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Sometimes I get the feeling healers do "accidentally" look away during the raid... Quote:
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This is why I think we need to come up with some concrete baseline for this stuff, so we don't have to fight over which "canon" is right... And it would also save pages of wading through Barrier Jacket/Linker Core/what-have-you argument #umpteen-thousand. Quote:
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Long as we keep it civil, I don't really care. We're all gonna have our own opinions, ways of speaking, and views on different concepts. Variety is the spice of life, they say, and it'd be pointless if we all had no leeway to speak. That said, keep it the hell down, folks. Quote:
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So Kha's some kind of double agent- [Heavy]I see Spy!!![/Heavy] Quote:
Quiet, eh... *takes a long, slow breath* BURN TO OBLIVIOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!! *a cataclysmic fire blast engulfs everything* Quote:
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...I facepalmed. -_-; Heh. Can't wait. :3
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2008-07-03, 20:49 | Link #2265 | ||||
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This is why I'm including a decidedly religious bent in Comacanon like what Kha's done. The Saint Church is one of the most unexplored aspects of the Nanohaverse, and if we've got ourselves an interdimensional religion, why not expand on it and put some truth into the teachings? Hence the mentioning of angels and demons and celestial beings back in my examination of the Planes; these will be showing up in some form in the post-StrikerS timeline, becoming more and more likely to make appearances as Vivio grows up and starts to make her own waves in the Bureau. Hell, the way things are now, there might be a demonic meddler poking his nose into Jail's business even during StrikerS, perhaps working for Original Jail... or perhaps not. Anybody wanna see Xellos show up every now and then, acting--as usual--on his own agenda? Quote:
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2008-07-03, 21:08 | Link #2266 | ||||
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Are you screaming at Khalthuzad, of the Scaglettis?
Somebody cast Memory Lapse on me. I meant Keroko was the Ace who wasn't a Sue. The other 5 have rep in varying degrees to be one; Keroko's agreed Sue rating is 0. Quote:
That entire web evolved and ironed out, finally arriving at the set point at end of Cente Gravia. Hence why relationshipwise, StrikerS onwards are all focused on the new cast, but there ins't much to fool around with. Teana goes for Dylandy who in turn is after someone we don't know yet. Subaru is stubbornly Teana. Vivio is free game for a while. Juliet Scagletti is too sly to be committed. Serena is too cold, and her tsun-affection for Allie is more onee-chan than anything else. Allie's just running free. So our main fun may well be from the Erio x Lutecia x Caro Macross Triangle. WEEK. :3 Quote:
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What first you guys accused me of being a double agent for 7Arcs, now Blizzard? I'm honored! [Spy]And this will be the last time you see me. *backstabs LE*[/Spy] Quote:
Because it does, like Lyrical Fate.
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2008-07-03, 22:12 | Link #2267 | |
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Anyway, here's the response. Spoiler for Answers:
Thanks, Liingo, this helps a lot. By the way, if you do have questions about the plot, I don't mind you asking. If it's a major one, I'll probably say so, though minor ones are perfectly all right. ====== @Keroko: Don't worry about it, Tesla has a lot more in store for her. She has romantic partnership; she cooks (in the next chapter, no less ); she makes a particularly useful insight during their meeting; she leads a small squadron against the enemy; and she fights the battle of her lifetime against a Magus two ranks higher than she is. I always find character development in Nanohaverse shouldn't just revolve around their fighting abilities, so Tesla pretty much gets an all-round development. Hopefully, it's up to your taste and imagination. Last edited by PhoenixFlare; 2008-07-03 at 22:36. |
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*stares at Null's one-sided love for the oblivious Daddy Saga...>.>* *RUNS!!!* But he's more of Knight-turned-Skilled-Maverick-turned-Knight compared to an Ace-class. But will do. Quote:
...... ......... @______________________________@ ZOMG EPIC BRAINWAVE!!!! @___@ So... that's how it was... Hayate, whom those that read my GenerationS version of her would find out that she had a crush on Chrono during her early pubescent years mainly because of how much he stood up for her in front of Graham's plan... Not to mention completely brushing aside her unneeded guilt with Clyde's death (which she had nothing to do with in the first place)... And then she actually later gave up on him because she was still kinda hooked up on that unnecessary large amount of selflessness schtick when she finds out that Keroko and Chrono had been getting along... Just when she almost manages to get over that minor heartbreak, Kha comes along and then puts on the harem-lead-patented 'Nice to all the girls' charm (as in being nice to Hayate a bit more than usual because of her gloominess) and manages to score a lot of affection points from her. But then Hayate desists yet again in favor of Fate... That second heartbreak kinda gives her a small trauma that she decides to focus fully in her career even more (120%!!!) instead of pursuing romance. But then, there comes this time that her playful flirting with Aurion gets misinterpreted and they get rumored to have a relationship when there is actually nothing of the sort happening... This is...@_@ (In a good way...) *is bashed with the Tome on the head by a blushing Hayate* X_x Quote:
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2008-07-03, 23:20 | Link #2270 |
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Ah forget it. I have to go to work and won't be back until late. The pitfalls of being the noob at work.
