone of many things.

I will admit to being a slight confused by the ending, but I'm also suffering a severe headache so that may be why. XD

Still, well done. Well done indeed. =3
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Old 2012-12-29, 18:58   Link #37448
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Sup.

Spoiler for Potential series. "The Unforgiving I":
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Old 2012-12-29, 21:55   Link #37449
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Old 2012-12-31, 11:05   Link #37450
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Old 2012-12-31, 12:13   Link #37451
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A bit... longer than I planned :x

Still. IT'S ON NOW.
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Old 2012-12-31, 17:50   Link #37452
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A bit... longer than I planned :x

Still. IT'S ON NOW.
Spoiler for The Unforgiving II:
Ooh, one of my favorite premises - magitech VS tech. Interesting start.
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Old 2013-01-01, 00:25   Link #37453
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If I can make a recommendation for the beginning of the the new year, I thought that many of you might be interested in Game Theory since it was just completed and you could read it without waiting for the next chapter in painful anticipation. In it Precia accepts Fate and takes more proactive and positive steps in accomplishing her goal, meaning she doesn't act abusive and this changes the entire scope of the story, including the relationships between characters in canon.
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Old 2013-01-01, 00:40   Link #37454
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You might be interested in the inevitable sequel, though, given the way it ends.
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Old 2013-01-01, 02:28   Link #37455
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Btw, anyone interested in the latest Nanoha H-doujin game? XD XD
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Old 2013-01-01, 05:14   Link #37456
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A bit... longer than I planned :x

Still. IT'S ON NOW.
Spoiler for The Unforgiving II:
Yes! Yes! Yes! Another story with more battles and less over-rated and over-written romance stories of you know who are they couples!

Is this taken from the last Chapter of Kaiser's Divine Grimiore and I feel the Mecha and Magic battles are going to be awesome.

But there is still something off, it could be that this chapter is lacking an expression of doom. I can feel the dread that the characters are experiencing with their helplessness but the experience and portrayal of an upcoming Armageddon is not completely told.

I'll just have to wait for the upcoming chapter.

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Btw, anyone interested in the latest Nanoha H-doujin game? XD XD
Congratulations on finishing the two Goddesses.

I wonder where is Fate right now after she went rouge. I wish you did not bus-ed her.

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Old 2013-01-01, 10:46   Link #37457
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Btw, anyone interested in the latest Nanoha H-doujin game? XD XD
Wait, there is?
Who is the seme and uke?
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Old 2013-01-01, 14:23   Link #37458
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seme? uke?
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Old 2013-01-01, 18:08   Link #37459
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Revolution 12

Spoiler for Blood That Flows - Revolution 13:
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Old 2013-01-02, 00:03   Link #37460
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seme? uke?
Refer to Nanya01's pimp Yuuno.
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