Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha Character Creation and Discussion

[mamott99]

Originally Posted by Evil Rick

Rick, mate, don't you think that image is a LITTLE untasteful to be in this thread? I do.

[Nightengale]

Originally Posted by toran

Thanks and yes, I'm planning on her having a division set up in StrikerS.
I still need to get ideas for teammates though.

I'm also thinking of adding another mage that was best friends with her as a form of friendly support through the tough time in her life between the hospital and the creation of the new mage division.

I am still working out the details.

Not bad. Welcome.

Mind linking to your earlier OC? I kinda lost it in the fields of backlog.

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

TK!!!!!!!

About time you came back! You've been missed by the community. Good to see you alive and kickin!(with big guns...>_<) I've finally de-HAXXED Aurion properly for now. The links are at my sig.:3

Originally Posted by ghazghkull

Well, I've posted Vivio's spells, now for the rest of her :3

Spoiler for Takamachi Vivio ver. Ghaz:

d upon the caster.

I don't see much problems... other than the fact that RF6 doesn't exist anymore.

Originally Posted by Reiji Tabibito

AND NOW...

FOR YOUR ENTERTAINMENT...

TABIBITO PICTURES PRESENTS...

Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Nanoha
LegendS

Not bad... but I'll comment later. Not much can do now with barrage of work. @_@

Originally Posted by Kha

If so, I propose...

*runs at ludicrious speed*

Originally Posted by Tk3997

Wee New chars!

Pretty decent offense/defense battery. I kinda like the ~feel aspect of their personalities, since they remind me of some girls I know it rl.

And this reminds me of a Nanoha-lite without her tanking skills and a Yuuno-lite without his overly-tanking skills.

Originally Posted by ghazghkull

Well here's chapter 2. It is subject to change, depending on how I feel about the premise of this and the previous chapter.

Spoiler for MGLN Riot Force 6:

[ack. “Guess I’ll learn the hard way.”

Nice piece.

[Kha]

*still waiting for Aaron's return*

Originally Posted by ghazghkull

Well here's chapter 2. It is subject to change, depending on how I feel about the premise of this and the previous chapter.

Spoiler for MGLN Riot Force 6:

Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Nanona Riot Force 6
Chapter II Surprise Spar

He couldn’t believe it. He just couldn’t believe it. Standing right there on the other side of the bridge were the three greatest aces known in history! And what was more, when he and Farukon were close enough, he could clearly see the rank of Major was adorned on their lapels, as indicated by the golden shield. He had a feeling that he was going to have a hellish morning.

“Yo,” Farukon happily greeted the three.

“Yo,” Keroko greeted back.

“Good morning, Farukon,” Nanoha replied.

“Good morning,” said Fate.

Coming to a stop before all three, Farukon saluted them for himself and Hayato immediately, with Keroko responding for the three of them. Hayato was pretty much speechless. If anything, he probably was going to end up having a gruelling training session; possibly a hidden aspect of his punishment. He was in for hell; that much he knew.

“Well I brought him, so can we get started?” Farukon stated, anticipation laced heavily in his voice.

“Calm down, calm down,” Keroko jovially stated, as she approached Hayato, who could still just dumbly stare at them. Keroko took a moment to simply look over the boy.

“Anyways,” Farukon coughed out. “PFC, I understand you have a device of your own?”

“Oh, uh…yes sir,” Hayato quickly replied back. A rather uncomfortable pause followed his answer. The four of them stared at him for some time, as if waiting for something. What for, Hayato was unsure of.

“Uh…PFC, let’s see it,” said Farukon, giving Hayato a curious look as to why he was just standing there, looking quite dumb, for a lack of a better word.

“Oh, sorry,” Hayato stuttered, sheepishly pulling out the pistol-shaped device from the holster on his back and presented it. Hayato watched as Keroko picked up his device, and gave it a thorough look-over, turning it over and over in her hand, as she examined the device from all angles, even to the point she opened the chamber, unloaded and loaded the clip that was in the handgrip, and even armed the device before releasing the hammer again.

“A range fighter?” Farukon asked, raising his eyebrow in surprise. “I thought we were supposed to be testing a close combat kid.”

