AnimeSuki Forums

Register Forum Rules FAQ Members List Social Groups Search Today's Posts Mark Forums Read

Go Back   AnimeSuki Forum > Anime Related Topics > Fan Creations

Notices

Reply
 
Thread Tools
Old 2013-07-14, 02:53   Link #601
NorthernFallout
Return
*Author
 
 
Join Date: May 2008
Location: Frosty Scandinavia
Age: 25
Oh look it's an update. Focusing on light again this time.



Must always make a new sig when Gia releases something new.


Tired to make it have a little more motion than it already had.


COLORS. I HAVE NO IDEA WHAT COLORS THIS ONE HAS.
__________________

Steam: ax/apocnuke | LET'S ROCK
NorthernFallout is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 2013-07-14, 06:57   Link #602
ganbaru
books-eater youkai
 
 
Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: Betweem wisdom and insanity
About the first one, It feel like it should had more details but the general darkness of the sig kind of ''eat'' it, no ? Also, I am kind of surprised you didn't show a little bit of the mechanical tentacles on the gia sig
__________________

ganbaru is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 2013-07-14, 08:23   Link #603
Frailty
Half-yōkai
*Graphic Designer
 
 
Join Date: Jan 2008
Location: Pearl of the Orient Seas
Age: 21
Send a message via Yahoo to Frailty
Quote:
Originally Posted by NorthernFallout View Post
I like the lighting. The only problems I saw was the border and the tag's sharpness. The border is too thick and the tag is a bit over-sharpened. Other than those, it's a great looking tag!

Quote:
Originally Posted by NorthernFallout View Post
Must always make a new sig when Gia releases something new.
I love the depth and the colors. No problems here~

Quote:
Originally Posted by NorthernFallout View Post
Tired to make it have a little more motion than it already had.
Well I don't really make tags like this so I can't critique this
the only thing I can mention is that the front of the car is a bit too dark. I guess you used the burn tool too much? Or it probably had too much contrast? I can't tell

Quote:
Originally Posted by NorthernFallout View Post
COLORS. I HAVE NO IDEA WHAT COLORS THIS ONE HAS.
lol, this one's a bit messy especially on the right side. I think you overdid the effects. The starry, cloudy effect looked unnatural (probably because of the colors). The lights were taking too much attention too. My eyes were drifting off from the focal because of it. Same goes for that rock(?) at the right side of the render. Well, it's probably because of the colors anyway
The render mostly had white, so I guess you should've used that color more.

Awesome work!
__________________

Frailty is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 2013-07-14, 10:39   Link #604
NorthernFallout
Return
*Author
 
 
Join Date: May 2008
Location: Frosty Scandinavia
Age: 25
Quote:
Originally Posted by ganbaru View Post
About the first one, It feel like it should had more details but the general darkness of the sig kind of ''eat'' it, no ? Also, I am kind of surprised you didn't show a little bit of the mechanical tentacles on the gia sig
Yea, it's a bit dark, I can agree with that.

As for the tentacles, well... Dunno, didn't think they fit as well as this focus.

Quote:
Originally Posted by Frailty View Post
I like the lighting. The only problems I saw was the border and the tag's sharpness. The border is too thick and the tag is a bit over-sharpened. Other than those, it's a great looking tag!
Agreed and agreed. Tbh I think it was a bit hastily done, and the source itself is kinda dark. Was some week ago now.

Quote:
Originally Posted by Frailty View Post
Well I don't really make tags like this so I can't critique this
the only thing I can mention is that the front of the car is a bit too dark. I guess you used the burn tool too much? Or it probably had too much contrast? I can't tell
Too much contrast. Problem is, the source itself was also pretty dark there. Still noted.


Quote:
Originally Posted by Frailty View Post
lol, this one's a bit messy especially on the right side. I think you overdid the effects. The starry, cloudy effect looked unnatural (probably because of the colors). The lights were taking too much attention too. My eyes were drifting off from the focal because of it. Same goes for that rock(?) at the right side of the render. Well, it's probably because of the colors anyway
The render mostly had white, so I guess you should've used that color more.

Awesome work!
It IS a bit messy now that I look at it again. At the time I felt that it worked, but maybe it doesn't. Drifting off from the focal point isn't good though, noted.

Thanks for the comments.
__________________

Steam: ax/apocnuke | LET'S ROCK
NorthernFallout is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 2013-09-07, 09:58   Link #605
Patchy
練紅玉
*Graphic Designer
 
 
Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Magic Land
Don't know how to criticize but to sum up what I'm seeing...

