AnimeSuki Forums

Nagumo · 2012-05-28, 21:27

05. はやて・なのは・フェイト帰宅
05. Hayate, Nanoha, Fate returning home.

Spoiler for track 5:

Nagumo · 2012-05-28, 22:29

06. 八神家にて (1)
06. At the Yagami Household (1)

Spoiler for Track 6:

Nagumo · 2012-05-28, 22:37

These tracks are getting more and more boring...

I can't believe I wasted 25 minutes translating, transcribing and posting these.

07. 守護騎士4人
07. The 4 Guardian Knights

Spoiler for track 7:

Nagumo · 2012-05-28, 23:03

I hate to say it, but what the hell are these tracks supposed to demonstrate? Family dynamics? Demonstrate that despite being workaholics they're still family? Couldn't they have a more meaningful track rather than break it up into little itty pieces?

08. 八神家にて (2)
08. At the Yagami Household (2)

Spoiler for Track 8:

Justin_Brett · 2012-05-28, 23:50

Quote:

Originally Posted by Nagumo

These tracks are getting more and more boring...

I can't believe I wasted 25 minutes translating, transcribing and posting these.

07. 守護騎士4人
07. The 4 Guardian Knights

Spoiler for track 7:

That's a pretty fancy title for basically nothing at all. People paid money to hear irrelevant stuff like this, seriously? That one with Vita and the Book could have been interesting, but it didn't really amount to anything either. How many tracks are there, exactly?

Nagumo · 2012-05-29, 21:11

Quote:

Originally Posted by Justin_Brett

That's a pretty fancy title for basically nothing at all. People paid money to hear irrelevant stuff like this, seriously? That one with Vita and the Book could have been interesting, but it didn't really amount to anything either. How many tracks are there, exactly?

In Side Y there are ten... of which 5 of them are pretty useless. The other 5 almost useless.

Akiyoshi · 2012-05-29, 21:27

LOL, Hayate is worried about the Wolks eating junk food xD?

*suddenly imagining Signum with a bag of potato chips*

xDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD!!!!!

Ok,i know most of this is fluff but i'm so desperate for Yagamike developement that i swallow every piece Tsuzuki throw at us, so thanks again for doing it Nagumo. you're really showing your love for the art, it's already 8 tracks we're almost there xD

I guess the next one is when the Force Trio and the Wolkenritter exchange toughts, that one is interesting at least to me n_n

Justin_Brett · 2012-05-29, 21:32

You'd think they'd have gotten voice actors for the Hucks before this, so the story's villains could actually get fleshed out. Then again, even the heroes of it are barely here.

Akiyoshi · 2012-05-29, 21:37

Fortunately this track is about the Yagami family, so the Huckebein prescence is entirely unecessary xD

Justin_Brett · 2012-05-29, 21:41

It's also fucking nothing.

ZeroIchiNi · 2012-05-29, 21:43

Quote:

Originally Posted by Akiyoshi

Fortunately this track is about the Yagami family, so the Huckebein prescence is entirely unecessary xD

Well if you cut the two disk in two layers and glue the label side together with the Letter Y and T with the T upside down, You'll get Side - H. j/k

Auxilism · 2012-05-30, 07:43

Hey Nagumo, I really appreciate your efforts on translating the sound stages, especially SSX.

Therefore, I want to try to contribute. I can't translate from japanese to english and I nearly failed my chinese exams so that won't happen either.

I'm thinking if you would like indents on the text. If you would, pm me your email and I'll send an example, using an extract with the name which I think is the longest, Mach Caliber. I assume you use microsoft word 2010?

Another few things I noticed.
Sometimes you put "Caliber" and at other times "Calibre". Is this intented?
There are a few emoticons on the page. Did you want to put "; )" but the face showed up instead?

I could read SSX again and try to edit any minor errors, of course with an error log (mircosoft word file) for you to approve the changes.
The log would look like this:
Disk*1 or 2*-*number*

*Character*: *sentence* (may put "..." if it's not the first sentence said)

Changed *previous word(s)* to *new word(s)*

After checking if they are satisfactory, I'll implement them and send it to you to upload onto the wiki.

Although, I may only get this into high gear in a few weeks, during school break.

Edit: I think I should do another extract (with Cross Mirage this time), with double line breaks between characters. I'll send both to see which you prefer if you're willing to take up the offer.

Nagumo · 2012-05-30, 22:25

Quote:

Originally Posted by darkhalo191

Hey Nagumo, I really appreciate your efforts on translating the sound stages, especially SSX.

