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Old 2013-09-05, 13:43   Link #38441
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Old 2013-09-05, 13:44   Link #38442
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Old 2013-09-05, 13:48   Link #38443
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Old 2013-09-05, 13:52   Link #38444
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Wow, that was a long line of posts. Unfortunately, the AS had it's restrictions on amount of text you can post.

Still thanks to anyone who read my story.
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Old 2013-09-06, 14:14   Link #38445
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Hey I kinda notice something when I was reading through the nanoha fanfictions. We have a lot of Nanoha Fate, but more so we don't have much with Fate by herself on her job as an investigator or Hayate, and most of the ones with Hayate are dark theme ones where she steps on the wrong pah. And by fanfiction I mean long ones more than one chapter.

One of the things I found interesting is that most of the stories are alternate universe, not just a little off cannon but completely different. Weird then again I guess people love are characters and want better settings for them.
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Old 2013-09-06, 21:34   Link #38446
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I would recommend The Two Goddesses, which is my own fanfiction with the main cast being Hayate Yagami. I haven't bothered cleaning the inconsistencies though, so don't scrutinize at it too badly.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7633280/1/The-Two-Goddesses
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Old 2013-09-07, 06:49   Link #38447
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read it and it felt too dark for me, and just couldn't read it but thanks for the recomendation.

I guess I am looking for something that is similar to leave of absense by Old Iron, recomened reading. I guess it is hard to write about Hayate since most people use her as a comander. THough I think a case where she is on special investigation, which she gose to after the Riot Force 6 Disbands. I think it would be neat dealing with something like that. HEck I am getting ideas.
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Old 2013-09-09, 22:14   Link #38448
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New Infinity is live.

Finally in the home stretch on this story, and God it's a relief. It feels so nice to be in the ending stages...
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Old 2013-09-10, 01:25   Link #38449
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"And I'm sure little brother and sisters," the woman said cheerfully, "Will be just delighted.

"After all, they looked so happy when they killed us. And I've always wanted to return the favor."
This gave me, of all things, Negima flashbacks. Specifically, the part where additional Averrunci constructs came out of nowhere and started curbstomping everywhere.

It is not a good flashback to remember, in a storytelling kind of way. So, yeah...

On the bright side, at least this arc is finally over.
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Old 2013-09-10, 08:28   Link #38450
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Yeah I nearly thought that they were unbeatable.

And here comes another long session.

Amaterasu is going for it this time... Probably...

Tsukuyomi/Amaterasu: Please teach us, Yuuno-sensei! (lol kidding xD)
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Old 2013-09-10, 11:59   Link #38451
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I actually have some revisions to make... newer version of the chapter will be up sometime today. One of the scenes that just seemed fine to me when I posted it just falls flat to me on a re-reading. Extensive re-write needed.

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This gave me, of all things, Negima flashbacks. Specifically, the part where additional Averrunci constructs came out of nowhere and started curbstomping everywhere.

It is not a good flashback to remember, in a storytelling kind of way. So, yeah...
If it helps, I absolutely guarantee the problem will not be solved by a sudden timeskip during which the villain is defeated off-screen.


EDIT: Revised chapter is live. Didn't change a huge amount, but added to two scenes significantly and I think it's an overall improvement.
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Old 2013-09-26, 01:21   Link #38452
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I got the question, could Caro summon in a fic The Dragon King Bahamut from the Final Fantasy series as the one in the opening movie of FFXIV: A Realm Reborn was just that bad ass. Maybe a human form taking ancient Bahamut talking about the brats of modern days being all about the big beams of death.

As another thing, cross overs between Fairy Tail and Nanoha are surprisingly rare considering the magic and family centered tales. As a matter a fact, a fic where Reinforce Eins ends up in Fiore and meets Fairy Tail is a rather interesting idea in my opinion. There she would have to face the wackiness and nakamaship of the guild as well as face a whole new kind of magic, while searching for a way to find a way back to her mistress Hayate. She would easily fit into an older members role in the guild by looking after them from pre-canon times.

At some point of the fic more characters could appear from Nanoha-verse and comlicate things even further as well as increase the crazy situations she finds herself in, though it should be during or after StrikerS with Nanoha timeline and perhaps around Phantom Lord or Tower of Heaven arks in Fairy Tail

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Old 2013-09-26, 06:26   Link #38453
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Your question if Caro can summon the king dragon is no, unless she has made a contract with said dragon. Granted I could be wrong after all Lutecia can summonthe intellegent insects in quantity. Most likely though you have to make a con tract or something.

I wonder can one have a human summon. Vivio can have Nanoha as a summon, or einheart.
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Old 2013-09-27, 16:07   Link #38454
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alright new here but here's a question for everyone anyone know whats happened to Daishi Prime the author of the Deva series? http://www.fanfiction.net/u/829343/
his work is really good and I would love to see it concluded
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Old 2013-10-17, 03:40   Link #38455
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Your question if Caro can summon the king dragon is no, unless she has made a contract with said dragon. Granted I could be wrong after all Lutecia can summonthe intellegent insects in quantity. Most likely though you have to make a con tract or something.

I wonder can one have a human summon. Vivio can have Nanoha as a summon, or einheart.
Isn't human summon just a normal dimension jump/teleportation?

(Edit: In fact I think all Summoning magic are just long-distance teleportation magic)
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Old 2013-10-21, 16:54   Link #38456
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It has been awhile since anyone posted anything, then again with everything that has been going on in the world it may be no surprise.

Anyway something I am currently working on is links to previous stories in the over 2000 pages of this thread, note not all will be included, but still something to look forward to.

also on fanfiction form old Iron has posted Leave of absence prologue, he is redoing the story.

Also I wish to propose a challenge in order to liven things up.

Write a story with the main characters being the materials.

Lastly I was wondering if yunno X reinforce eins, or Hayate x reinforce eins would be a better couple
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Old 2013-10-21, 18:26   Link #38457
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Probably a unison threesome ceremony.
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Old 2013-10-25, 23:09   Link #38458
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Probably a unison threesome ceremony.
Triple Unison or something....

*Age think he got something store in his head*



Let see...

Hayate unison with all knights.

Giving her access to all their spells and giving her staff multiple forms.
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Old 2013-10-26, 07:15   Link #38459
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I think she already dose since the knights were absorbed at one point. In theory she has access to Fate's, Nanoha's , and the wolkinriter's spells from the time of A's.

Hayate casts starlight beaker to befriend someone.
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Old 2013-10-27, 02:26   Link #38460
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Unison Hayate x Yuuno.
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