2003-11-24, 08:30 | Link #7 |
Busy
Join Date: Jun 2003
Age: 41
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The CGing is pretty nice, but fix the body a bit.
Face:Make the nose smaller. It also needs to go a little more upwards. Make the chin a bit more pointy. It's too long and round and makes her look more like a guy. Body:Left arm looks a bit longer then right arm. Try to make her breasts a bit bigger as well. Just so it's more noticable. She looks way too flat. I'm not sure if you were trying to make her look like a guy, but her face mostly is what gives her this image. I thought she was a guy until someone pointed out otherwise. |
2003-11-25, 02:22 | Link #9 |
Earth Died Screaming
Join Date: Nov 2003
Location: Thrushcross Grange
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Ehm, I can't say I agree with people wanting you to change the face. It's nice to see someone doing something different instead of just copying from their favourite anime or manga. Keep developing your own style and you'll be so much the better for it.
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2003-11-25, 09:40 | Link #11 |
Member
Join Date: Nov 2003
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lol man that girl is uglyyyyyyyyyyyyy kinda makes my potrait of my girlfriend look good ahhahaha. Anyways nice job on the cg and the body isnt too bad. The face is too long and inside curvy and the eye pops out of the head on the left ewwwwww and the nose.... anyways Im shure you'll get a more femine style soon enough.
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