“He is a close combat fighter,” Nanoha stated. Waving her hand, a screen appeared, and began typing on it while Keroko returned Hayato his device.

“So PFC what exactly can you do with that?” Farukon asked, curious as to what Hayato could do with just one pistol.

“Keroko-chan, do you want to take this one?” Nanoha offered, as the island suddenly became a forest. Somewhat caught off guard, Hayato stared at his surroundings in momentary wonder, before being pulled from his reverie by Keroko.

“Catch,” Keroko said as she tossed a magazine clip towards Hayato.

Catching the clip, he looked at it momentarily before realizing that it was the same type of clip that he used for his device. Looking towards Keroko, he gave her a curious look.

“Those are low powered stun rounds,” Keroko explained as she slid into a basic battle stance. “Your mission is to try and hit me once with those rounds. Give me everything you got.”

“Ma’am?!” Hayato sputtered, having not expected such an order.

“Do it, PFC,” Keroko firmly stated.

Realizing that it was an order and not wanting another reprimand, Hayato quickly subbed out the clip in his device for the new one, formed a magical ball in his hand before tossing it up into the air and charged forward. Aligning his gun mid-charge, he fired a shot, only to miss as Keroko dodged underneath the shot and moved in for a tornado kick.

Blocking the attack, he backed off and fired another three shots before narrowly ducking underneath a head shot. In an attempt to regain his bearings, he narrowly dodged ducked underneath another blow to his head. Reacting instinctively, he brought his gun up to Keroko’s face only to have the attack parried as he pulled the trigger. Parrying off one punch to his head, he brought his gun to bear again only to have his arm grabbed twisted out of the way.

Reacting on what ever training he had from the Academy and instincts, he tried to move with the twisting motion, which resulted in him landing on his stomach. Immediately rolling to the side, he quickly got back up, only to suddenly jump back in order to dodge another attack.

Moving in, he reared his arm back for a haymaker only to be forced to block a kick to his midsection, leaving him open to a punch to his face. Falling back, he held his face in pain, while trying to keep his eye on Keroko. Struggling to get on his feet, Hayato blindly raised his gun and fired three shots before moving again, hoping that he was avoiding her.

From the sideline, Farukon watched as the two fought. He had to admit, the boy did have an interesting method of close combat. Although his form was quite sloppy, quite possibly due to the fact he didn’t train on the style as often as he should have, there was potential in the style if it could be refined. However, it seemed that he had no real training against users who preferred hand-to-hand combat. From what he could observe, his movements were more so combating against someone who was also using a pistol, not their bare hands.

Hayato felt himself sweating. He already knew that the Major was only using a fraction of her powers, but that wasn’t the issue that bothered him. He could do nothing against her. She wasn’t even fighting with a pistol, but already she was breaking through his offences, all his attempts to line up for a point-blank shot; every alignment parried; every punch blocked or deflected; every strategy defeated; every thing he and his siblings had developed for naught. Nothing was working. Even the spell he had cast before entering combat failed to work properly despite the fact he gave it enough power to operate by itself so that he could focus more on the fight.

He wasn’t proficient in hand-to-hand. He knew that. He had trained in anti-group style of combat, where he would enter enemy formations and take them out from the inside out, and at most he could deal with those who had basic training in close combat. But against a veteran of Keroko’s status and skill, he stood no chance.

He could only helplessly continue to fight on, desperately trying to line up a shot and fire. Each bullet had to count. Each shot had to make its mark.

4 cartridges left.

He was nearly out of cartridges. He was getting exhausted. Despite his movements and strength being enhanced by whatever little magic left over from each shot, it didn’t maintain his stamina.

3 cartridges left.

He was getting tired. There was no way around it. He was running empty on both his stamina and his ammo. But not a single hit ever counted.

2 cartridges left.

He had to make one hit. That was his goal. He just had to make one of his shots count.

1 cartridge left.

“STOP!” someone suddenly called up.

Freezing on the spot, both combatants stared off one another, their breaths heavy from the exertion of the exercise. Hayato could only stare in surprise and shock. Keroko’s left shoulder was smoking from impact. He had done it. It had been deflected, but he had done it. He had made contact with Keroko’s shoulder. He had landed a hit.

