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HasuMasu · 2011-10-19, 06:07

^ I'd find it a welcome surprise to see
what it is once I check it out on FF.net
when you finally post it.

Eratas123 · 2011-10-19, 06:09

@ Wavehawk and Zero - Alright here's a draft that the old man may like more. Tell me what you two think.

Spoiler:

Tell me what you two think?

ZeroXSEED · 2011-10-19, 06:10

Quote:

Originally Posted by Yachiyo

Wanna know the title or keep it as a spoiler? ^_^

It's a bless if you want to spoil this meaningless, insolent man, milady. But I humbly request for some surprise instead.

@ Eratas

MAAAAAAAH EEEEEEEEEEEEYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Yachiyo · 2011-10-19, 06:12

Quote:

Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

It's a bless if you want to spoil this meaningless, insolent man, milady. But I humbly request for some surprise instead.

Alright I'll post some sneak peak inside of it once I got in my computer. I'll publish the story next week after my exams.

wavehawk · 2011-10-19, 06:14

Quote:

Originally Posted by Eratas123

@ Wavehawk and Zero - Alright here's a draft that the old man may like more. Tell me what you two think.

Spoiler:

Tell me what you two think?

- Notr bad, though <Ren> would be just a little more witty in that situation--she wouldn't use weapons right away, since it's an informational 'interrogation', not combat.

Eratas123 · 2011-10-19, 06:16

Yachiyo! I haven't seen you in a while

Thanks for the reviews in daydreams and I hope you read Charlottes chapter when it comes out.

@ Zero - That's it? i was hoping you could tell me if it was okay or not. If it is then I can make it into a series here like SWC and It'll be a survival horror with <Ren> as the "monster".

@ wavehawk - Irish never breaks during interrogation due to his background so weapons are really the only way to go or he'd never talk. Starvation, fear, and isolation don't work on him since he's experienced it before.

ZeroXSEED · 2011-10-19, 06:19

Quote:

Originally Posted by Eratas123

Yachiyo! I haven't seen you in a while

Thanks for the reviews in daydreams and I hope you read Charlottes chapter when it comes out.

@ Zero - That's it? i was hoping you could tell me if it was okay or not. If it is then I can make it into a series here like SWC and It'll be a survival horror with <Ren> as the "monster".

I wasn't expected YOU! of all people would put <Ren>, that's why I scream (just like always). I just noticed that Irish was there....

As Old man said, that's good. You caught her character and the atmosphere well.

HasuMasu · 2011-10-19, 06:19

To add some more details to the
alternate setting I'm working on,
men totally can't use IS, that does
include Ichika, though he does find
a way to fight IS eventually, albeit
in an admittedly roundabout way.

As for the OC, he acts more like Yzuru
during the early episodes of Angel Beats,
he sort of just gets blown away in the wind.

ZeroXSEED · 2011-10-19, 06:22

Quote:

Originally Posted by Detective-san

To add some more details to the
alternate setting I'm working on,
men totally can't use IS, that does
include Ichika, though he does find
a way to fight IS eventually, albeit
in an admittedly roundabout way.

Badass Normal Ichika? SIGN ME IN! Popcorn please?

Quote:

Originally Posted by Detective-san

As for the OC, he acts more like Yzuru
during the early episodes of Angel Beats,
he sort of just gets blown away in the wind.

What's Angel Beats?

HasuMasu · 2011-10-19, 06:27

Blitz would know all about Angel Beats, ne?

Eratas123 · 2011-10-19, 06:28

@ Wavehawk - Do I have your blessing to turn it to a story here on the forums? I also gave my reason as to why she used weapons in my previous post.

Yachiyo · 2011-10-19, 06:33

@Eratas hehehe right, since I'm busy to study for my upcoming exams this friday, also I'm polishing the 1st chapter of the sequel ^_^

EDIT: I read Rin's Daydream, and wow. SHE'S really close, if I'm the one in there, I'll throw that crappy alarm clock outside the window XD

wavehawk · 2011-10-19, 06:34

Quote:

Originally Posted by Eratas123

@ Wavehawk - Do I have your blessing to turn it to a story here on the forums? I also gave my reason as to why she used weapons in my previous post.

- Go ahead. It'll be different from what I plan with Original<Ren>, but it's all yours.

Eratas123 · 2011-10-19, 06:42

@ Yachiyo - Houki was actually the closest since she actually gets a kiss

Everyone else is gonna get blocked cause I'm an asshole

@ Wavehawk - Sweet! Irish is gonna get put through a lot of shit by <Ren> but hopefully he won't be broken by the end of it. Can you tell me some tactics she uses to scare opponents?

wavehawk · 2011-10-19, 06:46

She's a ninja. Do research on the things (real) Ninja do to people they capture and interrogate.

ZeroXSEED · 2011-10-19, 06:49

Hmmm....

Real ninja don't use black clothes.... real ninja blend to the crowds (using civilian clothes).... kunoichi use their sex appeal (and more) to get information, and in case of treating prisoner...

EDIT: I always wonder what is your avatar, Sir hawk.

Also

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Game over man, game over

Eratas123 · 2011-10-19, 06:52

@ Wavehawk - He's gonna try to escape pretty soon and then it's just a game of cat and mouse. Any tips on that? I'm looking for things that <Ren> does that other ninjas dont't.

@ Zero - I'm hoping you can read it but right now I have a question: Downer ending or not? What do you think?

wavehawk · 2011-10-19, 06:53

Quote:

Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

Real ninja don't use black clothes.... real ninja blend to the crowds (using civilian clothes)....

- What do you think <Ren> wears?

