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Old 2013-01-31, 17:04   Link #37501
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Well my friend has written several shorts for our co-op project, so far just titled "Strife" (or Nanoha Strife, to be all proper and formal). I'll just post a few for now, rather then dump the roughly dozen he's written so far.

Look at OC for the profile of the original character featured in these, Britta a TSAB agent. One you don't publicly acknowledge and only kind of send to get the job done, regardless of the cost.

Spoiler for Those limits...:


As for this second one, we have Roderick, who basically is Britta's handler.

Spoiler for Glass Houses, Big Stones:


Enjoy! I'll pass along any feedback or whatever. There might be some format issues, as well, copy/paste doesn't copy formatting. Lazy thing.
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Old 2013-01-31, 21:01   Link #37502
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They moved from the battlecruiser to the dreadnought in Ch8.
Nonono, I meant the dreadnought with that Zealot General Vivio OHK'd. They're still on it?
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Old 2013-02-01, 04:12   Link #37503
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Nonono, I meant the dreadnought with that Zealot General Vivio OHK'd. They're still on it?
Ah, got confused there. Yes, they are still on it.
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Old 2013-02-02, 16:26   Link #37504
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Hey everybody, Iron here with a status update.

Swords and Shields chapter 8 was sent to beta and subsequently put through a shredder. So now that the beta release's bugs have been found, I get to go through and fix them. And there were quite a few. Not nearly as many as in... that chapter, but let us not speak further of the abomination I attempted to call writing before Kuroi beat me over the head with it. There is also a lot of expansion I missed that needs filling, not to mention the fleshing out of certain issues and the reordering of the scenes.

So worry not, the next chapter is on its way~
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Old 2013-02-02, 16:30   Link #37505
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Yay! i'll be waiting for it xD!
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Old 2013-02-04, 06:47   Link #37506
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Hey everybody, Iron here with a status update.

Swords and Shields chapter 8 was sent to beta and subsequently put through a shredder. So now that the beta release's bugs have been found, I get to go through and fix them. And there were quite a few. Not nearly as many as in... that chapter, but let us not speak further of the abomination I attempted to call writing before Kuroi beat me over the head with it. There is also a lot of expansion I missed that needs filling, not to mention the fleshing out of certain issues and the reordering of the scenes.

So worry not, the next chapter is on its way~
Ypieee! You're back, it would be nice to see new chapter of SaS.

Well, after managing to beat some of my lazyness back I write the first part of stage 2.

Stage 1 is here, by the way.

Stage 2. Road to Camelot.

Spoiler for part1:

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Old 2013-02-04, 13:28   Link #37507
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But the universe wasn't really unfair, she thought, and her mouth quirked. It just didn't give much of a damn one way or the other.
- The Short Victorious War, David Weber

Spoiler for X: END GAME:

Spoiler for Epilogue: Unforgiven:

Spoiler for Author Afterword:
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Old 2013-02-04, 21:42   Link #37508
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One heck of a ride.
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Old 2013-02-06, 14:34   Link #37509
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An Iron appears with a chapter of Swords and Shields. Ye hath waited long enough. I hope you enjoy it and you may thank Kuroi Hadou for the superb beta work.

Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3a
Chapter 3b
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7

Spoiler for Swords and Shields: Chapter 8a:
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Old 2013-02-06, 14:35   Link #37510
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Part 2, complete with Omake.

Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3a
Chapter 3b
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8a

Spoiler for Swords and Shields: Chapter 8b:
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Old 2013-02-06, 21:13   Link #37511
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I don't believe. Something this this... beautiful and no one commented? For shame!

Exceptional works Iron. The story, the inner turmoil, the differents between the two - one who never knew romance and one who knew - were very well described.

Also, the omake was kinda funny. So wait, Yuuno was forced by Hayate to dress up as a pirate once?
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Old 2013-02-06, 22:23   Link #37512
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Yuuno should have went as Gokai Green.
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Old 2013-02-06, 22:53   Link #37513
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Thoroughly enjoyed your newest edition to your piece. Nice thoughts and character interaction permeating though each person. I cannot wait to see the conclusion to this wonderful story.

(On a side note we need to see Hayate and crew following them on their date making all kinds of comments)
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Old 2013-02-06, 23:24   Link #37514
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I think I enjoyed the omake most lol. That was hilarious.
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Old 2013-02-07, 03:59   Link #37515
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EPIC pure conversation chapter as of yet, I have a hard time BLINKING even.

And the omake

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"...She really showed you the eyepatch"
Priceless.
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Old 2013-02-07, 06:31   Link #37516
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Yuuno nearly fell over at the taunt. "I didn't 'plunder' anything! .... Well, Signum, maybe."
Fixed for all.
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Old 2013-02-07, 10:20   Link #37517
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In fact, the omake's so good I have to post my compliments here again! 'Shiver her timbers' XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD
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Old 2013-02-07, 15:30   Link #37518
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I don't believe. Something this this... beautiful and no one commented? For shame!

Exceptional works Iron. The story, the inner turmoil, the differents between the two - one who never knew romance and one who knew - were very well described.

Also, the omake was kinda funny. So wait, Yuuno was forced by Hayate to dress up as a pirate once?
I'm glad you enjoyed it. Originally that flashback wasn't even going to be in there. But Kuroi pointed out a lot of problems that would pop up if it wasn't. It turned out for the better by a great deal by having it. =3

And that is... one way of interpreting the omake. XD

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Thoroughly enjoyed your newest edition to your piece. Nice thoughts and character interaction permeating though each person. I cannot wait to see the conclusion to this wonderful story.

(On a side note we need to see Hayate and crew following them on their date making all kinds of comments)
I hope to make it one you'll thoroughly enjoy. And I may have to take that into consideration. Hayate is a schemer after all.

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In fact, the omake's so good I have to post my compliments here again! 'Shiver her timbers' XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD
Everyone seems to love this omake. XD

You may actually blame Negima for its inspiration. Guess who said the key line and get a cookie~

Still, I am really happy everyone enjoyed it so much. Now fasten your seatbelts. Right now, the next chapter is looking to be the last. >=3
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Old 2013-02-07, 17:44   Link #37519
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I'm glad you enjoyed it. Originally that flashback wasn't even going to be in there. But Kuroi pointed out a lot of problems that would pop up if it wasn't. It turned out for the better by a great deal by having it. =3

And that is... one way of interpreting the omake. XD


I hope to make it one you'll thoroughly enjoy. And I may have to take that into consideration. Hayate is a schemer after all.


Everyone seems to love this omake. XD

You may actually blame Negima for its inspiration. Guess who said the key line and get a cookie~

Still, I am really happy everyone enjoyed it so much. Now fasten your seatbelts. Right now, the next chapter is looking to be the last. >=3
Cookie to mean to write a snippet of a pairing?
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Old 2013-02-08, 10:58   Link #37520
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I hope to make it one you'll thoroughly enjoy. And I may have to take that into consideration. Hayate is a schemer after all.

Still, I am really happy everyone enjoyed it so much. Now fasten your seatbelts. Right now, the next chapter is looking to be the last. >=3
I'm expecting them to dress up in some ridiculous costume. Like trenchcoat and sunglasses.

... Wait, what? The ride's about to end? You're not gonna pull the Time Skip ending are you?
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