“Oh wow,” Hayato breathed out, falling flat on his back, exhausted from the fight. Glancing towards his device, he noticed that it was smoking, and was heavily battered as well. He could only smile wryly, due to the fact he had never had to use his weapon at the level he had to just now. Sitting back up cross legged, he opened up the chamber of his weapon to realize that he had miscounted. That last shot was his last one. On the final shot, he had done it. He had barely made the shot, on his last cartridge.

“Congratulations, PFC,” said Keroko, patting him lightly on the shoulder. “You managed to land a shot on me.” Hayato simply nodded before falling back a few steps and flopped onto the ground, feeling exhausted and drained from the battle. It was different. He never had to put that much effort into his attacks before, but then again, he never had to use what he and his siblings had created to the extent he had just used it.

Glancing over at his device, he noticed that it was smoking. Grinning wryly, he sat up and inspected it, going over the whole length of the device as he examined it from end to end. Slowly pulling back the slider, he eventually managed to dismantle his device before discovering his device had taken a hell of a beating. The bolt itself was melting, the slide was hot, and the entire firing mechanism was falling apart. Even the spring that operated the slider itself was starting to warp.

“Great, just great,” Hayato mumbled, slowly removing the clip from the handgrip. “I over did it.” Although the device itself was repairable, he had a very bad suspicion that something had jammed, and that one of his shots forced out the jam, which probably damaged the unit. At least from what he could tell, especially with the scorch marks and the melted components.

“It seems that you had a jam,” Nanoha commented, kneeling next to Hayato, inspecting the weapon from her vantage point.

“Probably,” Hayato replied back, as he started to reassemble his weapon. “I’ll just need parts to repair it is all.”

“I’ll see what I can do to get you the parts you need,” said Nanoha, as she watched Hayato lock everything in place, and insert a fresh clip.

“Thanks,” Hayato replied back. There wasn’t much he could do anyways, since it was likely he was going to be dismissed and sent back to his room.

Standing back up before the 4 officers before him, he snapped to attention. “Is there anything else I am required to do?”

“No, not at this point, PFC,” Keroko replied back.

“Yes ma’am.” Saluting the four of them, Hayato quickly dismissed himself, and headed back to the barracks for a nice shower, and then back to his room.

Once out of earshot, Farukon immediately expressed his concern. “What was the point of that spar?”

“We wanted to assess what the kid could do,” Keroko replied back, leaning back as she stretched. “He’s not bad, he just needs someone to teach him how to properly fight with that thing.”

“We had heard of his sister using the exact same skill Hayato uses,” Fate continued, picking up from where Keroko left off. “She was also reported to be a close-combat fighter, however, videos and reports can only tell us so much. That was part of the reason why we had him spar Keroko. On top of that, we are assessing all the new recruits, because Hayate is thinking about forming a third unit.”

“A third unit?” Farukon echoed back. “What do you mean?”

“Due to how we are operating now, Hayate assigned us to look through prospect mages and examine them, to test who would be most suitable for the newest unit she wishes to form,” Fate replied. “We already have teams Stars and Lightning, but that will not be enough. Basically, we’re testing prospect officers, NCOs, Enlisted, and senior Academy Cadets, in hopes of forming 3 additional squads.”

“So that would be why I’ve been here for Cadets Takamachi’s and Virage’s spars as well?” Farukon asked. Much to his chagrin, the three Majors all simply shared a knowing glance towards one another, each offering a rather disarming smile.

“Great,” Farukon sarcastically replied back. “Guess I’ll learn the hard way.”

Hayato meets his match. Impressive show of skill on Keroko's part (forgot she's one of the most melee of the Aces despite being a beamspammer ), and this time I got to see gun-kata in verse. There are some variations between your's and USB's, but I see how this would work. :3

Hayato should work at his skill. Someday he might even go beyond a pistol and handle a bigger weapon as detailed in Codex Daemonjaegers:

Spoiler for True Grit:

TRUE GRIT - Cleric-Knights have the "True Grit" ability when armed with a Sturm Bolt Device, enabling them to use the heavy device in close combat like lesser creatures would use pistols. This means that they gain the bonus attack dice for being armed with an additional close-combat device, providing they have not charged in the same assault phase. This rule only applies to Cleric-Knights in Knight Armor.

