2012-10-27, 08:44 | Link #37782 |
That one guy
Join Date: Nov 2011
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Whew. Thought there'd be more issues
Here Rong is going to be pretty much a jackass. I actually contemplated letting the cargo plane blow up just as he finally got the soldier to toss him over. I'm going to try making him not score brownie points on being a jerk with a heart of gold. So far he only has those six dagger bits. He took out one golem in three seconds. But there's still part 3 to go |
2012-10-27, 17:26 | Link #37783 |
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Okay, now I have a slight issue here. It's when the Silverbacks get out of their Beta Phase. Remember that the Beta Phase is the Silverback's equivilant to the IS's Default setting.
For it to get out of the Beta Phase is to get the Silverback into actual combat so it'll get the data in order to fit the user's prefered settings. When the Silverback gets the data while in it's Beta Phase from being in combat, it'll analyse it. So my question is, what should the feedback message be when done so? Example: [Combat data aquired. Deactivate the Silverback to proceed with the anaysis and configuration process.] Basically, it gets the data from when it's in combat. Once it's deactivated from being in combat, then the data will be analyzed and the Silverback itself will go through a configuration process to fit the user's preferance. Meaning that it'll move on to it's next phase and take on a new appearance on it's next activation. |
2012-10-27, 21:28 | Link #37784 |
I am no one
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@ Eras
Shoveling sand? Ah... I see... I'm on vacation, so I'll log in a lot more. Will be back later @ Demi Eh? Well, you could always do the worf, or justify that golem is pretty much a bad fighter in open sky. Or have anyone skilled enough do just that, the list is endless. The most important is whether his skill and abilities is context related to his role in the plot and backstory. Spoiler for Example:
@ Jak I think that one is sufficient
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2012-10-27, 22:02 | Link #37785 | |
Just another Idiot
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[New Combat data acquired. Please deactivate Silverback to begin anaysis and configuration process.] Sounds a little Window-y
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2012-10-27, 23:00 | Link #37788 |
Just another Idiot
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lol
== Unrelated Note: To make Watt a little more interesting, I think I will make him a troll. Let's just say it is easier to act like a retard if you talk in insane-troll-logic. --- Question: Would it be cruel if I introduced a new technology only work for female? (there is a reason for that) Might do a Genre shift from Sci-fic to Sci-fic and fantasy. where Magic can be described as "Sufficiently-Advanced-Technology"
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2012-10-27, 23:35 | Link #37789 | |
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Maybe... [Combat data acquired. Deactivate to begin anaysis and configuration process.] I feel that "New" won't fit well... |
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2012-10-27, 23:43 | Link #37790 | |
Just another Idiot
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[Combat data acquired. Please deactivate to begin/execute Analysis and Configuration process/procedure.] Please is the magic word. Edit: Alternative, if the creator is a Major dick: [Combat data acquired. Restarting in 3....] or Efficient: (Faster Execution) [Data acquired. Restart? [Y]/[N]
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2012-10-28, 00:34 | Link #37791 | |
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And we got another crossover with Naruto. The second friend |
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2012-10-28, 04:18 | Link #37796 |
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[Sighs]
I'm guessing no one else here has read up to Chapter 8... Especially the very last part of it. It'll let you know on how much it takes for a Silverback's Energy Shield to break in order to down it. Last edited by DarkJak2050; 2012-10-28 at 04:28. |
2012-10-28, 04:34 | Link #37797 |
I am no one
Join Date: Apr 2010
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@ Eras
As long as you qualified, even if it's different subject than the one you focused on. @ Jak Sorry, no offense, if anything, I haven't read too many fic lately. The exception being the new fics you posted here, and even then, haphazardly. I knew you want detailed analysis, so I skip until I could read proper.
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2012-10-28, 04:46 | Link #37800 |
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@ Jak - Jak, for the love of all that is holy, please stop acting like a view monger. Do you read my stories? Does most of everyone here read anything I do, apart from the drafts I give Senpai (If even that)? No, but I don't complain about it. We're here to offer criticism and advice. This isn't an ad site to promote our fanfics and nothing else.
You want our advice or comments on something, please state it. Don't say "Well, If you read my story, you'd already know that...." @ Senpai - So any member of the schools staff?
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