Therefore, I want to try to contribute. I can't translate from japanese to english and I nearly failed my chinese exams so that won't happen either.

I'm thinking if you would like indents on the text. If you would, pm me your email and I'll send an example, using an extract with the name which I think is the longest, Mach Caliber. I assume you use microsoft word 2010?

Another few things I noticed.
Sometimes you put "Caliber" and at other times "Calibre". Is this intented?
There are a few emoticons on the page. Did you want to put "; )" but the face showed up instead?

I could read SSX again and try to edit any minor errors, of course with an error log (mircosoft word file) for you to approve the changes.
The log would look like this:
Disk*1 or 2*-*number*

*Character*: *sentence* (may put "..." if it's not the first sentence said)

Changed *previous word(s)* to *new word(s)*

After checking if they are satisfactory, I'll implement them and send it to you to upload onto the wiki.

Although, I may only get this into high gear in a few weeks, during school break.

Edit: I think I should do another extract (with Cross Mirage this time), with double line breaks between characters. I'll send both to see which you prefer if you're willing to take up the offer.

To a certain extent what you're suggesting has already been done. People have taken the translations and cleaned them up so they could put them on youtube.

You're free to do what you want with my translation, most of the emoticons are unintentional and I never got around fixing it because I moved on to other projects.

As for Calibre vs Caliber, probably typos. You'll see quite a few since I have no editors.

Auxilism · 2012-05-30, 23:05

So I guess you don't want to edit the pages on your site anymore?

Nagumo · 2012-05-31, 19:33

Quote:

Originally Posted by darkhalo191

So I guess you don't want to edit the pages on your site anymore?

OH, I'll edit them. It's just that there are so many things out there that want or need to be translated, I just never got around to actually editting a lot of my translations.

Auxilism · 2012-05-31, 20:23

Hmm, would it be possible for me to earn your trust so that I can edit them directly on the site for you?

Nagumo · 2012-05-31, 21:49

Quote:

Originally Posted by darkhalo191

Hmm, would it be possible for me to earn your trust so that I can edit them directly on the site for you?

Sure, just post the changes you intend to make. Go to the wiki, register as an editor.

I think I'm supposed to receive an email to authorize you.

In any case, just post the changes you intend in the discussion post area of wikispaces.

Auxilism · 2012-06-01, 00:04

Alright, though I'm not used to having no edit button...

Please ignore my first thread, I'm testing how it handles indents, multiple spacing etc etc. I wanted to test by continuously editing the first post but I can't and editing the title isn't possible either...

Edit: Ahh why isn't the ">" function working? Does it only work when I edit the actual page?

Nagumo · 2012-06-24, 01:12

Urge to kill Nanoha writers... rising...

09. 魔導書の縁
09. The Bonds of the (Magic) Tome

Spoiler for Track 9:

bhl88 · 2012-06-24, 01:20

Now waiting for the Materials and the Florian sisters to come out with a drama CD for the movie.

2012-05-28, 21:27	Link #321
Nagumo Random Translator Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: New Brunswick	05. はやて・なのは・フェイト帰宅 05. Hayate, Nanoha, Fate returning home. Spoiler for track 5: Nanoha: A job well done today, Commander Yagami. Fate: Great job. Hayate: Oh, First Lieutenant Takamachi and Enforcer Fate. Agito+Rein: A job well done today to you both too. Hayate: Oh, are you both going home today as well? Nanoha: Yup. Agito: It’s kind of rare for all three of you to get off on the same shift at the same time. Rein: It just goes to show that their normal shifts are getting closer together. It’s a good thing. Fate: Huh? Hayate: Hey, you guys (Thoma and company), why are you all looking over from so far? Trio: Ack… Thoma: Oh, um, my apologies! Lily: We felt we shouldn’t be bothering you… Isis: It’s not because we’re trying to hide from you or anything…! Hayate: Oh, you’re not bothering us at all. Are you doing your best in work and training? Thoma: Yes, without fail! Lily: We are doing our best! Nanoha: Tomorrow morning, you all have training again. Isis: Yes ma’am! Fate: I will be participating in your training as well. Trio: Thanks for your hard work! Hayate: So 1st Lieutenant Takamachi and Enforcer Fate, are you heading home right away? Nanoha: Nope, we were thinking of heading out for dinner before going home. Rein: Oh, really? Nanoha: Vivio is on a school trip/training camp, so it’s just the two of us. Fate: We’re about to decide on the place to go to. Hayate: If that’s the case, then why don’t you come to my place? We can have dinner together. Nanoha: Oh, can we? Hayate: Of course you ca. Rein: Agito and Rein will show off our skills! Agito: Yeah! Just leave it to us! Fate: If that’s the case, I guess we’ll come. Hayate: Sure. __________________ I do not like Kansai-ben, but I do like Hayate-chan! Also, Canadian here, not actually Japanese.

