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Old 2013-09-19, 11:07   Link #46121
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Opening of Legacy of 0Rion:

Spoiler for Opening epic speech:


What I am trying to point out: Men are still being treated like solider and only have values to society as warrior but not as Cook, firefighter, engineer, police officer....etc (Other occupation that does not involve war).

Also to clarify Nemo's opinion of humanity as a whole (read: not optimistic)

Edit: Bonus stuff (plan to add it in somehow, to counter the pessimistic view of one's values in society)

Spoiler for Ending?:


Also:

Spoiler for About hero:
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Old 2013-09-20, 05:21   Link #46122
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Oh, one thing that made me wonder. Could the raw power of a Core be hidden? You must admit it, the sheer number of generated energy could be detected by even the sluggist detectors.

If we could transfering into something else than heat, air, sound,...

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Old 2013-09-21, 05:09   Link #46123
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Spoiler for Alpha Squad's Herbies:

Visual Aid/Reference:
[Deleted due to lack of Feedback or just Ignored]

Posted late at night, so the writing's not at it's best. Freakin Time Zones...

Why do I even bother posting these?

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Old 2013-09-21, 14:56   Link #46124
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Why do I even bother posting these?
To get it out of your head and to show that your character have actual lives beyond fighting IS?

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War between Men and Women:

To be exactly precise, war between Men and Women would actually end in 5 days, the three days are actually the low estimation assuming that men go head on against women. Even if luck and tactics are into account, the highest possible estimation at the very best is 2 weeks (due inefficient weapons plus effective tactics against IS requires men to be suicidal/disposal which means there is less and less soldiers with each passing days).

Most unfortunately, those numbers above are actually based on idea situation. In reality, men goes where women goes. There would be "White Knights" (and guys who are really desperate for *cough* procreation) in the ranks of men, resulting in insanely biased one-sided battle where the odds kept stacking up against men-side.

If you take that into account.... the statement War between Men and Women would end in three days, is actually an understatement. The actual war would actually end in two days (three days, assuming that the news of the War was able to be spread around the world within a day.)

Not to mention, just in case such event were to occur.... UN has prepare something to stop the fighting....

[A little late (okay...very late)]

Spoiler for My take on Amatersu IS:
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Old 2013-09-21, 22:01   Link #46125
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-Welcome to the third generation HEV IS protective system: for use in hazardous environment conditions. Barrier shield: activated. Atmospheric contaminant sensors: activated. Vital sign monitoring: activated. Automatic medical systems: engaged. Defensive weapons selection system: activated. Munition level monitoring: activated. Communications interface: online. Have a very safe day.-

Something that just popped into my mind when I woke up today.
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Old 2013-09-21, 22:33   Link #46126
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Men versus Woman...Quite pointless if you ask me. But any chance of a terrorist organization for it?

2 more weeks until season 2...
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Old 2013-09-22, 03:20   Link #46127
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I wonder Age, why so obsessed with that 'male-female' thing?

Because the OC?
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Old 2013-09-22, 05:06   Link #46128
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Wonder why I even bother to post it on here...

Spoiler for Just another snippet:


...Lame on me, right?
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Old 2013-09-22, 13:11   Link #46129
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Time to stretch the fingers...

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**Are you sure about this?** The voice in her head sounded vaguely amused but also a trace of concern filtered through. **I've never seen you become so attached to one of them before.**

**None of them were worth attaching too,** she replied, her eyes glanced over the sleeping form of the child in her arms.