:3

Originally Posted by Evil Rick

...!

Fate-chan! Heads up!!!

Reminded me of something from Silent Hill here.

[toran]

Originally Posted by ghazghkull

Well here's chapter 2. It is subject to change, depending on how I feel about the premise of this and the previous chapter.

Spoiler for MGLN Riot Force 6:

*snip

... I'm not sure what to say really. I'll need to take a quick rummage to take a gander at the OC when I get the chance.

Originally Posted by Nightengale

Not bad. Welcome.

Mind linking to your earlier OC? I kinda lost it in the fields of backlog.

Thanks. Here's the links and a brief overview.

Charese Silverman
Commander of Special Circumstances
http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost...ostcount=22087

Anne Mira and Mysti Alvera
http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost...ostcount=22113

Rhelik
Captain of SC Field Forces
I kinda lost his somewhere. I'll have to write it up later.

Essentially, SC is a support mage division of the TSAB Dimensional Navy. Depending on the request specifications, they deploy barriers to enclose areas of high magical activity such has battles or contain areas of Lost Logia Contamination. They essentially specialize in barriers and seals.

One of the abilities they have is Dark Enclosure who's magical power load and control requires three mages. Two to cast and maintain the barrier while a third makes subtle adjustments during it's duration.
The Dark Enclosure is a Wide Area Barrier who's purpose is to shift a large area slightly out of phase, essentially creating a pocket dimension. It works well at capturing and containing enemies or preventing the spread of a Lost Logia reaction.

(Picture a Fūzetsu and you'll essentially get what the Dark Enclosure looks like)

[Wild Goose]

....Special Circumstances....

Is that a John Ringo reference? ^_^

[toran]

I have no idea what you are talking about. <.< >.>

[Fuyu no Sora]

Uh-huh.....

I've been absent for...what? *counts* 5 days maybe? And what do I get when I come back?

A MERE 6 PAGES OF BACKLOG!!!???!!!???!!!??!??!!!??!!!

What's going on here? The thread's completrely dying...

Anyway...

@Kha: Oh you...*facepalm* Why am I not suprised at you bringing F/SN here again? *double facepalm* Ah well. However, two can play the same game Just you wait

@TK: Welcome back to the thread :3 Glad to have our main H4XXBuster alive and kickin'

@USB-kun: Welcome back to you too And with new characters no less I'll review them later.....once I get back into my life that is

@Thread: Please try to come back here people....The thread's life's in danger...normaly I would've been greeted by at least 15 pages of backlog.....

[XenahortCharybdis]

Originally Posted by Fuyu no Sora

Uh-huh.....

I've been absent for...what? *counts* 5 days maybe? And what do I get when I come back?

A MERE 6 PAGES OF BACKLOG!!!???!!!???!!!??!??!!!??!!!

What's going on here? The thread's completrely dying...

Amen.

I share similar sentiments...although I disagree on the "dying" part. Suffice it to say that "everyone's busy". It'll pass...I hope

Originally Posted by Fuyu no Sora

@Kha: Oh you...*facepalm* Why am I not suprised at you bringing F/SN here again? *double facepalm* Ah well. However, two can play the same game Just you wait

He's been like that since the start (I discovered this on closer inspection of the earlier pages of this thread... )

Originally Posted by Fuyu no Sora

@TK: Welcome back to the thread :3 Glad to have our main H4XXBuster alive and kickin'

*Starts revving up Red Shift to dodge/parry H4xxbuster Bullets*

Originally Posted by Fuyu no Sora

@Thread: Please try to come back here people....The thread's life's in danger...normaly I would've been greeted by at least 15 pages of backlog.....

Back...school life has settled for me. Somewhat.



------------------------------------------
- Currently working out details for more OCs...
- And perchance a written work or two...

And so on, once I get to sit down and actually do something.

Like now.

[Evangelion Xgouki]

Originally Posted by Kha

Thanks for opening the beach head, it's time for Outer Cadia's...

