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Old 2006-01-05, 22:39   Link #1
RevoltersDS
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The Transformation

This was just a random sketch i did in 2 hours.
Any comments or improvements i should make are welcome.

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Old 2006-01-05, 22:52   Link #2
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No real suggestions because I have the artistic skills of a small tuna casserole, but one comment: very cool. Not to defile your work, but that "concept" would make a great tattoo.

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Old 2006-01-06, 00:23   Link #3
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Wow! That's really cool~~~ *0* I don't know much about anatomy, but the waist maybe a little small.
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Old 2006-01-06, 10:53   Link #4
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yeah the waist is DEFINATELY small but that's more of a style thing for me. I do that on purpose.
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Old 2006-01-06, 12:03   Link #5
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it real good but reminds me of an octopus...even tho it shouldnt!
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Old 2006-01-07, 09:26   Link #6
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good enough as a stand alone new style~~(western style!?)~(personally i hated male chara...so....)

if that only take you 2 hours....i think you should be a fine artist~you should be ok with or without advise anyway~

more works to show might be cool~fightO
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Old 2006-01-07, 19:49   Link #7
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it's really nice, but a thing to anatomy... he has no back muscles so with such stomach muscles and nothing on his back he'd break in a half insead of evaporating but the rest like hands and face is great
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Old 2006-01-12, 20:59   Link #8
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I would have to agree with Wolcik there. But your muscle definition is not bad as well as your eye for detail. Seeing your strokes do you also use colored pencils as part of your forte?
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Old 2006-01-15, 19:04   Link #9
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no that was all done with pencils of different sizes. 3H to 6B
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Old 2006-01-19, 20:02   Link #10
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No what I mean is do you also use coloured pencils in your other other works. Base upon your technique I see you have a very strong amptitude for it. Plus since you also used a range of different pencils it is also a very good base. I would humbly suggest that you try broaden that base by trying out pastels and maybe even charcoal. I see "tight" prospects for you...
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Old 2006-01-22, 06:53   Link #11
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I really like the picture and i couldnt have done any better but i think the thumb looks abit out of place. I cant really say how it should be because i struggle drawing hands. Its very nice work though. It would make a awesome tattoo.
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