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Old 2013-05-09, 10:17   Link #43001
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Drunk Chifuyu is moe Chifuyu~
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Old 2013-05-09, 10:20   Link #43002
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Uh, no, Drunk Chifuyu is just like regular Chifuyu:/ Look at the beach episode.
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Old 2013-05-09, 10:30   Link #43003
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Definitely

Inb4 ST version of bar scene
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Old 2013-05-09, 10:33   Link #43004
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She would never drink enough to get that wasted and even then she's most likely a violent drunk... But she does like to troll little girls about her brother... >.>
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Old 2013-05-09, 10:49   Link #43005
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Considering who she's trolling, I don't think it would be accurate to call the little.....unless we're talking Rin or Laura here.
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Old 2013-05-09, 10:50   Link #43006
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Again, drunk Chifuyu is moe Chifuyu. Drunk Chifuyu is confession Chifuyu AKA the only part I really enjoyed about V5, or was it 4? I think it was 4. Hair down Chifuyu versus ponytail Chifuyu. A battle that will shake the very foundations of the Earth D:
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Old 2013-05-09, 11:10   Link #43007
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Meh, I prefer Kanzashi
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Old 2013-05-09, 13:29   Link #43008
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I got bored with Generation Shift so I fast forward to the future where most of the juicy part of the story are.

I might do a rewrite sometime in the future if I can find the time to do so.

The following story take place in Generation Shift universe.

Spoiler for Generation Shift 2:


I mentioned the title of this story before so I will not mention it again.
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Old 2013-05-09, 14:23   Link #43009
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Spoiler for Resolve - My favorite part:


Oh Ichika, if you only knew...
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Old 2013-05-09, 20:25   Link #43010
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^ ROFLOL WUT

Somehow that didn't sound too OOC

Spoiler for Sacred Twins Ch 15 - Honesty:
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Old 2013-05-10, 00:55   Link #43011
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Hnn...to me, it seemed as if the 'realization' came a bit too ... easily? Or maybe it was the 'explanation' part... Oh! That's an idea - for an apology, can have Ichika make Chifuyu something to help with the apology, a small cake, a pie or a batch of cookies - something to get the 'wifey' act going again. XD Just something to get the other girls (other than Madoka) poking at him again.

And then, as Chifuyu's apology to them, she can bring in the slice of cake/pie and eat it in front of homeroom, saying that she suddenly felt like having a piece while avoiding eye contact and maybe even a little blush (tsundere) since she's about to eat sweets in front of her students, but Ik-kun and Madoka-chan smile since they know, or rather than knowing, they can 'discern' that this was Chifuyu's way of apologizing to them in front of everyone. She notes their smile and can't help but smile a bit herself as she finishes the piece and goes back to teaching but Maya can tell that the air between the Orimura siblings is a little clearer now.

Believe it or not, I do like subtlety...
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Old 2013-05-10, 01:02   Link #43012
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My intention is not clear enough it seems, Ichika already knew it from the get go in the previous chapter (he's being sardonic than flat out scowling), and Lingyin don't show any fear at all, on the other hand, Madoka, Cecilia, and Charles is flat out disturbed.

I suppose the transition needs to be reworked indeed. I felt like the last part of chapter 14 is not... gripping enough, and yes, this part is quite abrupt and too sudden.

Need to consult blitz, but he's nowhere to be seen. Can you help
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Old 2013-05-10, 01:29   Link #43013
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Um, which part of Chapter 14? I'm normally not on at this time, but since it's for Zero-kun, I'll consider it...lol
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Old 2013-05-10, 01:42   Link #43014
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Wait, made mistake.

There's nothing on chapter 14 indicate Lingyin knew

Consider draft above scrapped, you can sleep now.
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Old 2013-05-10, 01:45   Link #43015
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Damn, Chifuyu comes off as a major bro-con in Reversal Then again, that's what happens when you have a Badass!Ichika as an older brother.
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Old 2013-05-10, 01:50   Link #43016
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...keep the draft. lol

It's the skeleton, now all you have to do is add the 'fleshy' bits.

I read the part for 14 that you have up and ... maybe you have to break it up into a lot of POVs for that scene...I hope not because it can become too cluttered.

...Sending PM

And curse that Orimura bloodline - it's so potent that even siblings aren't safe from charms. :3
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Old 2013-05-10, 02:03   Link #43017
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Not genders at least: None of the female cast from the main story express interest in a relationship with Teenage!Chifuyu....well, there's Tatenashi, but she's just being her usual self so she doesn't count.
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Old 2013-05-10, 02:08   Link #43018
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Well, canonically speaking

Ichika's pheromone field is much smaller than Chifuyu's, but FAR denser

Anyone caught in it will not be able to leave him for anyone, not even Chifuyu

Compare a star and a black hole
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Old 2013-05-10, 02:13   Link #43019
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At least it doesn't turn people gay/straight :/ Autumn doesn't suddenly become bisexual, for example.
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Old 2013-05-10, 02:16   Link #43020
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Give it time, she'll come around.

As for not liking teenChifuyu...that's because they wouldn't dare voice their undying adoration of the elder Orimura. :3
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