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Old 2012-12-22, 00:49   Link #2841
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What happened to Mr. Kyon' fanfics? I haven't been here in a while and the Halloween fic sounded interesting, but it's seems like all his stories are deleted?
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Old 2012-12-24, 12:19   Link #2842
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So I wrote that Christmas fic I talked about earlier

A Dual Christmas Tale: Two level fives, two confessions, two couples, two dates, and two tiny Santa costumes. It's Christmas time in Academy City and two unexpected new couples will be born and experience their first Christmas dates. Oneshot. Touma/Misaki Misaka/Thor.
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Old 2012-12-24, 13:41   Link #2843
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So I wrote that Christmas fic I talked about earlier

A Dual Christmas Tale: Two level fives, two confessions, two couples, two dates, and two tiny Santa costumes. It's Christmas time in Academy City and two unexpected new couples will be born and experience their first Christmas dates. Oneshot. Touma/Misaki Misaka/Thor.
-spits out drink-

Holy Pairings of Crack Batman!

Oh, and Merry Christmas everyone.
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Old 2012-12-24, 15:52   Link #2844
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Misaki X Touma!!! Great pairing! the hell flere where's your story. Its been ages! WE WANT MORE MISAKI!
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Old 2012-12-24, 19:02   Link #2845
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Misaki X Touma!!! Great pairing! the hell flere where's your story. Its been ages! WE WANT MORE MISAKI!
I had originally planned on Misaki running into #10032 on the Vol12 date for their first meeting, but the current development in Railgun manga blew it out of the water. The current railgun manga plot with Misaki is better than anything I could think up, so I'm putting my fic on hold for now.
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Old 2012-12-24, 19:55   Link #2846
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I had originally planned on Misaki running into #10032 on the Vol12 date for their first meeting, but the current development in Railgun manga blew it out of the water. The current railgun manga plot with Misaki is better than anything I could think up, so I'm putting my fic on hold for now.
Nooooooo!
Personally, I like your fic better than the manga. Right now, Misaki's a b*tch in the manga, while in your fic...well, you give her more detail, more insight.
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Old 2012-12-25, 03:11   Link #2847
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So I wrote that Christmas fic I talked about earlier

A Dual Christmas Tale: Two level fives, two confessions, two couples, two dates, and two tiny Santa costumes. It's Christmas time in Academy City and two unexpected new couples will be born and experience their first Christmas dates. Oneshot. Touma/Misaki Misaka/Thor.
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-spits out drink-

Holy Pairings of Crack Batman!

Oh, and Merry Christmas everyone.
Same here. Wish there was some more to that fic.
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Old 2013-01-11, 19:28   Link #2848
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Hello everyone! I've been starting work on a To Aru fic, largely as a way to get back into writing. After rearranging the plot a bit, Hattori Hanzou ended up being one of the fic's main characters, which is a problem because I don't really have a good feel for his character. The only useful thing that the wiki has to say about his personality is that he's "kind of a frivolous character," which is only helpful in that it tells me that I'm probably writing him wrong, though I've so far only written one scene with him in it. Would anyone be able to help me with this?
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Old 2013-01-11, 20:10   Link #2849
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Same here. Wish there was some more to that fic.
And now it got real .

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Hello everyone! I've been starting work on a To Aru fic, largely as a way to get back into writing. After rearranging the plot a bit, Hattori Hanzou ended up being one of the fic's main characters, which is a problem because I don't really have a good feel for his character. The only useful thing that the wiki has to say about his personality is that he's "kind of a frivolous character," which is only helpful in that it tells me that I'm probably writing him wrong, though I've so far only written one scene with him in it. Would anyone be able to help me with this?
Just try and lets see how it goes .
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Old 2013-01-11, 20:15   Link #2850
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Hello everyone! I've been starting work on a To Aru fic, largely as a way to get back into writing. After rearranging the plot a bit, Hattori Hanzou ended up being one of the fic's main characters, which is a problem because I don't really have a good feel for his character. The only useful thing that the wiki has to say about his personality is that he's "kind of a frivolous character," which is only helpful in that it tells me that I'm probably writing him wrong, though I've so far only written one scene with him in it. Would anyone be able to help me with this?

Hanzou, from what little I know of him from his short appearance in vol 15 to his relatively important appearance in NT1, is that he comes off as the reliable partner best friend character to Hamazura. You can try to read SS2 if you want to know more.