**So, why this one? He's just one out of the 12 clones that they finalized...**

**Enough.** Despite being spoken in her mind, the force behind the single word told her companion not to press the issue further. **The others will die soon anywa...**

The laughter grated on her nerves and she had to exercise a bit of self control to keep from outright snarling at the other one. **Eh heh, you're too awesome~! Too awesome! You're a true force of destruction~!**

She chose to ignore her from that point on, silently breaking the mental connection between them. To save just one and to leave the others... the others were failures. Their life force were either too weak or too distorted but this one was calm and clear - a beacon to one such as her. A slight shift from the child in her arms distracted her and she adjusted her arms slightly. The small hands gripped her loose blouse and she found herself smiling gently. **They created you to be their tool of war, but I won't let them use you for their purposes. You are destined for much more. You shall soon be the one to stand above them all - all their petty dreams, struggles and ideals. Together with me.**

As if in an answer, the child gave a small yawn and nuzzled his head against her warm bosom.
~*~

And on a different tangent, I just had a flash of Tabane as Washu from Tenchi Muyo... The two would fit so well, it scares me.
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Old 2013-09-22, 18:05   Link #46130
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Time to stretch the fingers...



~*~

And on a different tangent, I just had a flash of Tabane as Washu from Tenchi Muyo... The two would fit so well, it scares me.
Except that Washu is able to care about other people. Tabane only cares about very few people that could literally be counted on one hand and gives zero fucks to everone else.

Unless you were talking about Tenchi Universe Washu and not OVA/Goddess Washu.
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Old 2013-09-23, 11:31   Link #46131
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I wonder Age, why so obsessed with that 'male-female' thing?

Because the OC?
Well....

We were told that Males are being treated less favorably than female, but we didn't get to see the discrimination in action. Even fanfic authors skip that part and either just hint at it or only mention it once.

Since Nemo is the supposed "average" guy(one of the wimps), as somebody who is deemed little to no value (not a exotic/rarity like IS pilots, not manly or badass, not one of the rich 1%), it only make sense that he was look down upon and actually get to experience the discrimination first hand.

Also I wanted to showing how bad the discrimination actually is beyond being physically abused by females.

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Men versus Woman...Quite pointless if you ask me. But any chance of a terrorist organization for it?

2 more weeks until season 2...
What kind of group would steal Mass-destruction IS?

Also, Phantom Tusk seems suspiciously sexist......

Edited:

Darkjak claimed there is no love...so I think we need to show more love to each other so..... I edited Fireminer's snippet because I am a lazy bastard (hence bastardized Fireminer's work)

If it is not as good, I'm sorry for my incompetency.....

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I will see what I can do.... so long as it is within my (pathetic) ability.

Darkjak's work is unfortunately beyond mine....so I was just hoping somebody with the same level of skill to be able to help out.
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Old 2013-09-23, 14:37   Link #46132
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Some new ones in the archive...

Infinite stratos A new era the rise of the Corruption Parallaxis

Mahouka Koukou no Yuutousei IS Style
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Old 2013-09-23, 19:04   Link #46133
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Male ego duh

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On unrelated note, Mirrorverse chapter 3 is up. I cringed at the density of dialogue, but can do nothing to fix it.
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Old 2013-09-23, 19:55   Link #46134
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Male ego duh

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On unrelated note, Mirrorverse chapter 3 is up. I cringed at the density of dialogue, but can do nothing to fix it.
That's what I am calling out on.

Also playing on male Ego turn out to be a refreshing idea in the fanon....
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Old 2013-09-23, 21:02   Link #46135
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A Mahouka cross-over, well; it was going to happen.
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Old 2013-09-23, 21:08   Link #46136
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@SEED: Congratulation for chapter 3 of Mirrorverse! But you're a bit too humble!

But wait! If Ichika having childs with Icchan, Madoka and Chfuyu, then would the wheel of Karma rolls forever?

@Age: Splendid! Could I ask you to be mine official Beta-er?

@Jak: Fujiin's works always both freaked me and tempted me.
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Old 2013-09-23, 21:38   Link #46137
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Fujin has perverse mind, constantly squeeze it and milk for all its worth, and IT SELL

Mine is basically disneyfication of perverse mind for the sake of laugh
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Old 2013-09-23, 22:28   Link #46138
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Just thinking about Chifuyu giving Ichika a child before she die, then Madoka adopted the role.

...OH GOD! Please save this lamb from these dark thought!
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Old 2013-09-23, 22:40   Link #46139
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Another one in the archive.

Infinite Stratos My Rendition

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Old 2013-09-23, 22:48   Link #46140
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Death Link!
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