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Old 2013-02-09, 19:15   Link #40261
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Yeah, I updated 12 HOURS AGO.
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Old 2013-02-09, 19:39   Link #40262
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Morning fellas.


About the Gospel incarnation I talked about ~two pages ago.

Spoiler for Stygian Gospel:
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Old 2013-02-09, 19:57   Link #40263
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@eras: it's anytime between 15 minutes to 24 hours. If it doesn't show. Re-upload.
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Old 2013-02-09, 20:22   Link #40264
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Have you tried uploading on another browser?
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Old 2013-02-09, 20:32   Link #40265
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...It's already up.
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Old 2013-02-09, 22:05   Link #40266
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I'll just leave the ISs chart, to complement the characters chart y left 2 pages ago.

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As always, questions / criticism is accepted.
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Old 2013-02-09, 22:56   Link #40267
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@ Stratos - Except I should already be in Chapter 3 :/
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Old 2013-02-09, 23:09   Link #40268
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Oh shoot...

Guess you'll need to re-upload it then.
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Old 2013-02-09, 23:11   Link #40269
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Dude, this is horseshit! It says Chapter 3 in the regular archive but when you click the story only 2 are available.
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Old 2013-02-10, 01:25   Link #40270
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@ Eras

Already there

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I'll just leave the ISs chart, to complement the characters chart y left 2 pages ago.

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Only one

First, a completed GAU-8 is larger than a minivan (6.0 m)
And it's 380 kg empty, without engine or magazine
Gun + 1150 rounder Magazine is 1.83 tons, and still no engine.

I suggest you just use similar, albeit smaller, fictional weapon. My suggestion is 12.7 or 14.5mm, medium caliber rifle for I.S. (think 7,62mm NATO or 30-06 springfield in human terms), at full power, Charles' 54 caliber (13.7mm) rifle is more than enough to take anything short of golem, and only because it's semi-automatic. So a gatling with such caliber is overkill already.
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Old 2013-02-10, 01:46   Link #40271
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I saw it and it really is overkill. I'll change it later for something a little smaller. The reason for a minigun is because the main character REALLY sucks at using guns... let's say that the stormtroopers have better aim that the guy has. At least with a minigun he could hit something.
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Old 2013-02-10, 01:52   Link #40272
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Yeah

Besides, canon statement already confirm that I.S. small arms is stronger than real life vulcan cannon to begin with. So a real life GAU-8 will be useless
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Old 2013-02-10, 02:15   Link #40273
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Yeah, I think it's better to design some original equipment for the unit. on a side note, i did some calculations, and I realized that this project will have at least 20 chapters, each with 25 pages on MS word.
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Old 2013-02-10, 02:35   Link #40274
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It's good to have a standardized chapter size. Some of us writers often got a migraine when a chapter is too short or long. I use words rather than pages though, as the result, the number of dialogue may vary between chapters, despite roughly the same length.

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Spoiler for Techwank!:

In a nutshell, a nuclear-propelled gun
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Old 2013-02-10, 02:49   Link #40275
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@zero What tipe of narrator do you feel easier to write, 1st or 3rd?
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Old 2013-02-10, 02:52   Link #40276
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1st POV is better if there's only two or three people involved in the scene, allowing deeper character exploration.

3rd POV is better when lots of people involved, also allowing unified narration and exposition.

There's merits and flaw, but this is what I felt so far.
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Old 2013-02-10, 03:11   Link #40277
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@zero: well it makes more sense than converting all energy into kinetic.
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Old 2013-02-10, 03:18   Link #40278
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Well, it's the inverse, Iori want a kinetic weapon that cna be as powerful as their beam counterpart. Particle beam can be strong and lacking recoil, but actual range is horrible. However, solely depend on explosive or magnetic power to propel a projectile has their limit.

So all the plus and minus on both types of weapon is combined, resulting in crazy powerful weapon with crazy long range and crazy recoil and crazy cooldown + reload time (~10 second total).

To explain why it has tremendous recoil too, Houki's Ugachi is not so much an energy cannon despite the appearance, but a linear accelerator firing tiny drop of molten metal fired at escape velocity (Think Reapers from mass effect).
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Old 2013-02-10, 03:22   Link #40279
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Fuck it, this is what I get for deciding sleep was better than finishing the chapter in one go; I get dicked over by an annoying glitch.
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Old 2013-02-10, 03:28   Link #40280
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Calm down brother

It's not your fault, and sleep really is more important. You can't write a good chapter without proper sleep
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