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Old 2004-01-20, 04:01   Link #1
Alfons
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Question My first manga...

The first manga I've drawn, the second one I've colored:

http://www26.brinkster.com/Haxxmaxxwaxx/Mu.html

I hope for replies that can help me improve.
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Old 2004-01-20, 15:47   Link #2
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Dude, are u sure that is your first manga? Really good if u ask me. Although I am not an xpert. Have you seen how some sketches have hair covering parts of the face but these parts can be seen. maybe that would be a good idea?
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Old 2004-01-20, 19:31   Link #3
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[whine] 'manga' is an understatement...its only 1 image...[/whine]

Looks great, although i'd reccomend perhaps changing the eyes, but as for shading and crap like that, leave that for later .
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Old 2004-01-20, 20:29   Link #4
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well, even if you do a sketch, leaving the parts of the face visible, dont they get covered up anyway when you color?
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Old 2004-01-20, 21:24   Link #5
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The drawing looks just a little too clean... methinks photoshop or some other painting app for the touches .
Edit: it was a response to raxial.
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Old 2004-01-21, 03:34   Link #6
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Thanks for the response, I hope my next one will be better.
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