2009-10-05, 04:05 | Link #16482 | |
Bored out of his mind...
Join Date: Mar 2009
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So, I'm trying to get my Negima/Nanoha crossover down in bytes, and I missed the discussion two or so pages ago. Crud. Anyway, the plot synopsis may be as follows:
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I'm not good at prose at all, and I may need some help ironing out the details and twists, but that's the general idea. Meaning, I have the general plot to follow (mostly Negima's plot as told from one of the Ace's views) but I have problems with stuff like how and when do they decide to go there, and what fun things do they do once there. EDIT: Quote:
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2009-10-05, 04:20 | Link #16483 | |
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In the meantime... Spoiler for GDI Dimsight View::
You would not believe that this is inside of a high school... Watch out. I am planning for their movement into the Nanoverse :3 *FLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEES* *GETS BURIED UNDER TONS OF SHEET MUSIC* ????: HOW ABOUT ME? Creator-kun: Yes we are still waiting on your peers... *hauls 7 suitcases*
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2009-10-05, 04:25 | Link #16484 | |
Adeptus Animus
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Join Date: Jan 2007
Age: 36
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Though I think its a good idea not to cross more than one series. Using ellements of another series is fine, but when we start dragging settings and characters of more than two series in a crossover, things usually start to break down in my experience. Well, we haven't seen earth in the Nanohaverse in over a decade, set the story post-StrikerS and you're set to go. Also, what's that page from? |
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2009-10-05, 07:36 | Link #16485 | |
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Join Date: May 2009
Location: New York
Age: 33
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No idea how the RF6 Aces disappeared while the TSAB mooks were able to engage. Possibly something in their path but not in the path the TSAB mooks took? Normally I would choose the Raptor, but this time it may lack the firepower. Hopefully since there are no reports of enemy fighters the Phoenix will be able to go in unopposed. I choose the Phoenix. The first loadout doesn't make sense now due to the lack of enemy fighter presence. The second seems fine, although it lacks versatility. The third feels like the best choice, since I have a gut feeling that there are more than just drones >.>, so I would choose Assault Mix II. Is returning to base for rearming allowed? |
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2009-10-05, 07:44 | Link #16486 | |
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Twinkle Saber Nova
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2009-10-05, 08:02 | Link #16487 |
~ Your Smile ~
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Location: 346Pro
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Hehe. It's all free game, X. Especially with the dearth of details from Earth. It's workable I think.
As for connecting it to Negima World at the same time... As said before, actually connecting several worlds at once kinda spoils the broths. I can see how it might work, but I can also see how it can be a bad idea. If Negima magical ministorum is willing to go to such extents to destroy a child of the Queen of Calamity, they would nuke the whole of Japan flat just to make sure none of those related to Touma, himself and his growing harem, ever live to procreate... And that's not going to be very nice... And on top of that it completely turns into a Negima Touma crossover with Nanoha World cast thrown in! This is a perfect time to scream ONOREEE DIKEIDOOO. =P
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2009-10-05, 18:37 | Link #16488 | |
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Age: 41
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The name of the game here is 'bombs on target, come home alive,' so putzing around dogfighting drones is a non starter. Phoenix with Anti-capital loadout please. |
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2009-10-05, 19:23 | Link #16490 | |
Beta by Accident
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Join Date: Oct 2008
Location: Maine
Age: 52
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What I find interesting (and no doubt part of why you're hair-pulling) is that this isn't even spun off the end of the story, just the Nanoha's-Linker-Core-Depletion and the Mystery-What's-Wrong-With-Elise subplots. It doesn't even touch on the main villain, Fiasse, and Tiore's diary! Or on any of the romantic subplots! Good story, though. I like Tea's wondering if she'd ever be able to sit properly, and Subaru in all her innocence jamming her rollerblade hard into her mouth. This part was the most poignant: “… You know, you really need to wake up soon.” Nanoha leaned over, gently brushing loose strands of blonde hair back out of the sleeping woman’s face. “You’re getting really pale. I think you lost some weight. Fiasse-chan will scold me for not keeping a better eye on you when she comes to visit, you know?” Her voice wavered, cracked dangerously. “So it would be great if you’d wake up. It’s been four years. You’ve missed a lot.” That and for some reason, the beeps. The beeps really got to me. Probably because they never stopped, and you ended on one. |
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2009-10-05, 20:50 | Link #16491 | |
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Join Date: Mar 2009
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Age: 33
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At least it didn't end on the lack of a beep |
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2009-10-05, 21:12 | Link #16496 | |
Explodes when thrown
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Age: 37
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...which might mean the same thing, just delayed...
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