Nanoha FanFiction Discussion

[Fuyu no Sora]

Originally Posted by Satashi

I couldn't do a humanoid one. I'm limiting myself on how many people Nanoha gets with lol Let's see....

She's slept with Fate, Hayate, Yuuno, Keroko, Raising Heart (soon).....

See? Dangerous ideas alright

And....promiscuous Nanoha is promiscuous

EDIT:

I CLAIM THIS PAGE IN THE NAME OF RANDOMNESS AND CRACK (AKA = KHRACK)

FOR CADIAAAA!!!!

[ghazghkull]

Originally Posted by Satashi

I couldn't do a humanoid one. I'm limiting myself on how many people Nanoha gets with lol Let's see....

She's slept with Fate, Hayate, Yuuno, Keroko, Raising Heart (soon).....

O.o

Have you actually done Nanoha/Hayate before or something?! Fate's a given, Yuuno's a give, Keroko you just released :3 (which I might add was an improvement to your last one) Raising Heart which is to be released but...I don't recall you ever releasing one with Hayate. Unless of course you had released it before I had joined, then that would make sense :3

[AshLikeSnow]

Originally Posted by Evil Rick

O3O

Your tring some Fate Point of View eh?

I really like it, congragulations Amigo

Originally Posted by Gillian

Spoiler for review:

Cool, that you include Nanoha's parents and they comfort Fate
also nice, that Lindy came to help Fate with it all, but what I wonder, is why it is Fate's fault, that Nanoha volunteered to the mission?
and how will she go on?
question after question...

cannot wait for the next chapter

Somebody from Nanoha should go to the dentist?

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

:3 I say yes because I have to know how it would turn out. (What was that about curiosity and the cat...)

@ Ash I like That Day more and more with every chapter.
@Anyone reading Magical Babysitter Lyrical Zafira I've finally gotten out of the writing slump I was in and have started writing chapter 3.
@ Rest of FF The at which krack is posted is incredible I wrote the out this message refreshed before I was about to post and there were about five more krackity posts posted

Checked backlog and I found love ~ Thanks guys :3 lol
Any criticisms you guys may have shall be taken on board so feel free to comment
Oh. And there's a LOUD 'yes!!' coming from me regarding your new chappy. Can't wait

Originally Posted by Satashi

So far it's 17 yes, 12 no. Looks like RH is going to get to have some fun : p

What's Magical Babysitter Lyrical Zafira about?


I can't deal with the krack of the OC thread, but I love the chat :3

Sultan Zafira!

Omg Sata-chan you have to read Babysitter Zaffy!! It makes me laugh :3

[Fuyu no Sora]

Originally Posted by AshLikeSnow

Omg Sata-chan you have to read Babysitter Zaffy!! It makes me laugh :3

What is Babysitter Zafira?

[AshLikeSnow]

Originally Posted by Fuyu no Sora

What is Babysitter Zafira?

Shiny's ficcy

Linky here: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4083877/...Lyrical_Zafira

Zaffy needs more love ~

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by ghazghkull

O.o

Have you actually done Nanoha/Hayate before or something?! Fate's a given, Yuuno's a give, Keroko you just released :3 (which I might add was an improvement to your last one) Raising Heart which is to be released but...I don't recall you ever releasing one with Hayate. Unless of course you had released it before I had joined, then that would make sense :3

I did a funny short where N/F/H all got together a little while ago. When they were drunk

For real, though, all the current lemons were practice for the SbtB one that is coming up. As a joint project with Angel, I wanted to get a lot of practice in so it would be worth reading.

sneak peak? Okay ^^

NSFW! But still AS safe.

Spoiler for NSFW NSFW NSFW:

Moving down, Fate kissed Nanoha's bellybutton. Hand instantly threaded through her hair as she encouraged the shirt farther up. The girl under her was shaking, breathing erratically as she once again kissed the soft skin. Red eyes explored the revealed section, hands embracing the sides in a soft caress. She could feel each pulse of Nanoha's heart though the skin that she kissed again. Her lips pursed, mouth pressing harder against the delicate stomach, and sucked. Nanoha's expression was just as she thought it would be. Her body spasmed briefly, panting increasing. The soft skin was bitten lightly, licked to be soothed, and sucked on again to increase the feeling. She left a small bruise, and kissed it to ease any lingering feeling before moving upwards again. Nanoha was gasping now, hands shivering as she was kissed again.

