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Old 2013-01-07, 22:12   Link #181
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I think one story that deserves a mention is Kirita the Kuroi Kenshi. Basically, it is a retelling of Sword Art Online with Kirito, Asuna, and several other characters being the opposite gender. A few characters, such as Klien and Agil, will remain the same gender, and their relationship with Kirita will have some differences and similarities to the canon storyline due to her gender. There have been two chapters released so far, and it has proven to have potential.


http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8863127/...e-Kuroi-Kenshi
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Old 2013-01-08, 18:26   Link #182
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Kirita's "I want to stay with you tonight" takes on a whole new level of Sugita-able wrong.
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Old 2013-01-09, 21:52   Link #183
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Kirita's "I want to stay with you tonight" takes on a whole new level of Sugita-able wrong.
What do you mean?
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Old 2013-01-10, 11:55   Link #184
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The fourth chapter of Fairy Dance Alternate has been posted. I would appreciate any and all feedback you can provide.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8698378/...ance-Alternate

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Old 2013-01-10, 17:32   Link #185
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What do you mean?
The time I heard "I want to stay with you tonight" before SAO, it was a girl speaking with a deadpan, and invited a tsukkomi from Sugita/Kyon:

"Isn't this kinda wrong?!"
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Old 2013-01-11, 10:39   Link #186
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The fourth chapter of Fairy Dance Alternate has been posted. I would appreciate any and all feedback you can provide.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8698378/...ance-Alternate
Yeah! Another chapter.
To be honest, there was a lot Asuna's POV talking but at least you did switch to the third person narration when it's time for other characters.
Can't wait to see how Asuna joins ALO.
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Old 2013-01-12, 18:01   Link #187
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Yeah! Another chapter.
To be honest, there was a lot Asuna's POV talking but at least you did switch to the third person narration when it's time for other characters.
Can't wait to see how Asuna joins ALO.
Well I am a little confused. Did you like this chapter or not?

It will be a little while before Asuna joins ALO, but I hope you will enjoy the building up that time.
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Old 2013-01-13, 00:55   Link #188
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Well I am a little confused. Did you like this chapter or not?

It will be a little while before Asuna joins ALO, but I hope you will enjoy the building up that time.
I do enjoy it except Asuna's narration felt long for me.
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Old 2013-01-13, 00:59   Link #189
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I do enjoy it except Asuna's narration felt long for me.
I can understand that. However, since Kirito is generally the narrator for the series except in the scenes he doesn't appear in, I figured I would go for the same route with Asuna. Not to mention, I think it makes it easier for me to get into her character and develop her relationships with other characters. I am personally glad how I portrayed Kirito and Asuna's relationship in the retelling of Sword Art Online.

Anyway, please feel free to leave a review (assuming you haven't left one under a different name). Even if you are not a member, I accept "guest" reviews, and I love hearing feedback.
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Old 2013-01-15, 06:44   Link #190
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The fanfic Halkegenia Online now has it's own TV Tropes page.

You guys should read this since it's constantly updated and the story gets more intriguing especially since it's a crossover with Familiar of Zero.
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Old 2013-01-17, 01:16   Link #191
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The fanfic Halkegenia Online now has it's own TV Tropes page.

You guys should read this since it's constantly updated and the story gets more intriguing especially since it's a crossover with Familiar of Zero.
That's good to hear for that fanfiction story and its writer. I wonder if my story will have the honor someday. Well it is going to be a long story, so it may happen along the way.
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Old 2013-01-17, 12:02   Link #192
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That's good to hear for that fanfiction story and its writer. I wonder if my story will have the honor someday. Well it is going to be a long story, so it may happen along the way.
Tell you what. Once i'm done doing a TV Tropes page for The Prince of Swords , i do one for your fanfic as well if there are more chapters and reviews.
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Old 2013-01-17, 14:02   Link #193
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Tell you what. Once i'm done doing a TV Tropes page for The Prince of Swords , i do one for your fanfic as well if there are more chapters and reviews.
That would be awesome! Thank you so much.

I am actually working on the fifth, sixth, and seventh chapters right now. I am primarily focused on the fifth of course, but I put down a few things here and there for the sixth and seventh chapters as well putting down plans for the chapters beyond that. I think the overall length of the story will be over twenty chapters, and I already know exactly how it will end.
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Old 2013-01-30, 10:41   Link #194
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Act 1 of Fairy Dance of Death has just ended.

Also, the fanfic has it's own TV Tropes page.
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Old 2013-02-07, 08:16   Link #195
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The next chapter of Fairy Dance of Death is out if anyone is interested.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8679666/...Dance-of-Death
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Old 2013-02-07, 11:19   Link #196
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^Yes! Sachi, Sasha and Slicia are in it.

Spoiler for ch14:
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Old 2013-02-07, 14:21   Link #197
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Who's Sasha again?
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Old 2013-02-08, 03:34   Link #198
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Sasha was a university student who took care of the kids trapped in Sword Art Online.

Anyway, it is time for Chapter 5 of Fairy Dance Alternate to be released. Please enjoy, leave a review, and vote on the poll.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8698378/...ance-Alternate
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Old 2013-02-09, 10:01   Link #199
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Halkegenia Online got more interesting.

Spoiler for c7-1 to c7-3:
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Old 2013-02-14, 13:02   Link #200
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Here is the cover to my story Fairy Dance Alternate that was produced by the gifted Princesswanted.

http://my.deviantart.com/art/coverSAO-354249843

Hey Mr. Terrorist, if you do make a TVTropes page for Fairy Dance Alternate, can you put this picture on display there similar to how the TVTropes page for the Naruto fanfiction story "Team 8" has a picture representing that story?


Speaking of TVTropes, my story has been put on the recommendation page. Seeing that happen is really awesome.

http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.ph...SwordArtOnline
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