2012-05-28, 22:29	Link #322
Nagumo Random Translator Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: New Brunswick	06. 八神家にて (1) 06. At the Yagami Household (1) Spoiler for Track 6: cooking sound Rein: All right Agito, I’ll leave this up to you. Agito: Gotcha. Rein can you get the tomatoes out from the fridge? Rein: Okay! Nanoha: As usual, those two are the perfect combo/partners. Fate: They’re so skilled… Hayate: The two have taken over the position (trans note: as in ‘best cooks’) of cooking dinner for the entire Yagami family now. Agito: What are you saying Meister? Rein: The one who taught us is you, Hayate-chan! Hayate: Haha, that might be but recently I just immediately fall asleep the moment I get back home. Agito: Well you have been real busy late, so it can’t be helped. Rein: When you’re back home, you’ve got to have ample healthy nourishment and peaceful rest Hayate: And I gratefully accept the love from my two youngest kids. Nanoha: We leave ourselves in your tender care then. (bad translation) Fate: Same here. __________________ I do not like Kansai-ben, but I do like Hayate-chan! Also, Canadian here, not actually Japanese. Last edited by Nagumo; 2012-05-28 at 22:43.

2012-05-28, 22:37	Link #323
Nagumo Random Translator Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: New Brunswick	These tracks are getting more and more boring... I can't believe I wasted 25 minutes translating, transcribing and posting these. 07. 守護騎士4人 07. The 4 Guardian Knights Spoiler for track 7: rustle, munching Signum: Vita. Vita: urk… Shamal: Vita-chan! Are you having your dinner here? Vita: cough cough cough What’re you all doing here? Signum: Break time to eat dinner. We wanted to look at the stars too. Shamal: And the weather tonight is clear, so the stars are beautiful. Vita: Is that so? foot steps Zafira: You all… Shamal: Oh my, Zafira. Signum: So all four guardian knights have gathered then. Vita: What the… I just wanted to eat my dinner alone peacefully. Signum: Oh, don’t be like that. Shamal: I have some warm tea, want some? Vita: … I’ll have some. __________________ I do not like Kansai-ben, but I do like Hayate-chan! Also, Canadian here, not actually Japanese.

2012-05-28, 23:03	Link #324
Nagumo Random Translator Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: New Brunswick	I hate to say it, but what the hell are these tracks supposed to demonstrate? Family dynamics? Demonstrate that despite being workaholics they're still family? Couldn't they have a more meaningful track rather than break it up into little itty pieces? 08. 八神家にて (2) 08. At the Yagami Household (2) Spoiler for Track 8: Hayate: But you know, besides my two youngest, I’m sort of worried about the others since I’ve left them all back at HQ/the base. Nanoha: You’re worried? Fate: But the four of them are together though, there shouldn’t be anything you should worry about. Hayate: Oh, no, no. I didn’t mean like emergency sorties/dispatches but rather things like whether their eating dinner properly and the like. Nanoha: Ah, I know that feeling/what you mean. Fate: Same here. Hayate: If I leave them alone, they start neglecting their health and eat any old thing. If Agito and Rein were with them, it would be better but today the two of them are here with me. Fate: I know what you mean. I don’t think Erio and Caro are the type to start neglecting their health but I feel uneasy when I start thinking about whether they have something that’s troubling them. Nanoha: As for Vivio… well… Hayate: She’s an athlete, so she’s more than able to take care of her own health. Fate: And Chris is with her all the time. Nanoha: But you know, I really feel uneasy if I don’t hear her voice at least once every day. Fate: Well, when Vivio was small, she really stuck close to her mama. Hayate: And now she’s a middle school student and (alt trans: National level) athlete competing at the national level. Compared to her days at Mobile Section 6, when she couldn’t get up again by herself when she fell, she’s grown immensely/tremendously since then. Nanoha: It’s thanks to you as well that she’s grown up so well/healthily. Agito: All right! It’s done! Rein: We’re bringing it over now! Sorry to keep you all waiting. Agito: Tonight’s dinner is served/done! N+F+H: Okay/Thanks! __________________ I do not like Kansai-ben, but I do like Hayate-chan! Also, Canadian here, not actually Japanese.