Quote:

kunoichi use their sex appeal (and more) to get information,

- <Ren> is a Ninja. Not a Kunoichi. i can't stress that enough.

Quote:

and in case of treating prisoner...

- <Ren> prepares a wok full of hot oil just big enough for Irish to sit in...

Quote:

EDIT: I always wonder what is your avatar, Sir hawk.

- YOU COUNT THE MEDALS ONE TWO AND THREE!

Quote:

Originally Posted by Eratas123

@ Wavehawk - He's gonna try to escape pretty soon and then it's just a game of cat and mouse. Any tips on that? I'm looking for things that <Ren> does that other ninjas dont't.

- THAT will require some research on another subject matter: Look up "Arashikage Ninja" and you'll probably see a few things...

HasuMasu · 2011-10-19, 06:55

Quote:

Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

Hmmm....

Real ninja don't use black clothes.... real ninja blend to the crowds (using civilian clothes).... kunoichi use their sex appeal (and more) to get information, and in case of treating prisoner...

EDIT: I always wonder what is your avatar, Sir hawk.

Also

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Game over man, game over

Oh yes, now how do I get <Ren>-san to interrogate me...

ZeroXSEED · 2011-10-19, 06:59

Quote:

Originally Posted by Detective-san

Oh yes, now how do I get <Ren>-san to interrogate me...

YOU FOOL! REN IS NOT KUNOICHI! NOT ORDI-

*STAB* *STAB*

<Ren>: "You talk too much, shall I Interrogate you, Box-san?"

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Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Wavehawk and Zero - Alright here's a draft that the old man may like more. Tell me what you two think. Spoiler: 'W-Where am I?' The bound young man looked around the room around him, darkness was all that greeted his eyes. 'What happened?' His hands and knees were both bound and he was naked from the waist up, based on the injuries it was most likely he was subdued in combat. The door to the room opened and a burst of light appeared. A girl with obscured features made her way in before closing the door and flooding the room in darkness once again. "So, our little prisoner is awake?" "..." The young man didn't answer and instead looked away from her. "The silent treatment eh?" She asked in a nonchalant tone. "Well, it doesn't matter, I have ways of making people talk." The girl put a hand into her jacket and pulled out a knife, fear struck the bound prisoners being at the shine of it's metallic sheen. "And they always talk in the end." He felt the knife press against his chest, it didn't pierce skin but it showed that she wasn't bluffing in regards to her threat. "Why did you attack Ichika Orimura?" "..." The knife suddenly pierced his chest and drew blood which dripped onto the floor below, the young mans gasp of pain went ignored by the knife wielding interrogator. "Go to hell." "Looks like they were right about you, I guess this is a good time as any to introduce myself since we'll be getting to know each other for a while. The girl put her face closer to the young man, her glistening snake like eyes made contact with his golden ones. "You can call me <Ren>, and don't bother introducing yourself. I know everything about you, Irish" Irish's stare didn't waver even through his fear, he would never break no matter what. Tell me what you two think?

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HasuMasu Senior Member Artist Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: The Middle Way	To add some more details to the alternate setting I'm working on, men totally can't use IS, that does include Ichika, though he does find a way to fight IS eventually, albeit in an admittedly roundabout way. As for the OC, he acts more like Yzuru during the early episodes of Angel Beats, he sort of just gets blown away in the wind. __________________

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Yachiyo ~`Seito Kaichō`~ Join Date: Sep 2011 Location: ~`Afterlife`~	@Eratas hehehe right, since I'm busy to study for my upcoming exams this friday, also I'm polishing the 1st chapter of the sequel ^_^ EDIT: I read Rin's Daydream, and wow. SHE'S really close, if I'm the one in there, I'll throw that crappy alarm clock outside the window XD __________________

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Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Yachiyo! I haven't seen you in a while Thanks for the reviews in daydreams and I hope you read Charlottes chapter when it comes out. @ Zero - That's it? i was hoping you could tell me if it was okay or not. If it is then I can make it into a series here like SWC and It'll be a survival horror with <Ren> as the "monster". @ wavehawk - Irish never breaks during interrogation due to his background so weapons are really the only way to go or he'd never talk. Starvation, fear, and isolation don't work on him since he's experienced it before.

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Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Wavehawk - Do I have your blessing to turn it to a story here on the forums? I also gave my reason as to why she used weapons in my previous post.

2011-10-19, 06:42	Link #3474
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Yachiyo - Houki was actually the closest since she actually gets a kiss Everyone else is gonna get blocked cause I'm an asshole @ Wavehawk - Sweet! Irish is gonna get put through a lot of shit by <Ren> but hopefully he won't be broken by the end of it. Can you tell me some tactics she uses to scare opponents?

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wavehawk Some say I'm the Reverse Join Date: Jul 2006	She's a ninja. Do research on the things (real) Ninja do to people they capture and interrogate. __________________ "We haven't been properly introduced..."

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ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Hmmm.... Real ninja don't use black clothes.... real ninja blend to the crowds (using civilian clothes).... kunoichi use their sex appeal (and more) to get information, and in case of treating prisoner... EDIT: I always wonder what is your avatar, Sir hawk. Also Currently Active Users Viewing This Thread: 11 (8 members and 3 guests) ZeroXSEED, wavehawk+, Eratas123+, Detective-san+, Yachiyo+, StratoSpear+, agetreme+, blitz1/2+ Game over man, game over __________________

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Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Wavehawk - He's gonna try to escape pretty soon and then it's just a game of cat and mouse. Any tips on that? I'm looking for things that <Ren> does that other ninjas dont't. @ Zero - I'm hoping you can read it but right now I have a question: Downer ending or not? What do you think?