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Old 2013-02-04, 03:51   Link #40161
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Sending Vantier(Plush toy mode) is a conspiracy by New Edge.

It was alone the line of: "Why not?" (since there are already so many conspiracy going on why not add in their own )
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Old 2013-02-04, 06:32   Link #40162
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You might have a little too much on your hands if you keep adding stuffs...
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Old 2013-02-04, 07:15   Link #40163
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Spoiler for Spaaaaaace~:
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Old 2013-02-04, 08:32   Link #40164
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"I am the shade that abates the scorching light,
I am the malice that reflects your will,
I am the despair you wield as hope.
Remember well as you take me in hand.
You are not I. And I, not you.
We act as one but we think as two."--IS core 0
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Old 2013-02-04, 12:50   Link #40165
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You might have a little too much on your hands if you keep adding stuffs...
Well.... you have to admit the world is a big place....

Which is why I end up keep adding stuff. -_-|||.

I think I will cancel that conspiracy and cut down some of the story plan.
==

However, since I have a problem with the tone of voice being use.... I will make the narrator be as lemony as possible, expressing his own opinion about events and people.

The narrator's full name is Cyril Alfred.

=

Title of story:
Vantier Project: Optimizer

Story plan:

> Heroine introduction

> Male IS pilots: Introduction of Joan, Edelwiss, Winner.
> Female IS pilot stuff (probably include bullying part)
> Tanteshi Arrive!

> Kanzashi arc including second Golem attack on ISA
> Vantier deployment (Same time as Golem attack....)

>Cannonball fast.
> Phantom Task attack.
> Battle against Phantom Task.

The rest are cut for sequel hook: Project Maelstrom....

=

Cyril: "Here is a list of OC which one certainly would not find interesting considering that it is most the same as what the author posted few post back but with names to fill in the blanks..."

Spoiler for cut for length:


Might include other OCs to make it a fanfic of fanfic just for the lol but I really need to read up on them first.
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Old 2013-02-04, 13:02   Link #40166
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I can understand what Stratos mean though, most author puzzled when they saw mountainous pile of infodump even if it contained the entire concept and summary their own works. Hmm, what could I say, Step by Step

But once again, your fic your style
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Old 2013-02-04, 20:59   Link #40167
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I can understand what Stratos mean though, most author puzzled when they saw mountainous pile of infodump even if it contained the entire concept and summary their own works. Hmm, what could I say, Step by Step

But once again, your fic your style
Actually, I am not puzzled at all because the concept are actually placed on a timescale in my head while I am at certain point of time, I only think of things are happening during that time period.

Also base concept are ran through so many times in my head that I actually memorize some of them (not in detail though but since I post my concept and idea here, I can always use search function to refer back to them if I can't recall the full detail).

Also,

You keep mentioning it before: They are quite vague because it give me the freedom to alter things along the way. So long as I reach the same conclusion, it's fine.
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Lemony comment practice:
Spoiler for For main cast?:
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Old 2013-02-05, 00:31   Link #40168
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Taking cues from Prototype and Guyver...

What if Charles is not exactly human but a Terminator-esque I.S. that convince itself to be Charlotte's brother? Granted, since it's body construct operate on molecular level, the I.S. is perfectly human when it want to (except the core embedded inside the brain).

The reason of this is because Charlotte made contact with it and felt her loneliness, thus imagining a scenario where it can be her companion.
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Old 2013-02-05, 05:43   Link #40169
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First thing that I can relate that to is a male Terminatrix =\
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Old 2013-02-05, 06:05   Link #40170
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Been a while since I've been here Anything going on?
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Old 2013-02-05, 06:10   Link #40171
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The usual.

EDIT: Hey, a scene!

Spoiler for Juices:
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Old 2013-02-05, 07:00   Link #40172
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So nothing new? Damn.
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Old 2013-02-05, 07:01   Link #40173
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A little more dept reason why New Edge send in Plush toy instead of a human being:

There is a critical patch which somebody(Cyril) forgot to apply. Since all female employees who are avail on the ground, don't know how to apply the patch, he has to go there himself but he can't go to ISA as a guy because Males aren't allowed in ISA ground.

Reason why males aren't allowed in ISA because they have no reason to be there (to explain why Ichika can't find any male staff on ISA). To enter, males need to apply permit (another gender discrimination thing) and that take a long time so the New Edge decide to go for a loophole in the rule.

@Eratas: I am about 10% more productive now. Currently trying to find time to type out the whole stuff.
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Old 2013-02-05, 07:40   Link #40174
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@ Eras
Well, nothing new but it's still quite productive, actually.

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First thing that I can relate that to is a male Terminatrix =\
The worst part is that he knew he wasn't a human and doesn't bother about the creepy/uncanny reaction he receive (even though he MOSTLY indistinguishable, unless MRI or X-Ray is used).

....Until he met Gunwolf, cue epic match to the death (They came from opposite faction in their original world) FemIchika and Charlotte thankfully managed to intervene.
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Old 2013-02-05, 09:37   Link #40175
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What if all the IS were designed to be visually closer to what they were named after?
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Old 2013-02-05, 09:41   Link #40176
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Random stuff that happen before the story:

Vantier Project: Optimizer

Spoiler for Stage Setting::


No Lemony Narrator yet since he was not on-stage yet.
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Old 2013-02-05, 10:34   Link #40177
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What if all the IS were designed to be visually closer to what they were named after?
And what they're named after? If you mean animal/flower/specific motif, then... that would be fun, but we all knew about anime-law that non-human design is inflexible.

Hence I nerf all inhuman mecha in specific areas and boost them in others

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Spoiler for Possible Reflections ending:

Yeah, way to go there.
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Old 2013-02-05, 19:07   Link #40178
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@ ZeroXSEED:

What's the name of that manga?
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Old 2013-02-05, 20:27   Link #40179
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What if all the IS were designed to be visually closer to what they were named after?
-_-
Blue Tear might work.... (Teardrop)
Shenlong might work....(Eastern Dragon?)
Akatsubaki might work(Flower motif)

But what about Byakushiki and Schwarzer Regen?
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Old 2013-02-05, 23:03   Link #40180
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@ Staples
I dunno, I always have that picture for years and forgot the sauce name. Sorry.
Sacred Twins ending may apply too.

@ Age
It got worse, you have like... snowflake-shaped sword (Yukihira?)

Schwarzer Regen... "Black raindrop"? And lets proceed to Silver Gospel...
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