The thing about writing characters that the author doesn't really touch on as often is that you can add in little bits of your own personal flavoring so long as it doesn't clash with what we already know. Don't be afraid to give them quirks that you build up from just the smallest of canon scenes.


To use one of my own examples with Kakine and Girl-in-dress
My entire oneshot was just based on their one interaction in vol 15

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The girl pulled out her cell phone and called a SCHOOL comrade.

“I lost my target. There’s only a baby, a mother, and a baby carriage around here. …Do you think it’s possible that man disguised himself as a baby, a mother, or a baby carriage?”

She was called an idiot and told to die in response, so she hung up and put her phone back in her pocket.
Admittedly, I've also used something from Nobuchi

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Old 2013-01-11, 20:23   Link #2851
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I'm trying hard but I can barely make a picture of Kakine going "Uruse, shine, baka!" at the cellphone .
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Old 2013-01-11, 20:36   Link #2852
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Hello everyone! I've been starting work on a To Aru fic, largely as a way to get back into writing. After rearranging the plot a bit, Hattori Hanzou ended up being one of the fic's main characters, which is a problem because I don't really have a good feel for his character. The only useful thing that the wiki has to say about his personality is that he's "kind of a frivolous character," which is only helpful in that it tells me that I'm probably writing him wrong, though I've so far only written one scene with him in it. Would anyone be able to help me with this?
Sadly there isn't much about Hanzou. He make an apperence in Toaru Majutsu no Index Side Story 2, Where he falls in love with Yomikawa Aiho and also plays a part in New Testament 1.

You are going to have to read those novels to get a better feel for his character
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Old 2013-01-11, 20:51   Link #2853
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I did recently finish reading NT volume 1, but I generally have trouble getting the feel for characters in general. That said, I'm glad there's a decent amount of leeway. I should probably read that side-story.

Here's the only scene with him that I've written. Keep in mind that I was basically writing whatever was going through my head at the time, so it's terrible. The time-frame probably doesn't work, Hamazura's probably OOC, I probably got events wrong, etc. Normally I'd do a lot of revision first (To clean up my writing style if nothing else), but advice from you guys would probably be more useful more quickly than any revisions I could do myself.

Of course, it helps that this scene outlines the plot somewhat. It's also worth noting that for whatever reason I decided to try imitating the writing style for the Baka-Tsuki Translations and I should probably stop talking and just put up the excerpt shouldn't I.

Edit: Oh, and there's spoilers for NT Volume 1 in there. Should probably mention that.

Spoiler for Excerpt:
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Old 2013-01-11, 20:52   Link #2854
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I'm trying hard but I can barely make a picture of Kakine going "Uruse, shine, baka!" at the cellphone .
It could work!
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Old 2013-01-11, 21:19   Link #2855
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...Alright, so I reread the SS Volume (Or at least, the bits with Hanzou in them) and I think I've got a better feel for them. I'll need to rewrite his dialogue in the snippet I posted -- he probably shouldn't be talking so formally -- But I think I can start writing new scenes with him now. It was good to know that he's not particularly well-established in canon, though I'm afraid that might mean the character (And thus the fix) won't draw much interest. Since it would probably be poor form to just post snippets in this thread or something, I guess I'll just let you know when I think I have a chapter ready -- I intend to post it over on Spacebattles. I'm still interested in knowing what you think, though, and may ask for help in the future.

Thank you very much!
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Old 2013-01-11, 21:46   Link #2856
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I'm trying hard but I can barely make a picture of Kakine going "Uruse, shine, baka!" at the cellphone .
What do you mean, that always computes! Especially with the Fren/kakine-stein crack!
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Old 2013-01-12, 20:00   Link #2857
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For those of you who care, I posted the first chapter of it over at space battles:
http://forums.spacebattles.com/threa...-toaru.246628/
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Old 2013-01-17, 10:44   Link #2858
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I'm sad for the lack of fan fic for this series. I've always check in fanfiction.net but I always found none that interest me and even if there is. Its not being updated (still waiting for an update on Index and Madoka crossover)

Is there other sites or forum that has good fanfiction for index series?
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Old 2013-01-17, 14:44   Link #2859
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I'll put it this way, FF.net is as big as it gets.
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Old 2013-01-23, 09:16   Link #2860
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I had a stray thought for a fanfic.

What if Saten was actually a magician sent to infiltrate AC, like Tsuchimikado but from a small cabal?
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