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Old 2013-07-26, 07:54   Link #1221
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PaulXion fic is out Chap 76

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7112821/76/
The return of a King! His story really making me feel like an ant.
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Old 2013-07-26, 07:57   Link #1222
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I've got idea's, but I don't wanna put it up in public, everybody here has interesting stories though, I wish I could write like you guys.
Hey, what could be worse! My idea for that Extra fic is the weirdest and lacking potential, and I still post it on here!
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Old 2013-07-26, 07:58   Link #1223
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*Awesome Advice*.
Basically, what this man says. The hardest part is always putting the effort into getting stared: once you get there it can only get easier.

Anyway, as promised, here's the snip I was talking about. Goose looked it over just to iron out a few kinks.

Spoiler for ML: DYRL -The Miracle of Flight-:

It was supposed to be it's own full length story, and indeed I have a few more scenes after this one that are partially completed, but after writing it out I felt I was just rehashing too much of the TE Kamchatka Arc and decided to bin it. I don't think this is as in depth as DarthTabby would have liked, but it's something at least.

Good news is that I have an entire story planned for Lilia travelling though these refugee camps in disguise while she was evading the CIA. Hopefully I can get to work on that once I'm done with my other stuff... which might take a while knowing me.
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Old 2013-07-26, 09:10   Link #1224
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Now that is quite something. I could really see potential in this!
And why the heck I am thinking about an urban lengend of the last princess in the Tsar family ran to Europe from the Communist?
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Old 2013-07-26, 09:21   Link #1225
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I've got idea's, but I don't wanna put it up in public, everybody here has interesting stories though, I wish I could write like you guys.
If you've got an idea, don't be afraid to post the makings of it! For all you know you might cause somebody else to have an equally interesting idea and I'm pretty sure the ladies and gents of this fine section of the Internet will be quite happy to discuss it with you! After all isn't that what this forum is for?


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refugee story idea
Nice! There is a story there that needs to be written! Ah just imagine all of the themes involving morality! A grade 10 english student's worst nightmare! hehe

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Now that is quite something. I could really see potential in this!
And why the heck I am thinking about an urban lengend of the last princess in the Tsar family ran to Europe from the Communist?
Because that urban legend is an interesting story that could be made into something interesting?

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Old 2013-07-26, 09:41   Link #1226
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Just thinking incorporating that into the refugee idea. What happen when a girl used to live in blissful ignorant got tossed into the harsh reality?
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Old 2013-07-26, 10:29   Link #1227
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It was supposed to be it's own full length story, and indeed I have a few more scenes after this one that are partially completed, but after writing it out I felt I was just rehashing too much of the TE Kamchatka Arc and decided to bin it. I don't think this is as in depth as DarthTabby would have liked, but it's something at least.
As a shortfic, I think this is really fine. Maybe it's not long enough to be a standalone, but you could put it in the Snippet Collection?

...yeah, mood whiplash like crazy. Maybe we better not.
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Old 2013-07-26, 20:03   Link #1228
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Dude, don't sweat it. I've been writing on and off in some manner since 1998 (first thing I ever wrote was half After Action Report, half roleplay of my Command & Conquer missions ).

The trick to writing, I find, is to read a lot - authors like Clancy, Griffin, Weber, Ambrose, Couch, Tolkein, Lois McMaster Bujold - and when you write something, read it out loud to yourself.

Everyone had to start from humble beginnings. The important thing is to write, and then be prepared to accept criticism - but if you can do that, then you're on the right path.
I just don't think my story has much potential, that and I'm not much of a writer, but I'll take your advice then and go with it, who knows, I might just actually post a piece for you guys to see here, anyway thanks for the advice Wild Goose and Sasahar17.
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Old 2013-07-26, 22:13   Link #1229
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Hey, only now that I realize that noone has ever try to write battle in the Middle East!
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Old 2013-07-26, 22:36   Link #1230
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Hey, only now that I realize that noone has ever try to write battle in the Middle East!
Allahuakbar.

Jihad.

Yalla yalla.

GOD DAMNIT HUSSAM.

SULEIMAN YOU FUCKING IDIOT.

Insha-Allah.

Everyone dies.

The End.
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Old 2013-07-26, 23:45   Link #1231
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Allahuakbar.

Jihad.

Yalla yalla.

GOD DAMNIT HUSSAM.

SULEIMAN YOU FUCKING IDIOT.

Insha-Allah.

Everyone dies.

The End.
What the heck?
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Old 2013-07-27, 00:07   Link #1232
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What the heck?
Ignore him. He's just playing with you.
About battles in the middle east, i do believe there's a story in MLA about a group in Egypt that defends the front line against the BETA. You can check that story to help you.
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Old 2013-07-27, 00:38   Link #1233
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What the heck?
Translations:

God is great.

Holy war. A Crusade is a bad thing, but a jihad is a truly wondrous thing!

Move move.

GOD DAMNIT HUSSAM. (Arab soldiers are notoriously incompetent and prone to doing the wrong thing. To get any use out of them, a skilled commander has to micromanage them like a starcraft player. Which is a [problem when you tell them stop and they decide that means drive on.)

SULEIMAN YOU FUCKING IDIOT. (Arab soldiers are also idiots, for the most part.)

As God wills it. (Arab cultures are notoriously fatalistic. Spend time on range and marksmanship? Bah. Insha-allah, the bullet will hit. Insha-Allah, it was fated that I was shot today. Insha-Allah, it is god's will that we are all incompetent.)

Everyone dies. (It's a Muv-Luv story.)
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Old 2013-07-27, 00:45   Link #1234
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Now that's pure crazy. Actually, I see many similars between Russian and Arabian.
And South America?
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Old 2013-07-27, 04:05   Link #1235
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Hey, only now that I realize that noone has ever try to write battle in the Middle East!
- Because every time I think about mecha in the Middle East I either think the first episode of Gundam 00 or some episodes of Gasaraki.

(Suddenly pictures Takeru in the middle of the Iraqi desert, the only survivor of a BETA assault screaming "TAKEMIIIIII!!!!!!!!!!!")

..Don't ask. Just don't ask.
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Old 2013-07-27, 04:26   Link #1236
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And why people love Peggy-Ru?
(Searching "Gasaraki") Thanks! Now I know how "Muv-Luv Prototype" would look like!
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Old 2013-07-27, 04:34   Link #1237
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- I don't think we're talking about the same topic.

And yes, you are also not talking to the same person!
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Old 2013-07-27, 13:27   Link #1238
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I am wondering what would a silicon based life form would look like... i wish it was humanoid... now we can make a crossover with that
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Old 2013-07-27, 19:51   Link #1239
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I am wondering what would a silicon based life form would look like... i wish it was humanoid... now we can make a crossover with that
Xenosaga or Terminator?
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Old 2013-07-27, 23:49   Link #1240
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Okay, this might be of your interest then.

In the late 90s, there was a sci-fi novel released in Brazil called "Espada da Galáxia" (Sword of the Galaxy). The main character was a space explorer from a species known as Metalianos (Metalians). Although humanoid, the Metalians evolved from insects, so much of their physiology and mentality actually resembles the likes of bees and ants. Furthermore, Metalians were bio-metallic lifeforms - that is, unlike humans who have bodies composed mostly of water and carbon, they had living bodies that were made up mostly of metal alloys such as silicon, aluminium and titanium.





Hopefully this can serve as a reference for you. I don't know if there is any material about it in English, but maybe you might find something after some research.
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