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Old 2013-01-21, 05:09   Link #39821
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Hmm, I wonder if I should tread around the bush.
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Old 2013-01-21, 05:15   Link #39822
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Huh?

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Old 2013-01-21, 05:20   Link #39823
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Y'now, increasingly unyouthful attitude between the main pair...

The problem is that means I have to kick it up to M rating, sheesh.
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Old 2013-01-21, 05:31   Link #39824
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Just don't make it blatant. You can imply the characters having sex: Just don't show it. Hell, when I was younger Gundam Seed showed up on CARTOON NETWEORK. They didn't even bother censoring Flay seducing Kira or Nichol's death; they just cut away at the last second.
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Old 2013-01-21, 05:36   Link #39825
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^ this

Maybe I'll just use Mirage Colloid and sneaking past the radar.

Admittedly, it's EXTREMELY FUNNY that 100% of shonen fanfiction should be classified as MA, because we have explicit violence described all the damn time.

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Suitable for teens, 13 years and older, with some violence, minor coarse language, and minor suggestive adult themes.

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Not suitable for children or teens below the age of 16 with non-explicit suggestive adult themes, references to some violence, or coarse language. Fiction M can contain adult language, themes and suggestions.
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Old 2013-01-21, 05:42   Link #39826
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Human's tend to be stupid; you can gore someone in a fictional and sometimes real media and no one will bat an eye at it. But when a freaking virtual nipple flashes on screen for a microsecond you get the immediate red flag.

Hell, this happens with sex related things at all. You know the Regular Show? Characters are shown getting into crazy shit and getting hurt with no problems, but the presence of ONE condom for ONE split second was enough for the episode to be re-drawn.

Anyway, is there any estimate when I can get the picture? I'll update the cover for it.
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Old 2013-01-21, 05:43   Link #39827
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Tonight

Maybe 2-4 hour, sorry, I'm kind of busy right now.
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Old 2013-01-21, 06:00   Link #39828
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Ummm


This is the best I can do for the moment, if you're not satisfied I'll do extra for sure.
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Old 2013-01-21, 06:01   Link #39829
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Shit, that's almost perfect! Can I ask just a couple more things?
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Old 2013-01-21, 06:05   Link #39830
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Sure, go ahead
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Old 2013-01-21, 06:08   Link #39831
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1. Can you make the eyes yellow? Sorry.

2. Remove the cast? Both his arms are bandaged but he still moves around and swing a sword.

3. Change the shirt? Nothing fancy, but something like a Renaissance era shirt that commoners would wear.

Also, what fic do you need checked? Is it the KH one?
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Old 2013-01-21, 06:19   Link #39832
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Maybe the slider one, but it's unfinished to say at the least.

As for KH, I have stuff to consider, but I put it on hold for now. So either way, you can relax or write your own.

Ah, the cast Anyway, how about the neck?
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Old 2013-01-21, 06:24   Link #39833
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@ Senpai - How big is it? And am I allowed to add words?

Can you remove it as well? This is medieval time so he doesn't have those yet. Also, here: http://assassinscreed.wikia.com/wiki...rotherhood.png

Something to base the clothes on.
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Old 2013-01-21, 06:34   Link #39834
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What do you want to add?

Also to give contrast, I give a lush beige (y'now, those mud-drenched slave-like clothes) instead of gray shirt.
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Old 2013-01-21, 06:40   Link #39835
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As adding details and character actions. I won't change the plot

Also, can you keep it Gray or White? It's supposed to look neutral colored so dirt and much are noticeable on it.
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Old 2013-01-21, 06:44   Link #39836
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If you want I'll entitle you co writer. Blitz do this sort of work too. It helped me MUCH.

Sure thing, should I add traces of blood (and how much)?
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Old 2013-01-21, 06:48   Link #39837
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Sure, but what about the Wincest story? That's been going on for a while now.

Nope, but could you add just the barest traces of burnt skin making its way past his eye and arm bandages? Just redden the skin and it should be enough.
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Old 2013-01-21, 06:55   Link #39838
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Which one? ST is pout on hold until Blitz say anything, and I'm in no mood for rapey-rapey

PHEW! I finished at last...

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Old 2013-01-21, 06:58   Link #39839
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The longer one. Has Blitz contacted you at all about it these past months?

SWEEETTT! Though I can't help but get the feeling that's supposed to be a female Was the original pic not male or is he just drawn in a pretty way?
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Old 2013-01-21, 07:01   Link #39840
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Nope, I'll wait until April or May and see if he pop up somehow. (That means ~1 year hiatus) If not, then I'll continue the draft by myself (and hope you have time to help)

It was a girl, but the picture itself is VERY boyish compared to rest (as you can see in the first one I posted)
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