Can't really complain; my manager's working from 9.30 am to 1.00am tomorrow. I'm only going in at 2 pm. Also, I roll eyes at Comartemis and Kha and their inclusion of church. They're probably going to get it all mostly wrong, seeing as how neither of them have had the level of exposure to churches that I have had. Ironic, innit, that the guy with the most immersion in religious life makes no reference to organised religion in his work, but two guys who know zilch beyond stereotypes and supposed coolness are intent on turning the saint church into a mockery of christianity. RE: Soldiers of the Wasteland: I'm kicking myself for not thinking of the idea of a crack assault team (in the military context, unlike here, "crack" means AAA to S-ranked) breaking up a cosplay party. SotW is a lot darker and grimmer than stuff I normally write, and is not for the faint of heart. Nanoha is out of the picture, having been wounded in the ambush that was sprung on her as she tried to save Vivio. She was also sent a message by the kidnappers not to intervene, and was given a present from Vivio and the kidnappers. A small, bloody cross. Made from fusing two of Vivio's fingers together. It's now up to a small team of 7 men to get in there and save Vivio. Erick von Long, first Erusian recruited into the TSAB, the Flawless Gunslinger. A. J. Ivanovich, Mage Hunter of North Point. Glen Schattenmann, the Fire Knight. Master Chief John-117, the Green Demon. Yuuno Scrya. Franz Jaeger. And one man, seeking his redemption: Noland Reineger, the Calamity Knight. Noland will walk into that Wasteland, with only one purpose: to rescue his beloved Sankt Kaiser. And Death follows behind him.
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2008-07-03, 23:36 | Link #2271 |
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Now wait just a goddamn second, Goose. Who ever said I was planning on turning the Saint Church into a mockery of Christianity, or even making it anything like Christianity? There appear to be a few stylistic similarities, true, but it's obviously a completely different religion with its' own set of rules. We don't even know if the SC holds a regular mass or anything of the like.
Basically the only thing we know about it is that it's a very liberal religion dedicated to the Kaiser. Beyond that, it's pretty much a total unknown and I intend to take advantage of that fact to create a unique religion more or less from scratch.
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Subete wo keikakudoori...
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2008-07-03, 23:42 | Link #2273 | |
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2008-07-03, 23:54 | Link #2274 |
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C.S. Lewis had it hard for Chronicles of Narnia, and so did anything out there from vaguely parallel to directly contravening Christianity. Valid arguments, been there done that. To be honest, hearing all those criticisms now seem "about time", after plain-sailing so long in the OC. Or in my decade of fanfiction for that matter, since while the exact lore for each universe changes, the theme of Naaru and Ces'rauva hasn't.
Belka is unique in that this belief is the first I've worked on to center around a divine being, and the first where I've painstakingly tried to build a lore around. Like you said Goose, the more I wrote, the more conflict I'll generate. I've always been a controversial figure, so get used to it. And thanks for helping me get used to criticism.
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2008-07-04, 00:17 | Link #2276 | ||
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To be honest though, whatever Kha writes really has no effect on anything I write, precisely because I stay away from such religious bents. Part of the conflict Kha, is also that you tend to throw things into your work without thinking them through, which is VERY painful for me, because: [Dojo]You remind me of my old and stupid self, the me that I left behind.[/Dojo] Quote:
But yeah, despite being serious dark crack, this is a story, in a way, of, Noland's redemption. It's a long process and a long road, but redemption has always IMO been about the journey and less the destination. Take FFVIIAC, which was essentially Cloud's journey of coming to terms with himself and the whole destination of self-forgiveness; we knew he was going to be forgiven in the end, but it's the journey that made Advent Children so interesting. ...okay, I also didn't like the idea of calamity Noland and wanted to redeem him. It's sorta been because of my upbringing, but I kinda believe that all people deserve redemption - but they need to want it. Incidentally, if you don't mind, Noland will be learning one borderline-ranged spell in Soldiers of the Wasteland. It's based on a little-used spell of Franz's (which I'll be using a bit more inTF6), and is called... Sturm Bolter.
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2008-07-04, 00:59 | Link #2278 |
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I just don't have the volume of writing to show otherwise. I'm not in Year 1 Medicine anymore, I'm Year 2, so those who wondered why I had so much time last year, don't rub it in!!!
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2008-07-04, 01:01 | Link #2279 |
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Alright gang, my muse went and hit me over the head with something akin to a lead pipe of an idea, and I’d like some opinions on it before I give it serious consideration. I’ve been kicking this idea around in my head for a few hours and I think it has the potential to be viable if used properly.
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