2012-05-29, 21:27	Link #327
Akiyoshi The Flame Crussader Join Date: Aug 2009	LOL, Hayate is worried about the Wolks eating junk food xD? suddenly imagining Signum with a bag of potato chips xDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD!!!!! Ok,i know most of this is fluff but i'm so desperate for Yagamike developement that i swallow every piece Tsuzuki throw at us, so thanks again for doing it Nagumo. you're really showing your love for the art, it's already 8 tracks we're almost there xD I guess the next one is when the Force Trio and the Wolkenritter exchange toughts, that one is interesting at least to me n_n __________________ May 29 2010-2019 ...9 years ago, the day after never would be the same ~The ASFB~

2012-05-29, 21:32	Link #328
Justin_Brett Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2010 Location: Canada, Sault Ste. Marie	You'd think they'd have gotten voice actors for the Hucks before this, so the story's villains could actually get fleshed out. Then again, even the heroes of it are barely here.

2012-05-29, 21:37	Link #329
Akiyoshi The Flame Crussader Join Date: Aug 2009	Fortunately this track is about the Yagami family, so the Huckebein prescence is entirely unecessary xD __________________ May 29 2010-2019 ...9 years ago, the day after never would be the same ~The ASFB~

2012-05-29, 21:41	Link #330
Justin_Brett Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2010 Location: Canada, Sault Ste. Marie	It's also fucking nothing.