The blonde's mouth moved upwards, nose trailing the skin as she inhaled the scent. Another kiss just below the bra, another taste of skin, another mark of love. Fate paused to catch her breath, to look up and see Nanoha's nervous but excited look. The eyes told her everything she wanted to know. Slowly Nanoha's back arched, her shirt sliding upwards along with her bra. Hands trailed from Fate's hair as the clothing was moved along her body. Brown hair spilled out over the bed, the cool air relaxing her burning revealed skin. Hands touched, fingers interlaced, lips met skin once again.

[TheShinySword]

Originally Posted by Satashi

So far it's 17 yes, 12 no. Looks like RH is going to get to have some fun : p

What's Magical Babysitter Lyrical Zafira about?


I can't deal with the krack of the OC thread, but I love the chat :3

Sultan Zafira!

@Ash thanks for linking

MBLZ is exactly what the title says it's about Zafira... Babysitting. It's based off of Zafira's scenes in StrikerS as well as everyone in Long Arch's (Hayate's administrative branch if you don't remember). It starts around roughly ep 14-15 and goes through... well I know that but you don't yet. It follows the cannon timeline pretty much, but I'm adding in an extra 2-4 weeks (haven't decided which yet) so it's mildly AU but not enough to warrant being labeled as such. Basically it's based off the question, What exactly was going on while the main crew was off fighting?

Originally Posted by Satashi

I did a funny short where N/F/H all got together a little while ago. When they were drunk

For real, though, all the current lemons were practice for the SbtB one that is coming up. As a joint project with Angel, I wanted to get a lot of practice in so it would be worth reading.

sneak peak? Okay ^^

NSFW! But still AS safe.

Spoiler for NSFW NSFW NSFW:

Moving down, Fate kissed Nanoha's bellybutton. Hand instantly threaded through her hair as she encouraged the shirt farther up. The girl under her was shaking, breathing erratically as she once again kissed the soft skin. Red eyes explored the revealed section, hands embracing the sides in a soft caress. She could feel each pulse of Nanoha's heart though the skin that she kissed again. Her lips pursed, mouth pressing harder against the delicate stomach, and sucked. Nanoha's expression was just as she thought it would be. Her body spasmed briefly, panting increasing. The soft skin was bitten lightly, licked to be soothed, and sucked on again to increase the feeling. She left a small bruise, and kissed it to ease any lingering feeling before moving upwards again. Nanoha was gasping now, hands shivering as she was kissed again.

The blonde's mouth moved upwards, nose trailing the skin as she inhaled the scent. Another kiss just below the bra, another taste of skin, another mark of love. Fate paused to catch her breath, to look up and see Nanoha's nervous but excited look. The eyes told her everything she wanted to know. Slowly Nanoha's back arched, her shirt sliding upwards along with her bra. Hands trailed from Fate's hair as the clothing was moved along her body. Brown hair spilled out over the bed, the cool air relaxing her burning revealed skin. Hands touched, fingers interlaced, lips met skin once again.

and what a lovely peak that was.

Edit: Forgot to mention MBLZ is primarily a comedy

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

@Ash thanks for linking

MBLZ is exactly what the title says it's about Zafira... Babysitting. It's based off of Zafira's scenes in StrikerS as well as everyone in Long Arch's (Hayate's administrative branch if you don't remember). It starts around roughly ep 14-15 and goes through... well I know that but you don't yet. It follows the cannon timeline pretty much, but I'm adding in an extra 2-4 weeks (haven't decided which yet) so it's mildly AU but not enough to warrant being labeled as such. Basically it's based off the question, What exactly was going on while the main crew was off fighting?



and what a lovely peak that was.

He's babysitting Vivio? And thank you for the compliment ^^

[TheShinySword]

Originally Posted by Satashi

He's babysitting Vivio? And thank you for the compliment ^^

Yep. In StrikerS Fate mentions Zafira watches over Vivio while she and Nanoha are away. I kind of took that line and ran with it.

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

Yep. In StrikerS Fate mentions Zafira watches over Vivio while she and Nanoha are away. I kind of took that line and ran with it.

Vivio is my favorite character :3 I'll give it a shot.

[Kha]

Originally Posted by Wild Goose

...Explain the Kagecrack, pls. NAO. Do you REALLY wanna scare off FF?

[Khrack Logic]

OC Chatline = Kagerou's fault.

I don't lurk in the OC Chatline, so the crack production there is thanks to Kagerou.

Therefore, Chatline Crack is Kagerack.