They're really good... mostly this one <<< really liked this Ax-sempai
__________________
My Workshop
-----------------------------
Featured Character
Shiro
-----------------------------
-----------------------------
Currently Doing:
Currently Hidden in depths of Chireiden

Patchy is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 2013-09-08, 05:01   Link #606
NorthernFallout
Return
*Author
 
 
Join Date: May 2008
Location: Frosty Scandinavia
Age: 25
Thanks, Patchy!

And here's another update just because it's Sunday.




The gia one didn't turn out as well as I had hoped, but the Mako one almost made itself.
__________________

Steam: ax/apocnuke | LET'S ROCK
NorthernFallout is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 2013-09-08, 05:23   Link #607
ganbaru
books-eater youkai
 
 
Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: Betweem wisdom and insanity
Quote:
Originally Posted by NorthernFallout View Post
So you choose to focus on the girl than the car, even making the car almost unrecognisable. As about the gia one, the girl and her gears are so large than it putting it on a narrow signature was sure to be complicated.
__________________

ganbaru is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 2013-10-29, 07:51   Link #608
NorthernFallout
Return
*Author
 
 
Join Date: May 2008
Location: Frosty Scandinavia
Age: 25






Trying some other dimensions. Once I find good source, I'll try vertical ones.
__________________

Steam: ax/apocnuke | LET'S ROCK
NorthernFallout is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 2013-10-29, 09:20   Link #609
ganbaru
books-eater youkai
 
 
Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: Betweem wisdom and insanity
About the second one, why not keeping a little more of the eye's colors? Did you though than it would had looked bad ?
__________________

ganbaru is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 2013-10-29, 09:34   Link #610
NorthernFallout
Return
*Author
 
 
Join Date: May 2008
Location: Frosty Scandinavia
Age: 25
You're right, I actually missed that one.

Here's a modified version.

__________________

Steam: ax/apocnuke | LET'S ROCK
NorthernFallout is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 2013-10-29, 09:56   Link #611
Frailty
Half-yōkai
*Graphic Designer
 
 
Join Date: Jan 2008
Location: Pearl of the Orient Seas
Age: 21
Send a message via Yahoo to Frailty
Quote:
Originally Posted by NorthernFallout View Post
You're right, I actually missed that one.

Here's a modified version.

I think it'd look better if you only kept the Eye Balls' color only, and not include the whole outline of the eye

I like the colored version of this more anyway
__________________

Frailty is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 2013-10-29, 10:47   Link #612
NorthernFallout
Return
*Author
 
 
Join Date: May 2008
Location: Frosty Scandinavia
Age: 25
Wops. I missed that. Oh eraser tool, y u so tsuntsun.
__________________

Steam: ax/apocnuke | LET'S ROCK
NorthernFallout is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 2013-10-29, 11:47   Link #613
ganbaru
books-eater youkai
 
 
Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: Betweem wisdom and insanity
I would suggest to, not only erasing the outline of the eyes, but also to tone down a little the color of the said eyes, maybe to keep about 65%-80% of the colors.
__________________

ganbaru is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 2013-10-29, 14:34   Link #614
NorthernFallout
Return
*Author
 
 
Join Date: May 2008
Location: Frosty Scandinavia
Age: 25


And seeing how I'm getting my dose of speed from Wipeout recently, might as well make an ava...
__________________

Steam: ax/apocnuke | LET'S ROCK
NorthernFallout is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 2013-10-29, 22:13   Link #615
Frailty
Half-yōkai
*Graphic Designer
 
 
Join Date: Jan 2008
Location: Pearl of the Orient Seas
Age: 21
Send a message via Yahoo to Frailty
Quote:
Originally Posted by NorthernFallout View Post
better

I still like the colored version more though
__________________

Frailty is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 2014-05-30, 17:52   Link #616
NorthernFallout
Return
*Author
 
 
Join Date: May 2008
Location: Frosty Scandinavia
Age: 25
Getting back on the GFX train. Also working on a banner.






A note on this last one: I, by accident, discovered an Exclusion Layer Setting + Smudge combo I'd never used before. It's honestly one of the best I've been able to make... should be able to add a bit more detail to it though.
__________________

Steam: ax/apocnuke | LET'S ROCK
NorthernFallout is offline   Reply With Quote
Reply

Thread Tools

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off

Forum Jump


All times are GMT -5. The time now is 09:55.


Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.7
Copyright ©2000 - 2014, vBulletin Solutions, Inc.
We use Silk.