2012-06-24, 01:12	Link #339
Nagumo Random Translator Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: New Brunswick	Urge to kill Nanoha writers... rising... 09. 魔導書の縁 09. The Bonds of the (Magic) Tome Spoiler for Track 9: Signum: With all four of us being here, it reminds me of the past. Shamal: Past? You mean before we met Hayate-chan or afterwards? Signum: Both, I think. Remembering how Eins liked to gaze at the starry sky. And how I always accompanied Meister Hayate to the garden because she wanted to look up at the stars in the sky when she was young. Zafira: And when she was finally able to ride my back, I would accompany her too. Shamal: And from fourth grade onward, she would go see the cherry blossoms… Where the previous Reinforce rests. Vita: She didn’t have much free time to watch the stars since the second generation (Rein) needed a lot attention after she was born. (bad translation) Well then, I’m full. Heading back now. Shamal: Eh? You can still stay, can’t you? Vita: I promised the Maintenance guys I’d see them. See ya latter. Signum: Hm, Vita giving us the cold shoulders makes me remember the past. Zafira: Though, this time she actually has a promise to keep. Shamal: And she’s not as cold as she used to be in the past; after meeting Hayate-chan and growing closer to others. Becoming a meddlesome older sister when Rein-chan was born. Signum: And after Agito came into the family, she became a big sis. Shamal: Yes, that’s right! (alt trans: that she did!) Signum: Recently… I’ve been thinking; be it during the ‘Book of Darkness’ Incident, our time in Mobile Section 6 and even now, there have been numerous hard times but since we were saved by Meister Hayate and protected by her. We have managed to face our lives without doubt. That to me is a blessed life. Shamal: Hm. Signum: If we had not met Meister Hayate, we would have continued our endless existence/journey/wanderings and perhaps had been destroyed together with the Book of Darkness. Zafira: It is as you say. Signum: But if Meister Hayate had never encountered the Book of Darkness and us, what sort of life would she be leading? Shamal: I wonder. If she had not been chosen by the Book of Darkness, her legs would never have suffered in the first place. Zafira: She would have lead normal girl’s life Signum: Yes… door opens Isis: Over here! Thoma: Are you sure it’s ok to be up here? Isis: It’s fine, I was cleaning up here during the afternoon. Lily: Um… Shamal: Oh? Signum: Thoma and the others. Thoma: Everyone! Isis: All of them! Sorry for bothering you. Signum: We don’t mind. Shamal: Are you all having your break too? Lily: Yes, we were thinking of eating some after dinner bread Zafira: Didn’t you all have bread for dinner already? Shamal: Hey, these kids are still growing. Signum: You’ve come at a good time. There something we want to talk to you about. Thoma: Um, sure? Shamal: We were just talking about Commander Yagami. Signum: We were fate bound to a magical tome, much like how you are bound to a magical tome now, is it not? Thoma: Yeah… Isis: Thoma ended up meeting Lily and followed by Silver Cross. Lily: Thoma and me just happened to met with Isis while travelling. Thoma: And from then onwards, we ended up travelling as a group. I guess you could call it ‘fate bound to a magical tome’. Silver Cross: Requesting correction/Permission to correct. I, the Silver Cross, am not a magical tome. I am an EC reactor, a terminal that regulates operational controls and armaments. Thoma: So detail oriented/nit picky… Lily: That might be so but let’s just call you a magical tome, shall we. Silver Cross: Request approved/acknowledged. From now onwards, ‘magical tome’ will be used as a general identifier. Signum: It’s an interesting book, as always. Thoma: It’s a troubles me to be with a book with so many objections. Lily: But to Thoma and me, she is very precious to us. Isis: You like me as well don’t you, Silver Cross? Silver Cross: The protector of the Driver as well as the Reactor Plug is confirmed/recognized. Genuine desire to protect. Zafira: I see, you are protecting them as well aren’t you. Isis: Yup Zaffy. Mind if I touch your tail? Zafira: Only for a little while. Thoma: We heard from Master/Instructor Rei-, I mean Commander’s Aide Rein, that there’s a movie depicting the story of Commander Yagami and your past. Signum: That’s right. Although, it’s not just about us but also about 1st Lieutenant Takamachi and Enforcer/Executive Officer Fate too. Shamal: The Book of Darkness and us, a profound event/incident that changed it to the Tome of the Night Sky. Lily: Um, Commander Yagami’s tome is ‘The Tome of the Night Sky’ while Commander Aide Rein’s tome is ‘The Tome of the Azure Sky’, is it not? Signum: That Tome of the Night Sky in the past was once called the Book of Darkness, it was a dangerous Lost Logia. Lily: Lost Logia? Thoma: Ah, you could say Lost Logia are like an ancient relic from another dimension. Isis: We use it to define dangerous item that our current technologies can’t control or replicate. Lily: I see. Signum: It’s much like Commander Yagami with the Lost Logia ‘the Book of Darkness’, Thoma, your chance encounter with the Eclipse and the “Book of the Silver Cross’ was not entirely of your own choosing. Thoma: Yes. Zafira: Have you ever given any thought on how different your life would be like had you not encountered the Eclipse? Thoma: I haven’t really thought of it. Lily: If I hadn’t been saved by Thoma, I would have died. It would have been a ‘bad end’ to my life. Isis: Whoa, L-Lily, don’t feel so down. Hey Zaffy, 1st Lieutenant Signum, please don’t ask such uncomfortable questions. Zafira: My apologies. Signum: But it’s also the same for us. If we had not been saved, the five of us would have been destroyed and disappeared/erased somewhere. Thoma: The five of you? Shamal: Me, Signum, Vita-chan, Zafira and finally Reinforce. Lily: I see! Including Meister/Instructor Rein as a family right? Shamal: Oh, it’s not Rein-chan but her predecessor, Reinforce Eins. Signum: The five of us met with Commander Yagami and were redeemed by her but Reinforce sacrificed herself and passed on in order to save us and Commander Yagami who was 9 years old at the time. Shamal: Ah, sorry about that! It was something that happened long ago. We were sad that she passed on but we accept her wishes and move on by living each day with purpose. That is what we all decided upon. Thoma: Yeah… Signum: That is all we wanted to say. As one follows a path that destiny has selected, do you ever wonder about a different life?… That is all that we wished to ask. Thoma: Um, well, to be honest, for me, I’ve already had plenty of experiences that differs from the life I lead now. Even if I was treated kindly by Su-chan and found happiness; I’m sure I would have continued life with a part of me still depressed/holding the seeds of unhappiness. I don’t think I am particularly unfortunate right now. And it still seems to me that I am a totally different person and have pride when I am leading my life as an Eclipse Driver and striving to become stronger. When I think about it that way, I have no interest in living in any other way. (bad translation) Zaifra: I see. Isis: Well, if it weren’t for me and Lily rescuing you, you probably would have died while activating the Eclipse Zero. That would have been a real ‘bad end’. Thoma: I told you already, I’m really grateful and thankful to you about it. __________________ I do not like Kansai-ben, but I do like Hayate-chan! Also, Canadian here, not actually Japanese.

2012-06-24, 01:20	Link #340
bhl88 Otaku Apprentice Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: The Unseen Horizon	Now waiting for the Materials and the Florian sisters to come out with a drama CD for the movie. __________________ OS-tan Collections (temporary): https://discord.gg/Hv2rBs3