2012-02-23, 23:36 | Link #23605 |
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Join Date: Sep 2011
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@ Demi - The machine's good enough, it's the pilot that has a problem. Adding a thousand mods won't make Ichika pilot any better.
@ Senpai - Up to what age can you be a cloudcuckoolander before you start just looking plain insane?
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2012-02-23, 23:43 | Link #23608 |
That one guy
Join Date: Nov 2011
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@zero: Which then reminds me of the pseudo shifts... but the multi-mode thing probably won't work if you're talking about the silver bell and gatling gun mods.
@eras: The whole point of adding a second one-off ability isn't powering Ichika up. It's a plot point. |
2012-02-23, 23:52 | Link #23609 |
Electrosphere
Join Date: Mar 2011
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@Zero, something like: Light Mode / Dark Mode, which only activates during special/critical moments?
_____________________________________________ So... I wrote a random draft the other day. I will post a part so you can troll me give me some advices. Spoiler for Warning: Wall of Text:
I plan to use this as a prologue to a fanfic but I need to know if it will have some hope, so sadly luckily I need your seal of approval. |
2012-02-23, 23:55 | Link #23610 |
I am no one
Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Inside your head
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@Demi
Exactly, the 'super mode' thing is used only when shit hits the fan and DOWN again. Mode 1: Normal Form, is normal looking for a normal second shift unit. Four booster, fusion powered. Setsura is slightly bigger than the other arm. It' function is limited to standard beam claw, beam rifle, and barrier amplifier. It has access to 6 hardpoints of Hanger system. Mode 2: Engagement Form, ByakuShiki turned into military unit with more armor enclosure including special visor, the wings unfolding, revealing a pair of hidden booster that is impractically loud and can disturb EVERYONE nearby (including I.S. pilot who has sound filter turned on, this is the function of alternate visor). Setsura grew into monstrous size with gigantic piercing claw (formed by three Koyuki Barrier Void Dagger no less), palm cannon that combining Ignition boost with plasma provided by the nuclear reactor mentioned, and shield that can utilize Reiryaku Byakuya. Thing is, it gradually eats SP even at the idle, and in average combat condition, will deplete the entire reserve in 5 minute or less (not counting barrier void usage), adding insult to the injury, the Hanger system is unusable, meaning all sub equipment will be ditched. @ Strigon Lol, 8 meters, that' even larger that what I planned. Also, good luck! It's different from my version so feel free to push your creativity. :3
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2012-02-24, 00:02 | Link #23611 |
That one guy
Join Date: Nov 2011
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@zero: sounds like when lucifer fell o.o' I try to imagine engagement form and I get an image of the mutated professor from resident evil 2.(berkin, methinks his name was) The time limit certainly reminds me of pseudoshift. It actually works very well.
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2012-02-24, 00:10 | Link #23612 |
I am no one
Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Inside your head
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Incidentally, this mode first appeared in gospel battle. When Ichika rematerializes again in normal mode, the engineers (and Chifuyu) is confused, then Ichika explain about the danger of using that form. So, the Normal form is closer to anime, minus Reiryaku Byakuya focusser. The second form is the novel version touched by Nurgle
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2012-02-24, 00:30 | Link #23615 | |
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Join Date: Sep 2009
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Edit: Villain who use Sadistic Choice in Dark Fic isn't as evil as one who make third Choice lead to worst consequences than the first two Moar edit: the example below is Xanatos Gambit, my bad not a good example Villain: I have a girl as hostage, you have to kill one of your friend to save her Hero: I pretend to kill my friend to save the girl. Villain: I will keep go of the girl Hero: Kill Villain Villain: I died but I had implanted a bomb in all your friends and girl which will immediately explode when I died. Hero: I somehow disarm the bomb Villain: your parents will die if the bomb is disarmed even if it is not disarmed, they will still die anyway because I hired an arm of assassin to kill them. Hero: Somehow I still manage to defeat the plan Villain: That girl you rescued is dying because I laid a curse on her. Hero: Somehow I break the curse Villain: I had implanted my soul into the girl.... Hero: ..... Villain: I am a guy.
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2012-02-24, 00:47 | Link #23617 |
Just another Idiot
Join Date: Sep 2009
Location: Delusion world
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Because I need to rework on the Original Machine and the Heroine.
Edit: Feel that it is not good enough..... (I am a partial perfectionist.. An Imperfect Perfectionist who try to be perfect but can't because of incompetency) May be I will implant new idea into the fic.... (Mind you, most of my concept I mentioned earlier can be implant into my universe easily because most of them are expansion pack, put together into one package..) Moar Edit: Truth: I am still learning how to write a fic that combine Shounen with shoujo.....
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2012-02-24, 00:52 | Link #23618 | |
I am no one
Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Inside your head
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Now I need a machine for his evil twin (no, not Madoka).
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