[/Khrack Logic]

*starts running*

Originally Posted by Fuyu no Sora

I CLAIM THIS PAGE IN THE NAME OF RANDOMNESS AND CRACK (AKA = KHRACK)

FOR CADIAAAA!!!!

For ME?!

[God Emperor Haruki] "Very well done, my humble servant." [/God Emperor Haruki]

*RUNS AT LUDICRIOUS SPEED*

[Fuyu no Sora]

Originally Posted by Kha

[Khrack Logic]

OC Chatline = Kagerou's fault.

I don't lurk in the OC Chatline, so the crack production there is thanks to Kagerou.

Therefore, Chatline Crack is Kagerack.

[/Khrack Logic]

*starts running*

Originally Posted by Kha

For ME?!

[God Emperor Haruki] "Very well done, my humble servant." [/God Emperor Haruki]

*RUNS AT LUDICRIOUS SPEED*

Well....technically it was for Cadia in all, but seeing that you're one of The Founding Fathers of Cadia then I guess you could consider it for you

And I guess Haruki really did become the God Emperor, huh?

[Kagerou]

Originally Posted by Kha

Nope, it's a new kind of crack made by Infecting Satashi-nyan with Kagerack. I call this new drug Satashol.

...
KHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

Originally Posted by Saint X

Spoiler for Breaker!:

The power of Kharack compels you...

The power of Suteki, Kinshi and Dekkai compels you...

The power of Caramelldansen compels you...

The power of Crack compels you...

The power of Epicscum compels you...

The power of Sweetcheesium compels you...

The power of Sentai compels you...

The power of Hotblood compels you...

The power of Traps compels you...

The power of OC compels you...

There is no Escape...

*hops into gondola and ROWS AT LUDICROUS SPEED*

Originally Posted by Kha

[Khrack Logic]

OC Chatline = Kagerou's fault.

I don't lurk in the OC Chatline, so the crack production there is thanks to Kagerou.

Therefore, Chatline Crack is Kagerack.

[/Khrack Logic]

*starts running*
For ME?!

[God Emperor Haruki] "Very well done, my humble servant." [/God Emperor Haruki]

*RUNS AT LUDICRIOUS SPEED*

Oh, you better run, cause no speed in the world is fast enough to lose me.

*brandishes Goldion Hammer*
*gives chase*

[Junkedcat]

*since last post*What....The....Ugggggg....

Spoiler for AshLikeSnow:

Another good chapter. Fate has gotten the support she needs to take the first baby step. Not out of the woods, I see it affecting her exam, but somewhere different from before. Methinks that Nanoha had to save Fate's butt and she is now feeling guilty that she wasn't strong enough to do it on her own (Raid Slash played with something like that). What ever you decide to do i have faith that what you write will be good. If it takes a lot of time to get something like what you write out then its time worth waiting...

Spoiler for Sam the Onion:

More interesting scenarios. I can see the five paths resulting in two possibly related things. One that is that each path is representative of a school of Selshin magic. The second is that four of the paths leads to the new knights in some fashion and the middle one leads to the BoD or something that will lead to it.

Originally Posted by Evangelion Xgouki

So...if Nanoha is a landscaper...who's bushes does she prune?

*RUNS*

*Trip...*

Spoiler for You made me do it...(not related to L!F)kindofNSFW:

"Ok" Nanoha put the shaving cream and razor back on the bathroom vanity. "Now its your turn."

Fate leaned back in the tub and gazed up at her girlfriend. "So then where are you going?"

Nanoha winked before disappearing. "Just to get something special."

'Something special?'

*putt putt putt put*

'What the hell?'

*putt putt pu- voomm putt putt putt.....*

'Is that a?!!!'

Nanoha came back into the bathroom with goggles, work gloves, a hedge trimmer and nothing else.

"IM NOT THAT BAD!"

"Nayhahah" It was worth seeing the expression on her girlfriends face...

Originally Posted by toran

Junkedcat [Landscaper Fate] : I'm still not quite sure how to take this fic. To me they just don't feel like Fate or Nanoha. Just a face to a character so far. It's not to say that I don't like what is written, I actually like what you have of the story so far.

I said when i started that the characters would be quite out there as far as their personalities. Maybe when i get to the background of the girls one might be able to pick up what would make them the way they are compared to the originals.

[TheShinySword]

*Trip...*

Spoiler for You made me do it...(not related to L!F)kindofNSFW:

"Ok" Nanoha put the shaving cream and razor back on the bathroom vanity. "Now its your turn."

