2011-07-07, 23:30 | Link #32383 |
Burst Mode
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I never put two spaces after a period. I find it pointless. One is plenty.
Anyways, I imagine the reason why FF.net removes stuff like strings of punctuations is to cull out stuff like "OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Unfortunately it applies to legitimate punctuation such as !? For scene breaks, use letters (such as X-X-X) to trick it into thinking it's a word.
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2011-07-08, 01:28 | Link #32387 |
Crax
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Join Date: Feb 2011
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Perhaps it's just me, but for the longest of time in FF.Net I find it weird that it's easier to find other people's stories (From Favourites etc) inside my account than my own. In fact, I couldn't find the FF.Net link to my own stories from my account, discounting Live/Preview.
Divine guidance anyone?
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2011-07-08, 01:57 | Link #32389 | |||||||
Queen of Tragedy
Join Date: Mar 2009
Location: Place of rocks and trees, and trees and rocks...and water.
Age: 33
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Fate: Okay, we're leaving now. Good night! Nanoha: Huh? Fate: Goodbye! *drags Nanoha out to the car* Nanoha: FATE! You...you saw what Vivio was...with...she...Hayate-chan... Fate: Look, Nanoha, it could be-- Nanoha: THEY'RE HAVING S-E-X!! Fate: ...It could be worse? Nanoha: How can it be worse? You saw Vivio grinding up again Hayate-chan! Fate: ... Nanoha: .... Nanoha: Oh god, I never want that image in my head again... Fate: It could be worse. Remember how your mom found out we were having sex? Quote:
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Unless the bunnies take over. *shudder* Those bunnies.... EDIT: And 40 minutes later... Spoiler for ...It's all Dezo's fault:
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It depends on what you like about it, I think. On the one hand, it's a story about Lutecia and her struggles to balance out her life between a work she's good at, sort of likes, yet hates terribly, and her relationship with Vivio who makes her feel the complete opposite of what she suffers through every day at work as a Shadow. And how all those emotional contradictions are tearing Lutecia apart, and her long journey to fixing herself over it. And on the other hand, it's a political spy-thriller where half the TSAB gets painted black or dark shades of gray, and good people do terrible things and the authors giggle madly about it .
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2011-07-08, 03:15 | Link #32390 |
Crax
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dc's Backlog Buster o_O.
And actually, for first impression, Vivio/Hayate was worse than Nanoha/Fate, since Momoko found them asleep, naked, god-knows-where-their-fingers-are BUT! BUT IT'S AFTER THE ACTION! VIYATE'S IS IN! But Shigan wrote that scene better (laughed some of my loudest E-V-A), so...
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2011-07-08, 07:08 | Link #32393 | |
Explodes when thrown
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Join Date: Jan 2009
Age: 38
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Much as I'd like to think FF.net agrees with me on any point.
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2011-07-08, 07:49 | Link #32396 | |
Crax
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Join Date: Feb 2011
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For me, the possibilities are exactly why I started writing 'The Two Goddesses' and dreamed of 'The Shard of Miracles'. Despite the two golden rules in Nanoha's world 'Cannot go back in time' and 'Cannot change one's past' (Think I got one wrong, but I'll remember some time later), do you still believe in possibilities for a better future?
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2011-07-08, 08:50 | Link #32397 | |
Test Drive
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In all seriousness, though, a very lovely piece and a rather dark look at the outcome of the Hayate x Vivio chronicles as a whole, if Hayate ever chose to go down that route believing it was best for Vivio. Talk about the best intentions backfiring in the worst way possible! And then Lutecia comes along and makes it all better and... *SHOT* Aside from that, you could just as well make this AU of the chronicles, if you want to. I did that with the "Sunset" universe and "Borderline".
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authorshipping, befriending, fanfiction, interactive fanfiction, nanoha |
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