The Normandy of Suzumiya Haruki!

*Chimeras, para-gliders and strike cruisers blast off for GB Thread*

[battlecry]FOR THE KHRACK AND KEROKANON[/battlecry]

Originally Posted by USB500

USB500: Crap! After a week of absence of holiday trip (lol Sarawak) this is what I get in return?

???????:

Spoiler:

WELCOME BACK USB!!!!

Originally Posted by USB500

Double-posting for new OC (and where's everyone? )

Spoiler for introduction:

*snip*

----------------------------

ALITA

Spoiler for overview:

*snip*

Spoiler for personal information:

*snip*

--------------------------

POSEIDON

Spoiler for overview:

*snip*

Spoiler for personal information:

*snip*

First day back and 2 new OCs already?
Looking forward to MORE

Originally Posted by Tk3997

... -_-

Spoiler for TK Casts "Summon Firesupport Assets":

One should be careful not to confuse temporary absences with retirement; I ain't dead quite yet bucko.

Tk returns!!

Welcome back to teh crack

Originally Posted by ghazghkull

THIS IS WIN!!! THIS IS ABSOLUTE UTTER WIN!!!! XD

Man, that's an old post...

Originally Posted by ghazghkull

Well, I've posted Vivio's spells, now for the rest of her :3

Spoiler for Takamachi Vivio ver. Ghaz:

*snip*

Vivio!!

Shamsel: Hmmm...looks like Ochibi-chan grew up

Points if you get this very obscure reference

Originally Posted by Keroko

Kyonko facepalm is moe.

Deshou?

Originally Posted by Keroko

Wa-Wa-Wa-Washuu-sama!?

The greatest genius of the universe has arived!

And the walking disaster trailing just behind her.

*prays for those who get 'volunteered' for her experiments...

Originally Posted by Reiji Tabibito

I!


HAVE!!


RETURNED!!!

No flying entrance this time, huh?

Originally Posted by Reiji Tabibito

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!

MUST STOP THE DANSEN!!!

The Dansen cannot be stopped...

Originally Posted by Reiji Tabibito

FOR YOUR ENTERTAINMENT...

TABIBITO PICTURES PRESENTS...

Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Nanoha
LegendS

Ah, so LegendS has made its official appearance, huh?

Good writing on the action scenes . Can't wait to see what happens next

Originally Posted by Kha

If so, I propose...



This is Rebuilt of Vivio when grown up, and with this get up and Caliburn at hand, Vivio really resembles her blood mother:

Spoiler for :3:

:3

*runs at ludicrious speed*

Wha...?

KHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!

Originally Posted by Kha

Let's see... Blond hair... Green eyes (Vivio's Heterochroma is like Rei's Albinoism)... Great king loved by everyone... canon Noble Phantasm "Barrier of the Sankt Kaiser"... Need I say more? :3

And most importantly, Saber has returned as Kha's Servant, and thus is able to meet her daughter, but not admit it since no one except Kha and a few others know that Saber's really the Sankt Kaiser Vivio. :3 :3

We have Nighty to thank for this crack. :3 :3 :3

And hence why in my future crack, Vivio wields Legendary Device Caliburn, brought back from the bottom of a lake no less. In time, I believe the Excalibur will call...

...Nighty's fault, huh?

NIGHTYTYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!

Originally Posted by ghazghkull

Well I don't know if you saw my edit, but you just gave me a really neat idea for my story :3

*dives for cover*

Originally Posted by Tk3997

Wee New chars!

Spoiler for Daisy Thorn:

*snip*

Spoiler for Rose:

*snip*

A Offense/Defense combination, huh? Can't wait to see how they work together in combat

Originally Posted by Sheba

Thread needs more average joes.

Perhaps...

Originally Posted by ghazghkull

Well here's chapter 2. It is subject to change, depending on how I feel about the premise of this and the previous chapter.

Spoiler for MGLN Riot Force 6:

*snip*

Hmmm...nice chapter there . Everyone seems pretty much in character from what I could tell. Initiation by fire is always entertaining (as long as you're the one not being initiated ).

