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Old 2013-05-15, 09:36   Link #43321
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Alright, doing it now.
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Old 2013-05-15, 10:20   Link #43322
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@ Senpai - Cookie if you can find the doujin I based this off.

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Old 2013-05-15, 10:35   Link #43323
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@ Senpai - Cookie if you can find the doujin I based this off.

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Oh Irish, how you've grown into a real man, appearance be damned

My feelings is overwhelmed, made me forget this is non-canon. But screw it, it always gave me the needed dose of sugar. IKaron OTP!!!
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Old 2013-05-15, 10:53   Link #43324
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Really? I thought it wasn't too good. That and Irish stays childlike in appearance:/
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Old 2013-05-15, 10:58   Link #43325
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Like I said, Karon don't mind.
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Old 2013-05-15, 11:04   Link #43326
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Rough draft, get the gist of it at least a little.

Lotsa improvement will be needed, but I am confident it's not OOC at least.

Spoiler for Sacred Twins Ch 15 - Confession Part 2:
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Old 2013-05-15, 11:22   Link #43327
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@ Senpai - It kind of feels....ham fisted, I guess? How can they sya these things without any hesitation?
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Old 2013-05-15, 11:25   Link #43328
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Synchronization, eras

Their feeling for their beloved Chifuyu-nee bring them closer than ever, and brought them the strength to stand up against her.

Because typical "calling out the big sis" just don't work... the power of love might just be.
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Old 2013-05-15, 11:28   Link #43329
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Sorry, I guess my own heart to heart made it clear. Talkiing about things like that tend to be hard.

Also, how long do idols generally last? At what age does their popularity dwindle?
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Old 2013-05-15, 11:47   Link #43330
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I do get the gist and already my mind is working on - *SMACK* x.0

There are a few things that I would re-word in a different way to make it easier to read... But still nice. I like the touch of them scaring the doctor. XD

But Laura appearing there seemed kinda random... 0.0 Maybe a little sentence to link to how the students that Ichika 'commanded' to move out of the way ran off to tell everyone that 'Orimura-sensei was hurt' and that her little brother and sister were like two guard dogs escorting her? Laura and Charl could then rush to go see her before the floodgates of estrogen descend upon the infirmary.

I do think we need to work on making what Ichika says back to Chifuyu be worthy of a dual faceplant though...

@ Era: The idol scene is TOUGH from what I heard, but then again, it's what I heard. Most of them don't last a year. And apparently, their virginity belongs to the fans so they can't have normal relationships... >.> Stupidest thing I ever heard was about that one fiasco. Anyway, from 14 up to about 25. That IdolMaster game pretty much walks you through the entire thing, minus a lot of the really nasty stuff that could go on.
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Old 2013-05-15, 11:48   Link #43331
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Sorry, I guess my own heart to heart made it clear. Talkiing about things like that tend to be hard.
Like I said before, ST is chock full of idiocy and unnecessary conflict. But because everyone didn't stop hoping trying, they got happy end, always.

This is basically my message, even if put inside a badly written fanfic, I hope it'll reach the readers.

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Also, how long do idols generally last? At what age does their popularity dwindle?
I think up to 25, but even that is considered exceptional.
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Old 2013-05-15, 11:51   Link #43332
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there are 3 kinds of hero.

-Those that act to become the hero.

-Those that act and are recognized as a hero.

-Those that respond to the cries for a hero.

The most common is type 2

TOPIC SWITCH!

How would you guys react when you learn that you're one of the last humans on earth, artificial at that. Your everyday life is a lie and that you are part of the system that keeps the false earth up and running?
If it doesn't hurt anybody and life just go on as usual....

Real or not doesn't really matter and I don't see the problem.

I mean, Philosophically-speaking how do you even tell that you really existed and living in a real world?

How do you prove that the Moon is real beyond your vision and information that others tell you?

Seriously, Philosophers had been discussing about existence even before Jesus is born just try read them, you either understand them or your brain just imploded by the sheer madness. Guess where the concept of Soul came from?
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Old 2013-05-15, 11:53   Link #43333
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So you believe humans are good? That's the message?

Ouch:/ How much money does an idol make, anyway?
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Old 2013-05-15, 11:59   Link #43334
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I do get the gist and already my mind is working on - *SMACK* x.0

There are a few things that I would re-word in a different way to make it easier to read... But still nice. I like the touch of them scaring the doctor. XD

But Laura appearing there seemed kinda random... 0.0 Maybe a little sentence to link to how the students that Ichika 'commanded' to move out of the way ran off to tell everyone that 'Orimura-sensei was hurt' and that her little brother and sister were like two guard dogs escorting her? Laura and Charl could then rush to go see her before the floodgates of estrogen descend upon the infirmary.

I do think we need to work on making what Ichika says back to Chifuyu be worthy of a dual faceplant though...
Please, anything will be an improvement. I knew blitz have headache working with it, because the sheer QUALITY the draft show.

On the issue of lolduo appearing at random, yes, they rushed on that because the resulting ruckus. Then again, last time they're actually have talk just outside the lounge... I guess it happens when you're not good enough to handle bajillion POV.

On the twins statement, probably more like

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“Good lord, not that one please, that will end badly, very badly”
They're talking about Drunk!Chifuyu

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@ Era: The idol scene is TOUGH from what I heard, but then again, it's what I heard. Most of them don't last a year. And apparently, their virginity belongs to the fans so they can't have normal relationships... >.> Stupidest thing I ever heard was about that one fiasco. Anyway, from 14 up to about 25. That IdolMaster game pretty much walks you through the entire thing, minus a lot of the really nasty stuff that could go on.
If we're talking about reality, yeah.

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So you believe humans are good? That's the message?
More like human choose their own path, whether it'll end in destruction or salvation.

But putting emphasis on the protagonist, yeah, if you want to be good, you ALWAYS can be good, provided you strive for it.

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Ouch:/ How much money does an idol make, anyway?
Safely say most of them not get enough...
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Old 2013-05-15, 12:02   Link #43335
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@age: I suppose it's because you are forced to fall in love and procreate with a predestined person by the computer? The reality of the place you live and what your mind perceives is different. Wht you see is utopia, what reality is, is dystopia.
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Old 2013-05-15, 12:06   Link #43336
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If Ichika never interacted with Ran, eould she still have a crush on him?
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Old 2013-05-15, 12:10   Link #43337
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To be honest, Ran is the most shallow, yet also the most realistic crush Ichika have.

Ichika is playing sport, and damn good at it. Being handsome + being athletic, and he's also the little bro of the most badass woman in the world, which can turn straight female into bisexual.

At any rate, Ran will be Ichika's one true fangirl.
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Old 2013-05-15, 12:12   Link #43338
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So a relationship wouldn't work between the two of them?
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Old 2013-05-15, 12:17   Link #43339
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Not unless there's more development, no.

A LOT of development, probably more than needed with Cecilia, for example.

You can say a process where Ran graduated form being a fangirl to a proper love interest, but done well it'll be good and somewhat refreshing

I'M ON FIRE! TRANS AM!

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Total word count: 3100
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Old 2013-05-15, 12:44   Link #43340
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On that scale, which characters from IS would fall into Lawful and which ones into Good?
Lawful good = Saber
Chaotic good = Gilgamesh.
Chaotic evil = Fate zero Caster.

You draw your conclusions lol.
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