SOTM 2010 - July (Flight) - Entry Thread

[Namiey]

another draft:

c&C?

[Riker]

Originally Posted by Namiey

another draft:

c&C?

I like the colors and composition of the sig, but I think the fonts could be better. "Flight" is still ok but I can't read what the other word says.

It also has less of a "flight" feeling than your last sig. If you wish to use this one, maybe add a flock of doves flying in the direction Miku is looking at.

[Larthak]

Originally Posted by Riker

I like the colors and composition of the sig, but I think the fonts could be better. "Flight" is still ok but I can't read what the other word says.

It also has less of a "flight" feeling than your last sig. If you wish to use this one, maybe add a flock of doves flying in the direction Miku is looking at.

This. The font doesn't fit in at all. The sig itself is very nice though, if a bit lacking in the theme, but again I'm not the judge here ;D

[White Manju Bun]

Originally Posted by Namiey

another draft:

c&C?

Just taking what AX said in the theme post

Be it aircraft, hovering cars, buildings, people, ships or what have you, the point is the object in focus must be airborne.

Obviously since Miku is on the ground the plane isnt airborne. I think your last sig did a better job of the flight theme although Miku was the object of focus not the plane. Hopefully this helps some people.

Also AX stated Falling is excluded.

[abet17]

its harder one ^_^

here my 1st draft..............

[Namiey]

Originally Posted by White Manju Bun

Just taking what AX said in the theme post



Obviously since Miku is on the ground the plane isnt airborne. I think your last sig did a better job of the flight theme although Miku was the object of focus not the plane. Hopefully this helps some people.

Also AX stated Falling is excluded.

bfore, i agreed with patchy, this theme is harder than i thought, lol..
lets ask AX then, is this acceptable?

[NorthernFallout]

^ Yea, your previous one is better. While the planes wasn't in focus, they were flying. This is on the ground

[Riker]

@Namiey: Trust my hunch, add a flock of doves flying around Miku, get a better font and you'll have one smexy sig. =o

[mikahcho]

Crap, you guys are crazy at Gfx here... Here's my entry, I guess:

[Namiey]

Originally Posted by Riker

@Namiey: Trust my hunch, add a flock of doves flying around Miku, get a better font and you'll have one smexy sig. =o

i don't know where put the doves, it seems it have no empty space.

Originally Posted by mikahcho

Crap, you guys are crazy at Gfx here... Here's my entry, I guess:

your entry is over the size limit.

[Riker]

Originally Posted by Namiey

i don't know where put the doves, it seems it have no empty space.

My idea was to have them fly past Miku. Something like this:





Sorry for the low quality doves, it was just something I put together quickly.
So if you apply it to your sig it'll look something like this:





I hope you don't mind that I edited your sig to demonstrate my idea, because I hope it fits the theme somehow.

[Namiey]

Originally Posted by Riker

My idea was to have them fly past Miku. Something like this:





Sorry for the low quality doves, it was just something I put together quickly.
So if you apply it to your sig it'll look something like this:





I hope you don't mind that I edited your sig to demonstrate my idea, because I hope it fits the theme somehow.

thanks, riker! you really helped me

[LKK]

Originally Posted by CrowKenobi

Koyomi is flying (and enjoying every minute of it) in the Gendai Mahou OP, but I'll play with it and see if I can't improve on the image.

For what it's worth, I thought she was flying all along because of her expression and body language. I know that if I was falling from that height, I'd be terrified.

[CMSensei]

Final Entry

[Drake]

Final entry

[Patchy]

Originally Posted by Larthak

Well, technically, she's Aya so she should be flying, but...trying to persuade others into thinking she's flying even though they do not think so is not the point of SOTM. You have to make it CLEAR. Maybe editing her wings in there? There's a lot of fanart with her including her wings...

lol I already managed about that, though I think the 1st one is kinda wasted so I still insisted about it

anyways here's my,

Final Entry

[CrowKenobi]

Here's version 2:

[Naoto]

my try this month
this theme is quiet hard for me = A ="

[White Manju Bun]

Originally Posted by Naoto

my try this month
this theme is quiet hard for me = A ="

It took me a sec since it was hard to see her wings but I think you can tell she's flying. BG is colorful but I think there's too much going on, it takes your focus off the fairy.

[Evil Rick]

Originally Posted by abet17

its harder one ^_^

here my 1st draft..............

Perhaps the sun's light is too strong and the renders are to dark, decrease light intensity and intensify a bit colors to make the sig more clear.

Originally Posted by CrowKenobi

Here's version 2:

33 diferent renders with equal proportions and size don't work goo on a sig, makes it´unfocused, also, floating or falling is not conciderated exactly as flying, I think.

Originally Posted by Naoto

my try this month
this theme is quiet hard for me = A ="

Yeha, very colorfull but I found it on a positive way, altough, I do agree it's a bit chaoti, perhaps focusing in 2 or 3 especific colors would help to focus the sig more.

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Now here's my 2nd try with some tweaks and some text work:

V2


C&C much apreciated