Speaking of which, haven't heard much from you Kha about what you wanted NERV doing during ReBuild for the StrikerS timeline or what you wanted them to end up doing after (plus it seems NERV is going to be a part of the Alpha timeline, too). Need to figure out how all these are going to connect

[krisslanza]

Originally Posted by Kha

If so, I propose...



This is Rebuilt of Vivio when grown up, and with this get up and Caliburn at hand, Vivio really resembles her blood mother:

Spoiler for :3:

:3

*runs at ludicrious speed*

I just have to quote from pages ago
But I totally used that picture as my base for Vivio myself Because it just looked that cool and I lack the creativity to make stuff my self.

[LimitedEternal]

Originally Posted by Kyral

Elrics family name is Thorn.
And suddenly there is a younger girl with the same name.


Yeah... The joke was not the best... my bad...

Ah, sou, sou. Now that you point that out...

Originally Posted by FlameSparkZ

I guess it's safe to assume that you don't like the caramelldansen

It cannot be gotten rid of...the dansen is everywhere.

Still nice drawings, though.

Originally Posted by Reiji Tabibito

"Long"? That's all you have to say...?



I feel so unloved...

Well, we can't all give you walls of text.

You...reviewed my work...and not just a one word comment?

SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!




THANK YOU!!!

That's a scary "squee." But a cute pic.

Originally Posted by Kha

*watches FlameZ get glomped*

I just got this mental image of the "keikaku doori..." scene, with Kha instead of Light.

Originally Posted by ghazghkull

Well here's chapter 2. It is subject to change, depending on how I feel about the premise of this and the previous chapter.

Spoiler for MGLN Riot Force 6:

*snip*

Ah, yes. Nicely done. I always like a good battle scene.

Originally Posted by toran

I have no idea what you are talking about. <.< >.>

*hands toran a medal*

'Grats, man, you've learned the motto of Cadia!

Originally Posted by Fuyu no Sora

Uh-huh.....

I've been absent for...what? *counts* 5 days maybe? And what do I get when I come back?

A MERE 6 PAGES OF BACKLOG!!!???!!!???!!!??!??!!!??!!!

What's going on here? The thread's completrely dying...

*waves hi*

Yup, it's kinda slowing down here. We're not dead by a long shot, though.

Originally Posted by Evangelion Xgouki

KHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!
NIGHTYTYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!

Got some crack problems?

[krisslanza]

*Sneaks in*
This reminds me. Can someone explain to me how Vivio's Saint King Armor skill works exactly?

I'm having a hard time thinking on how it works. *Pokes Vivio's spell list*

[ghazghkull]

Originally Posted by Nightengale

I don't see much problems... other than the fact that RF6 doesn't exist anymore.

In my story RF6 does exist. All the character profiles I've created so far are all related to my story MGLN RF6, in which the unit was reinstated as a full-time Lost Logia management squad :3

Nice piece.

Why thank you my good man :3

Originally Posted by Kha

Hayato meets his match. Impressive show of skill on Keroko's part (forgot she's one of the most melee of the Aces despite being a beamspammer ), and this time I got to see gun-kata in verse. There are some variations between your's and USB's, but I see how this would work. :3

Hayato should work at his skill. Someday he might even go beyond a pistol and handle a bigger weapon as detailed in Codex Daemonjaegers:

Spoiler for True Grit:

TRUE GRIT - Cleric-Knights have the "True Grit" ability when armed with a Sturm Bolt Device, enabling them to use the heavy device in close combat like lesser creatures would use pistols. This means that they gain the bonus attack dice for being armed with an additional close-combat device, providing they have not charged in the same assault phase. This rule only applies to Cleric-Knights in Knight Armor.

:3

Why thank you my good sir on the comment :3

In terms of whether or not I'll have him move up from dual pistols, I have no idea at the moment :3

And yes, Keroko-chan is a skilled close-combat fighter, what with the fact that Keroko designed her that way :3 I'm just following what has been established so far.

Originally Posted by toran

... I'm not sure what to say really. I'll need to take a quick rummage to take a gander at the OC when I get the chance.