Fate leaned back in the tub and gazed up at her girlfriend. "So then where are you going?"

Nanoha winked before disappearing. "Just to get something special."

'Something special?'

*putt putt putt put*

'What the hell?'

*putt putt pu- voomm putt putt putt.....*

'Is that a?!!!'

Nanoha came back into the bathroom with goggles, work gloves, a hedge trimmer and nothing else.

"IM NOT THAT BAD!"

"Nayhahah" It was worth seeing the expression on her girlfriends face...

... ......................................BWA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA... can't... breathe

[ghazghkull]

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

*Trip...*

Spoiler for You made me do it...(not related to L!F)kindofNSFW:

"Ok" Nanoha put the shaving cream and razor back on the bathroom vanity. "Now its your turn."

Fate leaned back in the tub and gazed up at her girlfriend. "So then where are you going?"

Nanoha winked before disappearing. "Just to get something special."

'Something special?'

*putt putt putt put*

'What the hell?'

*putt putt pu- voomm putt putt putt.....*

'Is that a?!!!'

Nanoha came back into the bathroom with goggles, work gloves, a hedge trimmer and nothing else.

"IM NOT THAT BAD!"

"Nayhahah" It was worth seeing the expression on her girlfriends face...

... ......................................BWA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA... can't... breathe

*chokes on dinner*

NANDA KORE GA?!!!!!

[TheShinySword]

Now that I've stopped laughing...

Originally Posted by Junkedcat

Spoiler for You made me do it...(not related to L!F)kindofNSFW:

*putt putt putt put*

Simple typo

Originally Posted by Junkedcat

Spoiler for You made me do it...(not related to L!F)kindofNSFW:

"Nayhahah" It was worth seeing the expression on her girlfriends face...

This one was funny; apparently Fate should be wary, her possibly insane hedge clipper wielding girlfriend is cheating. Me thinks Fate should pull out the weed whacker.

[Momo Chan]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Nanoha x Raising Heart lemon!

http://snappoll.com/poll/257435.php

Choose your destiny!

I have no idea HOW that is going to work.....
....but I'm not going to stick around to find out....

*Runs while covering eyes*

[ghazghkull]

hey Satashi, just block the guy if you don't want the Major to be reviewing you.

[AshLikeSnow]

Originally Posted by Junkedcat

*since last post*What....The....Ugggggg....

Spoiler for AshLikeSnow:

Another good chapter. Fate has gotten the support she needs to take the first baby step. Not out of the woods, I see it affecting her exam, but somewhere different from before. Methinks that Nanoha had to save Fate's butt and she is now feeling guilty that she wasn't strong enough to do it on her own (Raid Slash played with something like that). What ever you decide to do i have faith that what you write will be good. If it takes a lot of time to get something like what you write out then its time worth waiting...

Spoiler for Sam the Onion:

More interesting scenarios. I can see the five paths resulting in two possibly related things. One that is that each path is representative of a school of Selshin magic. The second is that four of the paths leads to the new knights in some fashion and the middle one leads to the BoD or something that will lead to it.

*Trip...*

Spoiler for You made me do it...(not related to L!F)kindofNSFW:

"Ok" Nanoha put the shaving cream and razor back on the bathroom vanity. "Now its your turn."

Fate leaned back in the tub and gazed up at her girlfriend. "So then where are you going?"

Nanoha winked before disappearing. "Just to get something special."

'Something special?'

*putt putt putt put*

'What the hell?'

*putt putt pu- voomm putt putt putt.....*

'Is that a?!!!'

Nanoha came back into the bathroom with goggles, work gloves, a hedge trimmer and nothing else.

"IM NOT THAT BAD!"

"Nayhahah" It was worth seeing the expression on her girlfriends face...

I said when i started that the characters would be quite out there as far as their personalities. Maybe when i get to the background of the girls one might be able to pick up what would make them the way they are compared to the originals.

O. M. G.
I think my eyes almost bulged out, and had to reread that to make sure I was reading that correctly, lmao.
.. I can't get the image of Nanoha complete with a mask and gloves pushing a push-mower through the bathroom door out of my head xD

edit-ness:
I was so shocked I forgot to make a reply to your comments lol. Thank you for them, it makes my day worthwhile. I'm glad you like the little push Fate had in the right direction, that was the bit I had to think most on. And I do believe you're trying to wheedle the reason Fate feels guilty out of me