2010-03-20, 22:57 | Link #15883 |
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Nobodyman, fail.
Guren and Lancelot are actually on the same side. Yes, really. As in The Black Knights, aka Kuro no Kishidan. You know... Lancelot, Lloyd's toy.. Guren, Rakshata's favorite 'child'.... You know.. Guren... Red Knightmare... Lancelot, the silver and gold one... Kallen... Suzaku.... Puff the magic dragon~~ x3 It's hard to explain... Imagine SD suzaku riding an equally SD dragon with a wizard hat and clogs. xD |
2010-03-20, 23:01 | Link #15884 | |
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It doesn't help I didn't really grow up with the "Puff the Magic Dragon" song. |
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2010-03-21, 00:35 | Link #15885 | |
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2010-03-22, 20:07 | Link #15892 |
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They don't jiggle though. I know, i'm a horrible person, but I have to state the obvious.
@Bonzo: Sadist. Poor Kallen... I just feel like putting Shirley in a body bag and giving Kallen a great big hug -- I'll probably be knifed, but it'd so totally be worth it :P Transform! D: Shirley is now a necromorph! FTW! |
2010-03-22, 20:27 | Link #15893 | |
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2010-03-22, 20:32 | Link #15894 | |
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2010-03-22, 20:43 | Link #15895 |
I change anime endings.
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Yes, Shirley will mute in the Guren, try to imagine a most terrifing way to menace her with the same weapon she used to kill all those people.
About the last panel, I tried to make a "shadow" effect, shirley become so big to cover Kallen with her shadow. At last is just a prototype, I don't know if keep it or retry. |
2010-03-22, 20:58 | Link #15896 |
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I'd go for a retry to see what's good and what's bad. If I like the first/second one, then I ditch the other. Suggestion though... I just would prefer if you toned down the Shirley!evil thing...
Kallen did kill all those people, but that was war. Kallen is strong enough to know what she is doing was for Japan... She probably wanted to believe what that, as well. The sadistic meter ie currently hindering the story meter. Fix plz? Bonzo-sama? |
2010-03-22, 21:04 | Link #15897 | |
Spontaneous Retirement.
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But other way around, it would make sense for Shirley to want Kallen to confront all of that, so.
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2010-03-22, 23:00 | Link #15899 |
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Damn bonzo! I was wondering how you were gonna pull of the whole transformation scene, but damn that is some freaky shit. I like Kallen's expression in the third panel though.
I'll remember you said that. *gently strokes knife* |
2010-03-23, 00:00 | Link #15900 | |
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Kallen: That-that arm--how are you--? Shirley(?): Yes, your favourite slayer's tool. Every moment in here is one where those YOU and HE killed scream for vengeance. You could have made it easy for them. Cook their brains by degrees for a painless, peaceful death. But no, you preferred to charbroil their organs like you were roasting some grand sacrificial feast for your GOD, Zero! Everyone you killed wasn't simply a faceless enemy--they were people with dreams, loves, and families. To die is to leave all of that behind. I should know. I see you in MY place every day behind HIS eyes. Do you know how it feels to die with your love unfulfilled, Kallen? DO YOU KNOW HOW IT FEELS?!" It's fun to play with writing at times. |
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