Well if you ever need to look my OC profiles for Hayato, or Farukon, their profiles are linked at the bottom of my signature :3

Originally Posted by Evangelion Xgouki

Vivio!!

Shamsel: Hmmm...looks like Ochibi-chan grew up

Points if you get this very obscure reference

And unfortunately, I get no points :3 Oh well

Glad you liked my Vivio profile though :3

Hmmm...nice chapter there . Everyone seems pretty much in character from what I could tell. Initiation by fire is always entertaining (as long as you're the one not being initiated ).

I am glad you enjoyed my little piece. Hopefully chapter 3 will be just as enjoyable. :3

Originally Posted by LimitedEternal

Ah, yes. Nicely done. I always like a good battle scene.

I've been usually decent with battle scenes, so I'm glad you enjoyed it :3

@Keroko: How did I do presenting her? Decent? Off-key?

[Kagerou]

@Thread:
The reason that there's been no Alpha recently, is because I seem to have hit a snag with how effective the Tempest is (that's Hayate's ship in case you forgot :3 ). After a lengthly discussion with Shou, ghaz, LE, and Goose last night, I've decided to rework the entire scene. That's about three pages of writing for those of you counting XD.

[ghazghkull]

Originally Posted by Kagerou

@Thread:
The reason that there's been no Alpha recently, is because I seem to have hit a snag with how effective the Tempest is (that's Hayate's ship in case you forgot :3 ). After a lengthly discussion with Shou, ghaz, LE, and Goose last night, I've decided to rework the entire scene. That's about three pages of writing for those of you counting XD.

Well before you write out the actually scene, do it this way:

Give everyone the technical specifications of the White Tempest first, so that it can be haxx-busted if necessary.

Afterwards, tell the scenario, and what you have planned, and see if it matches with not only what the characters are capable, but along with what has been established as the White Tempest's capabilities.

It's better to give the specs of the ship first, so that we have a base-line to work with, since everyone here already knows how powerful Hayate and the Wolkinritters are :3

[Keroko]

*Drags himself away from playing the -now translated- Unlimited Blade Works route*

Daaaaaamn this game is awesome! Fate route ain't got nothing on UBW. More Archer! More!

Fate crack is a bit high at the moment. When browsing the stat screens I already noticed a few skills that fit just right with Keroko and Tesla. Especially Archers Mind's Eye fits Tesla like a glove, and Sabers Instinct describes Keroko precisely.

Maybe I could cobble together some status screens.... shouldn't be hard.

Originally Posted by tshouryuu

OH!! So that's why!! I always wondered why you never inserted Lieutenant Kettch... pity...
As for 'clones', 8 might be coming soon.

Kettch was crack anyway. Ewok mage? Imagine how he'd react to Subaru. Being a Cyborg, he'd treat her like a god.

Originally Posted by Kha

I've gone and done the heinous by deleting prioritizing Nanoha StrikerS DVD over ARIA on my com (READ: Deleted. I better look out for murderous Dekkai-fans now...) and rewatched episode 1 and 2, which covers Chapters 1 and 2 of Rebuilt of StrikerS, so now I've got stuff to work on.

I'll raise you on the heinous bit, I'm streaming my ARIA's. Having read the manga, I already know what to expect, and slice of life can only take up so much hard drive space.

Originally Posted by Kha

*reels from all the nudges*

Yes definitely! :3

I really should get back to Fall of an Empire.

Originally Posted by LimitedEternal

I miss the reference here...

Revan is the most awesome Sith Lord ever to have walked this universe. He has everything. Cool mask, awesome skills, and most importantly he even gets his own 'I am your Father' moment, which is absolutely mind boggling because:

Spoiler for HUGE spoiler for Knights of the old Republic:

You are him.

Originally Posted by LimitedEternal

Ah. *takes notes on snarkiness*

Oh, and she's a lightweight. I don't know about Kyonko, but Tesla gets plastered after even a single glass of alcohol.

Originally Posted by LimitedEternal

Best quote in Dark Crusade.

Originally Posted by LimitedEternal

Another reference I'm afraid I miss...

Go watch the Tenchi Muyo OVA's, you'll get what I mean. Suffice to say, Washuu rocks.

