2011-10-30, 05:30 | Link #5121 | |
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N: But, but... Dr. ?: Unfortunately the Admiral is not with us so you cannot stay here for long- and if i remember, you are not under Naval Command, but under the Air Forces, I suggest that you move away now or face court-martial under the Initiative Code instead of the Bureau Code for violation of Zoning Rules and Mutual Interference. yeah someone is committing a zoning violation right now oh look another page claim. |
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2011-10-30, 06:12 | Link #5125 |
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Join Date: Sep 2011
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It's not really dramatic. It's used a lot in comedy where the protagonist gets tricked by his friend into doing something exhausting before calling them a prick and fainting. After that they wake up somewhere else, usually something stupid happens when they wake up.
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2011-10-30, 06:21 | Link #5128 | |
Titans Test Team Pilot
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Location: The Elysium
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I just need some guidelines as in what is supposed to happen and stuffs
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2011-10-30, 06:23 | Link #5129 | |
~`Seito Kaichō`~
Join Date: Sep 2011
Location: ~`Afterlife`~
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Whatcha think? @Zero, she already showed up, that's why Nohotoke said that the training is cancelled
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2011-10-30, 06:28 | Link #5132 | |
~`Seito Kaichō`~
Join Date: Sep 2011
Location: ~`Afterlife`~
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Ah, did you mean the girls visiting him in the clinic?
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2011-10-30, 06:32 | Link #5133 |
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Something like that. He was out cold for like 30 minutes right? You can put in a scene where some students try to sneak in and see him but get goomba stomped by somebody else. If you think this is implausible then just read volume 5, the students there do way more things that cross the line.
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2011-10-30, 06:33 | Link #5134 | |
~`Seito Kaichō`~
Join Date: Sep 2011
Location: ~`Afterlife`~
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PS: I will never read the LN
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fanfic ideas, fanfiction, ff.net, harem, is fanfic, warning fanfic spoilers, wincest |
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