Originally Posted by Reiji Tabibito

"Long"? That's all you have to say...?



I feel so unloved...

Yeah, I was tired, I read it, and commented on it to show that it was being read.

Of course, if you want me to keep quiet....

Originally Posted by Kha

Hayato meets his match. Impressive show of skill on Keroko's part (forgot she's one of the most melee of the Aces despite being a beamspammer ), and this time I got to see gun-kata in verse. There are some variations between your's and USB's, but I see how this would work. :3

Keroko is mid-close ranged, prefering arial combat, but at mid range you can't avoid getting in close combat. Fortunately her rather violent childhood followed by training in the TSAB taught her to handle close combat. When unarmed, she fights very dirty, as befitting a street fighter.

Originally Posted by Fuyu no Sora

Uh-huh.....

I've been absent for...what? *counts* 5 days maybe? And what do I get when I come back?

A MERE 6 PAGES OF BACKLOG!!!???!!!???!!!??!??!!!??!!!

What's going on here? The thread's completrely dying...

Anyway...

Blame the IRC, I know I do.

Originally Posted by ghazghkull

And yes, Keroko-chan is a skilled close-combat fighter, what with the fact that Keroko designed her that way :3 I'm just following what has been established so far.

*nod nod* In fact, she's RF6's only instructor with extensive hand-to-hand experience, resulting in much needed training exercises for Ginga and Subaru.

Nice portrayal too, no problems whatsoever.

[krisslanza]

Originally Posted by Keroko

*Drags himself away from playing the -now translated- Unlimited Blade Works route*

Daaaaaamn this game is awesome! Fate route ain't got nothing on UBW. More Archer! More!

Fate crack is a bit high at the moment. When browsing the stat screens I already noticed a few skills that fit just right with Keroko and Tesla. Especially Archers Mind's Eye fits Tesla like a glove, and Sabers Instinct describes Keroko precisely.

Maybe I could cobble together some status screens.... shouldn't be hard.

Oro?

Revan is the most awesome Sith Lord ever to have walked this universe. He has everything. Cool mask, awesome skills, and most importantly he even gets his own 'I am your Father' moment, which is absolutely mind boggling because:

Spoiler for HUGE spoiler for Knights of the old Republic:

You are him.

Or...

Spoiler for AMG SPOILERS:

Her if you're a female

[Keroko]

Originally Posted by krisslanza

Oro?

Dwa?

Originally Posted by krisslanza

Or...

Spoiler for AMG SPOILERS:

Her if you're a female

True, but for me Revan is sealed into my mind as a guy.

Ironically the Exile from Knights of the old Republic II is sealed into my mind as a girl.

[Kyral]

Originally Posted by LimitedEternal

Ah, sou, sou. Now that you point that out...

Ah thanks! Then it wasn't completly wasted xD

Originally Posted by Keroko

Revan is the most awesome Sith Lord ever to have walked this universe. He has everything. Cool mask, awesome skills, and most importantly he even gets his own 'I am your Father' moment, which is absolutely mind boggling because:

Spoiler for HUGE spoiler for Knights of the old Republic:

You are him.

Spoiler for Belongs to the spoiler:

Yeah, after that I switch from blue lightsaber to red and when ever I had the chance I stated that I was him. (But I still followed the light side )

Originally Posted by Keroko

True, but for me Revan is sealed into my mind as a guy.

Ironically the Exile from Knights of the old Republic II is sealed into my mind as a girl.

Well that are thier correct genders, official stated by Leland Chee from Lucasfilm.

[ghazghkull]

Originally Posted by Keroko

Keroko is mid-close ranged, prefering arial combat, but at mid range you can't avoid getting in close combat. Fortunately her rather violent childhood followed by training in the TSAB taught her to handle close combat. When unarmed, she fights very dirty, as befitting a street fighter.

*nod nod* In fact, she's RF6's only instructor with extensive hand-to-hand experience, resulting in much needed training exercises for Ginga and Subaru.

Nice portrayal too, no problems whatsoever.

I'm glad you liked my portrayal of her combat skills. I hope that I can also keep her in character later when I have her in just a conversational setting :3